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Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2007 - 01:02 pm Title: Making Peace

HEHEHE Angel is jealous! and Buffy- wont happen again *snorts* oh hell yeah it will coz you wont be able to help yourself! lol good chappie hun !

weldone! xx

Author's Response: Yeah, it was hard to type that with a straight face. Thanks, Kat! :)

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Date: 07/20/2007 - 08:37 pm Title: Making Peace

Oh my, you were busy posting.
So Dru's father owns the gym; therefore she was there.
Maybe he'll run into her again. ~ William liked the book definitely better then the clothes. :)

Author's Response: Yes, I don't know what happened. I was writing fairly quickly for a few days. Bored days at work, I suppose! That's why Dru's at the gym, yes. Well, c'mon, books ARE better than clothes... :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 05:59 am Title: Making Peace

I'm actually feeling a little bad for Drusilla, I like how you've written her.

Author's Response: Yes, at present she's just a little strange, not bad. Thanks and thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 04:43 am Title: Making Peace

Creepy Dru, hope William knows better. Also Angel is worried, Wahhaahhha (that was an evil laugh) Maybe Buffy will give him more reason to be jealous.

Author's Response: Well, he's certainly not in love at first sight with Dru. Yes, Angel's not too happy. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: TestaALT Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 04:13 pm Title: Making Peace

I liked it, especially the present scene. I thought that was nice. I'm very interested in Drusilla and Angel, who seem to be working as less menacing antagonists than normal. I can completely see Angel's perspective, and although he's perhaps a little overprotective, this _is_ Buffy we're talking about here. It'll be interesting to see how you demonize him. And Dru as a singer is a nice touch. I can just envision a "things fall apart" scene between Buffy and Spike where afterwards they both go to their prospective lovers and do something they'll regret. Good chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, just a little warm, fuzzy alllllmost spuffiness before the next chapter happens.

I don't want either of them to be purely "evil", that would be boring, though Angel has a temper... I can see where he's coming from here too, I mean, that's not an unreasonable request really.

I like Dru as a singer. I think she'd have good stage presence. I wanted her out of the whole high school scene and a little older than William.

More stuff happens next chapter, but the one after is where things really fall apart... Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Moa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 09:55 am Title: Making Peace

Wonderful....can´t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! It's coming soon! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 09:46 am Title: Making Peace

Good chapter. I do hope that Buffy sees William with Dru and feels jealous. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. Buffy will notice Drusilla soon. Thank you for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 08:31 am Title: Making Peace

Ahhh.....clueless Buffy is in for some hard lessons, me thinks.

Author's Response: Yes, she is and fairly soon too. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 03:27 am Title: Making Peace

So happy to see this updated. Another great chapter! I kind of feel sorry for Buffy in this one. She has no real friends. No Willow or Xander, just the shallow Cordettes and a slimey knuckle dragger boyfriend. It doesn't bode well for our heroine does it? Great writing though. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Buffy doesn't have very supportive friends, but she hasn't really realized that yet. More to come soon :) Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 01:42 am Title: Making Peace

Very nice! William sure is hooked with Buffy. Poor guy i bet he wanted a kiss better than the shirt or the book. Im getting impatient. When will Buffy take interest in him? If she sees Drusilla with Buffy it might open her eyes to the fact that Spike is much better than Angel.

Author's Response: He probably would like a kiss better. Poor William. Angel got the kiss this chapter. Can't comment on the rest, as I've now written most of the next couple chapters and may give stuff away, lol. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: penny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 01:19 am Title: Making Peace

That was sweet of Buffy to get William the shirt and book. And gross when Buffy told Angel that she loves him.

I'm worried about William's mother though. I hope she isn't sick or anything.

I like dru and spike. So, i don't mind for them to have their moments. I like when Spike has someone. Cause a lot of stories has Buffy with someone and Spike/William being a loner. William needs friends or a girlfriend too.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, I thought it was gross when I typed it!

I hate that too, when William or Spike has nobody. So he usually does when I write him.

Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Pam s Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 01:08 am Title: Making Peace

Ah yes, demanding jealous boyfriend. Hope the tutoring continues.

Nice that Buffy gave William a gift.

And Spike... avoiding Drusilla. Have a feelling she'll try to get her claws into him somehow. And waiting for the inevitable confrontation b/w Angel and William..

Author's Response: Yes, Buffy was feeling all warm and fuzzy towards William. Oh, we'll see more of Dru, that's for sure. The rest is answered in upcoming chapters. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2007 - 01:06 am Title: Making Peace

OH, how cute that Buffy bought hinm the Count of Monte Cristo. Though I understand the clerk with his inner eye-roll about kids today, hee. Bad jelous Angel.

Author's Response: I love Dumas. His books are so much fun, full of adventure and revenge and... good stuff! Yeah, I thought about making a candy bar reference, but refrained hehe. Don't want Buffy too dumb. Yes, Angel has noticed now.

Thanks for reviewing!

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