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Date: 01/25/2008 - 09:10 pm Title: A Little History

"Not a boy!" Buffy shouted, "It's William, he's my tutor!"

Without intending to, Buffy really hit below the belt with that statement. I see that she has her typical foot-in-mouth syndrome in this story. I don't think she ever did get over that on the show, lol.

Nice chapter. :)

Author's Response: No kidding. Buffy is not the queen of tact. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2007 - 12:30 pm Title: A Little History

Another good chapter...

Hmm, Spike's uncle dissapeared around the same time his Dad died... curious?!!! or am I reaching???

On to the next! Brilliant by the way hun! xx

Author's Response: Can't say either way :) Thank you!

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Date: 07/13/2007 - 04:16 am Title: A Little History

Oh, Perceptive Dawn! I like her :) I hope this puts the bug in Buffy's ear and she starts to make some headway...

Author's Response: Maybe! Yes, Dawn's perceptive, or Buffy's not, whichever way you want to look at it. Heh, Dawn is blunt with a touch of brat. Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2007 - 05:09 pm Title: A Little History

Yes, Buffy he likes you, you little moron! She needs to watch what she says around him, even though she isn't meaning to hurt his feelings, she obviously is. Can't wait for another update!

Author's Response: Yes, poor William. Buffy's clueless. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2007 - 04:05 am Title: A Little History

Another great chapter. Any chance Dawn could contract a severe case of laryngitus in the next update? lol ...just kidding but I mean really, irritating much? Still loving this. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, at least we can't really hear her. She's definitely a brat in this one, that's for sure. Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2007 - 12:54 am Title: A Little History

I'm so glad you haven't made William overly-sad; bit of a stiff upper lip sort of guy, isn't he? Please write more! :)

Author's Response: Yes, he is. He's keeping everything inside. If he were to dwell on all of his problems he'd be all weepy all the time.

I've finished "Taken" and this is the only thing I'm focused on now, so hopefully I can update frequently. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 11:25 pm Title: A Little History

Hopefully Buffy is starting to get the picture! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Buffy is a bit clueless still, but eventually she'll have to notice him, right? Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 10:58 pm Title: A Little History

so buffy's ashamed of william......that's what i gathered from her meeting him where students would go. of course she'd be that type of person but hey...it's the beginning so i'm hoping that she realizes that caring what her friends think about who she hangs out with is pointless. and not thinking of him as a boy...way to make the guy feel wanted buffy? i'm sure she didn't mean anything by it but that was kind of harsh. william seems to be a little more stable in this story than in other ones that i've read before. he obviously isn't trying to fit in. he seems a little bit more like spike without he dye job and all black attire. a little more confident.....great job. more soon.

Author's Response: Yes, she's keeping him away from her friends for now.

Buffy and words are sometimes not "mixy" either. She didn't mean it to sound as heartless as it came out. She just meant, hey, not my boyfriend, he's my tutor, but it came out a little harsher than intended.

You're right. While he's not really fitting in and perhaps he'd like to, he's not completely lacking in confidence and doesn't hate who he is. He won't let even Buffy run right over him. Well, at present anyway, not sure about the future yet.

Thank you! Thanks for the review too. I'll try to write fast :)

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 10:36 pm Title: A Little History

What a polite tutor Spike is! I like this story really. So pure and uncomplicated. Makes me remember my highschool days and my crush, lol! Hope Spike will have more courage to show more interest in Buffy. Im sure Buffy will never turn him down. He already got her attention!

More!

Author's Response: Yes, he's a sweetheart. Thank you! I love to hear that. He's very shy. At the moment, he's just happy spending time with her. I don't know, the question is does Buffy like him? Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 10:28 pm Title: A Little History

Oh I love it. more please.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 10:21 pm Title: A Little History

awww! I like them studying, and William wise-cracking about the U.S. being a baby country...though no doubt he should keep in mind the Native Americans that were here first, then all the colonies before there was a U.S....um.
Dawn is such a brat!


Author's Response: Very true! He was referring to the U.S. in its current form. Truthfully, I don't remember all that much from high school it may have changed since then (I'd hope!), but I do remember boggling at World History being so condensed. Also being embarrassed when my friend from India knew all about my country and I knew sadly little about his, beyond fairy/folk tales that I'd read, a little bit about religions and myths and some rudimentary facts.

Yes, in my other story Dawn's sweet and caring. This Dawn isn't a grown up just yet. She's still got some Buffy issues. :) Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: TestaALT Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:55 pm Title: A Little History

Another good chapter. I'm glad you haven't rushed anything; it's nice to see small progressions each chapter. I cracked up when Buffy said "He calls everyone pet," that was just hilarious. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you. No, they're still at the noticing and becoming friendly phase.

Well, he does! She thinks. Maybe... hehe. Thank you for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:54 pm Title: A Little History

More please. Pretty please. Pretend I have "the pout" on my face.

Author's Response: Haha! Who can resist "the pout"? Except apparently William, it seems. Thanks for reviewing. I'll do my best to write fast.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:29 pm Title: A Little History

I thought first Buffy didn't want to study, that she had an excuse but I was wrong. Still she doesn't want the other people to see her with William and he noticed it.
Loved the banter between Buffy and Dawn, typical siblings. Dawn has sharp eyes, noticing William's reaction. And she got Buffy a bit of thinking :)

Author's Response: No, she's serious about studying. She needs to make sure her grades come up. Yes, she's still being careful to keep him separate from her "real life" and "real friends".

haha, can you tell I have a younger sister? Dawn's not dumb and yes, she hit Buffy with the clue bat a little. Yet to be seen if it registers, though. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:12 pm Title: A Little History

Adorable!!! William seems to be very observant.

Author's Response: He is. Like Spike on the show, he's perceptive too. Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2007 - 09:01 pm Title: A Little History

Aww that was really sweet! Felt sorry for William though, when Buffy said he's just her tutor. Can't wait for the next chap. :)

Author's Response: Yes, poor William. Buffy hasn't really wondered much why he's doing this for her. Not that he's sure why either! Thank you for reviewing :)

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