Date: 07/23/2007 - 05:57 pm Title: Chp 1 Gathering Clouds
Just great. :) Especially I loved the part where Spike goes to hospital to see Joyce.
Date: 06/10/2007 - 03:19 pm Title: Chp 1 Gathering Clouds
Buffy is falling apart. She thinks that her thinking about Spike is just a way of distracting herself. But is that really what it's all about???
Loved the Joyce/Spike dialog. Joyce can see something in Spike that she trusts. I wonder what she asked him to do?
Buffys thoughts about Riley are interesting. She should be able to look to him for help and support, but she finds that she really can't do that. Finding Spike in her backyard, her first instinct is to lash out at him, she needs someone to take her anger and pain out on.
What's this all about with Spike? There's going to be a big fight and Buffy needs to stop it? Or is Spike setting something up so that Buffy will have a way to work out her anger and frustration???
Author's Response: thank you for reviewing. Hope you enjoy next chp.
Date: 06/09/2007 - 02:23 pm Title: Chp 1 Gathering Clouds
really loved the start of this, i reacon spike's organised the fight to give buffy something to do. looking forward to next update
Author's Response: hope you enjoy the next chp as well.
Date: 06/09/2007 - 09:18 am Title: Chp 1 Gathering Clouds
Good to see you're posting here too. Loved it :))
Author's Response: thank you.
Date: 06/09/2007 - 01:09 am Title: Chp 1 Gathering Clouds
OH I love it so want to know what Joyce asked Spike.
More please.
Author's Response: read chp 2 and all will be revealed!