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Date: 07/20/2007 - 09:25 pm Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

That's bad, William's mom is very ill? A lot of things changed; Buffy seems to be drawn to Riley after Angel being with Cordelia now. And William turns into Spike. Well he had enough 'spiked' drinks (alcohol to drink) too.

Author's Response: Yes she is...William is at least called Spike now, by Dru anyway, whether he likes it or not! :) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 01:25 am Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

The fights were good, don't worry. Granted, I never fought in my life. Ah, everythings muddled. I'm curious what will happen next.

Author's Response: Thanks, yes everything's in a bit of a mess. I just posted a new chapter :) Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: OCHIT DUZON Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 12:07 am Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

Im sorry for Spike's mother. Even more for Spike. he already lost a father he is about to lose a mother now. And to add to that his secret love wont even notice him! Poor guy!

Please make Spike happy in the next chapter. He deserves a break.

Author's Response: Oh dear. Well, I've given him so many reasons to be unhappy, I'm afraid he's not very happy in the next chapter or maybe even the one after that. This is kinda the angsty bit of the story for little while. I'd tell you when the fluff is coming if I knew in which chapter it will reappear, but I'm only about a chapter and a half ahead of posting as of now and uh, he's not happy. I'm sorry :( Thank you for commenting though!

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 10:16 pm Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

Yay! I was hoping for something in the flame thrower famliy, but that works to.... Good chapter. Dru is creepy though, but at least she helped him get away from the bouncer. I hope his mother dosn't die.

Author's Response: I don't think they let flame throwers in the club with all of that flammable alcohol around. If he beats him up again, I'll try to work in some fire, but no promises, lol.

Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 09:48 pm Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

Spike was out of line with his comment about Buffy. On the other hand he can wipe the floor with Angel anytime! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Well, keep in mind she'd been going out of her way to publicly ignore and avoid him at school except when he was helping her study. Like when she had him meet her at the door nobody uses. Though she was getting much less careful about that, the hugging and the whole confronting Angel thing and she's taken flack for that. Anyway, he thought that was what she was doing again at the Bronze and he was just a little sick of everything...not to mention kind of drunk.

Yeah, I can like Angel sometimes, but he's kind of a jerk in this story, so yay to floor wipeage! Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 04:47 pm Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

Well I liked the fight part, seemed believable to me. It wasn't really a drag out action movie fight and it was part of the story that made it move forward so I don't really feel the need to be too acurate about how people fight in real life and stuff like that.

Author's Response: Oh good. Yes, I didn't draw it out blow by blow, because I lack expertise in that area. It happened and I just wanted to move the story along. Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 04:12 pm Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

Oh, Spike... Dru has you in her clutches. And now
Buffy is torn. William was a little cruel to Buffy in his drunken state. ." stuck up bitch" I found ooc, but maybe the booze talking.

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Yes, he was. It was the alcohol and also he's understandably upset about his mother. Another perceived rejection from Buffy was just the last straw. He's human, after all. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Author's Response: I'm sure it wasn't the word choice that you were probably referring to when you said it seemed ooc, but the more I tried to picture William saying it, the more I couldn't. I just changed the word, the sentiment's pretty much the same. But thanks for making me think about it.

Reviewer: Red Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 04:11 pm Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

Poor William. It must be so hard for him right now. Losing his father and now his mother with an illness. Then being new there. I can only imagine how he feels.

I must admit I didn't feel that bad for Buffy with the whole Angel thing. Angel is a jerk. So, happy that William go to hit him. That was great.

Author's Response: Yes, William's in a bad place. He's lost or losing everything important to him. Angel is a jerk, but she's still confused about how she feels about him. She can't just turn off her emotions, no matter what's happened. Me too. I enjoyed William hitting him. Violent, vengeful me. Thanks so much for the review!

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