Hey. I've read your story so far, and I must say that the plot isn't bad, but writing.... well, let's just say that I agree with lots of the reviewers who said that you need help with it. Plus, present tense and the fact that you write mostly about what's happening at the moment, not describing the feelings and emotions behind words and actions, isn't too good. But still, you've created a nice plot. I think that if you'll work on your writing, or try to copy a style of some good fic writer, your story would only gain from it.

Author's Response:

Awe, he asked her to marry him. Buffy's reason to wait made sense (even more that they have more time then to get the other to know better. Maybe Spike should invest in his house to get more hot water ;-)

Author's Response: Yep more hot water is of the good, but then we would have prune Spike and Buffy. Very good reason, it just kind of popped in there so I went with it. Thanks