Date: 03/03/2008 - 04:11 am Title: Preconceived notions
Alright, so here's the whole smorgasbord on what I think about this story (I promise it is all good).
Found this series about a week ago, and I have been devouring it ever since. It is utterly amazing and fantastic. I adore the character development that has taken place, how you've built relationships and fixed every irritation that I felt about what happened that season.
I love the Tara/Oz dynamic (I'd never have thought of it and it's completely charming), and Dawn's little quips are spot on. I've dissolved into giggles so many times that I've lost count.
You've made me shake my fist at the stupidity of Willow and Xander, while also offering them some humanity and chance at redemption, even if I'mnot very happy with them right now.
Onto this segment!
I never liked Riley. Ever. And he's coming off so shallow and self centered that he makes an excellent foil to Spike. Furthermore, the Council is coming?!?!?! Egads. It makes me squirm just to think of it. Although I'm glad that the 'new' slayer is being introduced. I look forward to what you do with her character. I wasn't originally sure if I liked reading about Giles and Anya getting jiggy with it, but I do think they're cute together, and I think I'm working past my horror of Giles and sex. It's odd, but when I watched the show I also dumped him in the grandfather category, although I think that had more to do with him sounding and acting exactly like Gramps. Regardless, I am glad to say that I have worked past my sexless!Giles issues. Because really, those two are just too cute.
My only criticism is your repetitive use of the phrase 'considerable attention'. It's a good way to express that the person paying attention is paying complete and utter attention to whatever, but I think other word groupings could be mixed up with it.
Otherwise, I look forward to updates with an enormous amount of glee!
Date: 02/15/2008 - 02:20 am Title: Preconceived notions
Wow...now they have the Watcher's Council and the Initiative after them. I hope it ends well for Spuffy!! Can't wait for more!!!
Hope you feel better!!!!
Date: 02/13/2008 - 10:07 pm Title: Preconceived notions
Poor Riley if he tries to get his hands on those kids love it, though I do want to see more of the Wesley/Dawn thing you have brewing.
Date: 02/13/2008 - 09:48 pm Title: Preconceived notions
Ahhhh :) Several watchers were students of Giles? Very good for them.
Gah.. Riley. Getting Buffy's babies for tests? I don't think she'll let him near her babies again.
~ Enjoyed to read the update :)
Date: 02/13/2008 - 08:01 pm Title: Preconceived notions
I love this series. Riley really needs to lay off and remove the chip from spikes head.
Date: 02/13/2008 - 04:19 pm Title: Preconceived notions
OK, I can foresee the future... one in which I'm biting my nails to the roots waiting for an update! I hope you get well soon and that you post asap, cuz I'm so worried about Riley being able to play on Buffy's insecurities that I could scream right now (which I so would if my parents weren't in the living room with me!)
Great chapter, can't wait for more (I guess that was clear, though, huh?)
xxx
Date: 01/31/2008 - 05:48 am Title: Readiness to defend
hehehe Wesley completely forgetting lunch - could so see that happening.
and the whole names thing :D
Date: 01/31/2008 - 04:57 am Title: Readiness to defend
I still love this story, and I always get excited when I see a new update from you. Can't wait to see what happens next. :D
Date: 01/30/2008 - 08:33 pm Title: Readiness to defend
Ah good, Spike is there now. I feared the trouble would start now without him being around.
Mmmm issue solved. :) Spike is very worried but Buffy is really far along in her pregnancy.
After that you had me worried about Wesley but he having a good reason not going on the phone. Important news.
The baby names? Fun :)
~ Looking forward to more. Cookies for your muse till then.
Date: 01/30/2008 - 05:16 pm Title: Readiness to defend
Still with you, and I'm so happy to see an update. Great chapter as usual. :)
Date: 01/30/2008 - 03:28 pm Title: Readiness to defend
Still with you...still hanging on every word....still totally in love with this story! As always, can't wait for more!
Date: 01/30/2008 - 06:47 am Title: Readiness to defend
Still with you and still loving this!
Please update soon! (and I hope you catch your muse and get the chance to tie him down and never let him run off again!
xxx
Date: 01/30/2008 - 05:31 am Title: Readiness to defend
*Raises hand and waves franticly*
Date: 01/30/2008 - 12:45 am Title: Readiness to defend
Keep up the good work. Thanks for updating.
If Hortense is a no, how about Phoebe or Gladys? Ha.
Date: 01/29/2008 - 11:07 pm Title: Real life, depicted in song
Awww...Spike's so protective of Buffy. I love protective Spike. Poor Connor. He's so confused. Hopefully it'll get better. Giles and Anya! So cute!!! Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 01/29/2008 - 10:58 pm Title: Readiness to defend
Very good, love the story. Can't wait for more. Didn't find the reference but can't wait till this meeting.
Date: 01/29/2008 - 10:54 pm Title: Readiness to defend
if the muse is hiding under Tam's chair, she'd be putting him to work!!!! Great chapter. Loved it.
Date: 01/28/2008 - 06:35 am Title: Information is not knowledge
Just caught up with the latest chapters. I still love this story - it's one of my favourites. I love Tara and Oz in this story and the Dawn/Wesley thang is bubbling along nicely. Please keep going - it's great
Date: 01/22/2008 - 03:06 pm Title: Information is not knowledge
I'm not even actively into this ship anymore, and I'm still reading your stories. This is excellent, and as always, you leave me wanting more. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 01/18/2008 - 08:20 am Title: Information is not knowledge
Just caught up, somehow I missed like three chapters of updates?! Anyway, I am so happy that you are sticking this out, I totally LOVE this story!
My severe and uncontrollable hatred of Riley has mounted exponentially while reading this story, especially after the whole 'Over my dead body' issue. Unless Spike's chip removal really is over Riley's dead body, cause that would be way cool.
Buffy and Tara's interaction in this past chapter was so sweet. Although she is sad that Tara is moving out, I figure it would be for the best since the house is a tad bit on the full side. Add extra baby baggage in there and it would be really cramped.
Great updates! Looks like MUSE has finally showed up in full force. I will be standing by...patiently waiting for an update.
~Serenity
Date: 01/12/2008 - 02:43 pm Title: Information is not knowledge
well, i'm still liking the story :) i think that you are a great writer and i have really loved where you have taken this series. a little worried about willow's mental health when she finds out about Tara, but yeah... i'm sure that you have the answers :)
Date: 01/10/2008 - 10:02 pm Title: Information is not knowledge
Only good thing is indeed that at last one half of the parents (one pair) is more open. Tara is better off without hers. ~ Riley? Feared that it would come to that. He is way to jealous of Spike to be helpful here.
Loved the scene with Tara telling the others. I don't think Tara will change her decision because there is really not enough room for them all there. Too bad, huh?
~ Yay for finding an update today :)
Date: 01/10/2008 - 06:03 pm Title: Information is not knowledge
Really liked this chapter and I'll keep reading this story no matter how long there will be between updates. Also, I just have to beg you to please, PLEASE keep updating your other wonderful story, Safe In My Own Skin. Yup, I'm begging here, and that's something I don't do often. *lol*
Author's Response: No, I'm not going to abandon that one, but because of the emotions wrung from me, that one is a bit harder to write. I hope you understand.
Date: 01/10/2008 - 10:42 am Title: Information is not knowledge
I am enjoying this story. I have read the other books twice and enjoyed them. Its just that sometimes when people have to wait a long time for update, a story can lose its momentum with the readers or they leave fewer reviews. I think there needs to be respect for writer and respect for readers. I understand you have problems with your muse but when there is too long for updates it can be frustrating for the reader. Carry on the good work
Date: 01/10/2008 - 08:45 am Title: Information is not knowledge
Still one of the best fic ever!! Love it!!