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Reviewer: SunshineSlayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2007 - 02:10 am Title: chapter 28

omg i love it! please continue asap ... its amazing.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2007 - 12:44 am Title: chapter 28

Yes they broke, great now make him grovel for the way he treated poor Buffy. Gets better and better each chapter. Great writing.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 10:31 am Title: chapter 28

must have cared something or he would not have been sitting at a Bar drinking, and what was Fred on a bout with all the time she spent with Wesley and now telling him she was taking off to England for atleast 3 months and didn't tell him soon because she didn't think she would get it,

It her and Spike were together should they not have talked about it before she applied with it being a possiblitly.

Sorry rant done, I loved the chapter.

Author's Response: sometimes we do things that aren't in our best interest to hold of the badness you know is coming if you do right. Fred knew his reaction thus they had small argument and it wasn't until is was fact that she brought it up

Reviewer: Eagle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 05:41 am Title: chapter 28

Very smooth transition from Fred back to the beginnings of Spuffy. And I like the way that you have Spike examining the reasons that he cut Buffy off three years ago. He definitely had a right to be angry but cutting her out of his life like that was a bit extreme. So it is nice to hear an explanation of why that happened.

Author's Response: thank you! I wanted people to see that yeah he might have been a jerk but here are the reasons and yeah they may be crap but they are what they are.

Reviewer: dicecanntcry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 05:39 am Title: chapter 28

yay! lovely chapter! Hope to see more soon! ;)

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