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Reviewer: Unbridled Brunette Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2008 - 04:30 am Title: Introduction in a library

You *were* glued to my story? Ouch. I guess that means you aren't anymore. But I digress.

Generally, I avoid high school stories like the plague, but any time William's name crops up I find myself compelled to read. There are so few stories about him. The anger management issue is a unique touch; most writers portray him as a complete victim. It's nice to see that he isn't one here. Interesting start.

Author's Response: I love FtTP! Actually, I should check it now and leave reviews on my second time through. I read it when I was still lurking *hangs head*. I sent you an email which I hope you got.

I'm almost embarrassed to have you look at my story, given the quality of your writing, but thanks for giving it a try.

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2007 - 11:46 am Title: Introduction in a library

*Slaps herself upside the head* why WHY!!!! did it take me so long to start this fic?

*shakes head* I'm a bad person! lol Ok, you have me hooked *flees to read the next chapter* xx

Author's Response: 'Cause I can't write a summary to save my life and it sounded boring maybe? :) Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kat.

Reviewer: Harmartia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 02:26 pm Title: Introduction in a library

I have really been enjoying this story. It is very well written and the plot exeptionally interesting, more.....please :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I got uh...waylaid by a really good fic and that will put the update back a tiny bit. I need to get back into my story, lol. If you haven't read it, Let's Get Lost by Herself is REALLY good. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2007 - 09:15 pm Title: Introduction in a library

Oh, I think I'm going to like this! :) I like William, with just the hint of Spike underneath. Can't wait to see his journey.

Author's Response: Oh, good! Yes, there's a little edge to my William :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Crazface Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2007 - 02:18 pm Title: Introduction in a library

Nice! Good start, please write more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I did. Although the chapters seem to be coming out pretty short. Oh well. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: MOa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2007 - 09:18 am Title: Introduction in a library

great

Author's Response: thanks! Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2007 - 06:32 am Title: Introduction in a library

At first I thought this would be another lame high school scene fic. *Surprise* There was confetti being thrown everywhere. It is not!! (so far).

I like that William is a complex character, it makes Buffy seem so simple minded. I expect a lot of good things from this story it looks intresting!

"that nancy rugby wannabe sport team they had here" That line made me laugh!

Author's Response: Ohhh, yeah don't jinx me. It probably is another lame high school fic! Thanks, I like my William too so far. Buffy is supposed to be shallow at this point, or apparently shallow anyway.

Hehe, good. I'm hoping if I totally botch any "British-isms" that someone will leap in and tell me. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2007 - 04:59 am Title: Introduction in a library

It's starting out lovely...please continue. we need more good wuffy out there :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I agree, I can't find a lot that's finished. Barring some of the obvious wonderful ones, like Eurydice's "Legion of True Hearts", Elsa Frohman's "Cricket from California", Unbridled Brunette's "Forward to Time Past" (who I so owe reviews, because I was glued to that - I'm a bit behind in reading it now something has happened that made me sad). Found a lot of William slash stuff, which just isn't my thing. Annnnd...I'm babbling. Again. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 10:51 pm Title: Introduction in a library

A great start! Your Wm is well rounded with education and physical abilities; really enjoyed the part about the books. Everyone needs a constant focus to stay grounded. Buffy as usual is a bit of an airhead; I hope you will let become a bit more knowing about English and life in general not just the high school groups and parties. Even though high school stories have been done before you have many opportunities to change the tempo and I wish you the best. I will be looking for an update.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, I wanted him to have a little more under his shy exterior. Buffy may surprise us yet. I hope the story will be ok, I'll try to make it as different as I can, despite the familiarity of the settings and people involved. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 10:05 pm Title: Introduction in a library

yep, that was good! :D

u're right, the plot is nothing new. but your writing is great and your description of william very well done (i loved the 'smell of the books' part). you just hinted at buffy's personality and i can really wait for more. i do hope she will have a surprise for us under the cheerleder cover, such as bookish william is a martial art champion! :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) I'm glad you liked the 'smell of books' bit. As you can probably tell, I love books!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 09:46 pm Title: Introduction in a library

loved it bunches. more soon. great job.

Author's Response: More soon. Writing now :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 09:35 pm Title: Introduction in a library

Wow, you even have a Perm? Lucky one, you must use it :-D And upload some user pics *g* If you have questions, ask. Maybe I can answers them (or have some in my LJ memories). But to your story:
Oh.. to find out that you father or husband has left you fundless that's no fun. A
I like your William. He's bookish but not helpless because of his training.
William is an unknown quantity at his new school, more watching then participating. He noticed Buffy :)
Looking forward to how the tutoring will go.

Author's Response: Yes, I do! It's a shame too, because I haven't used it a bit so at the moment it's wasted, lol. Oh thank you! I'm planning to play with it a little, I've just been more into writing stuff this past week. I was mortified to realize that my first attempts at posting something showed up on the friends page of every community I had joined. So my long post with no cut was taking up sooo much space. Made it private and that solved that for the moment. I haven't gotten or made any user pics yet. Basically all I've done is buy the darn thing hehe.

Yes, he's not being noticed much, but he's watching everything. Of course he noticed Buffy! :) Thank you very much for reviewing and offering to help a floundering LJ noob.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 09:33 pm Title: Introduction in a library

Oh this is good, more please.

Author's Response: Thank you! Working on the next chapter.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 09:18 pm Title: Introduction in a library

Wonderful beginning! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 08:29 pm Title: Introduction in a library

Great start. Beautifully written. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 08:18 pm Title: Introduction in a library

Cheerleader Buffy, hee. I like her.And William is cute. More please.

Author's Response: Yes, William is cute :) More coming. Thank you for leaving a review.

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 08:11 pm Title: Introduction in a library

yep, that was good! :D

u're right, the plot is nothing new. but your writing is great and your description of william very well done (i loved the 'smell of the books' part). you just hinted at buffy's personality and i can really wait for more. i do hope she will have a surprise for us under the cheerleder cover, such as bookish william is a martial art champion! :D

Author's Response: Yes, old and tired, but it'll be fun to write anyway. I wanted William to have a little something hidden under the surface too.

Author's Response: Oops, hit submit accidentally. Thanks for posting a review. I appreciate it :)

Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 07:47 pm Title: Introduction in a library

awww...william is so adorable..

update as soon as possible!!!!!

Author's Response: Ok! I have some written, I just have to write what goes in between, lol. Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: melissa g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 06:45 pm Title: Introduction in a library

love the story so far, the writing is so good that it makes me want to read more. cant wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: TestaALT Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 06:06 pm Title: Introduction in a library

Great opening. You have my utmost interest; this looks like it will be a very good fic. I can see both of them helping each other out exponentially and finding love as they get to know each other. I very much like the William characterization; I feel that it has room to grow, too, if you want to go that way. The Buffy characterization is also sound because she's not a bad person, just a cheerleader in the wrong (or "right") crowd. Looking forward to more. :D

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, that's the plan, mutual helping and growth. I have ideas for William, I'll have to see where they lead. Yes, Buffy's not bad, just a little shallow at present. As I said, nothing that hasn't been done before, but hopefully it'll be fun to find out where it goes. Thanks very much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Harmartia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 05:18 pm Title: Introduction in a library

Excellent writing, really enjoyed this first chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the review! Glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 05:10 pm Title: Introduction in a library

Ooh, great start! Update soon please, I can't wait to read more of this.

Author's Response: Thanks! It was short. I have most of what I think will be the third chapter written, but none of the next yet. Hate it when that happens! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 05:01 pm Title: Introduction in a library

love the beginning and how you described william

Author's Response: Thank you! I love William. Thanks for reviewing!

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