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Reviewer: SBLuver Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 01:58 am Title: Grief

Great chapter! I love that Buffy is there to take care of William.

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2007 - 01:45 pm Title: Grief

Poor Willaim, erm I mean Spike... but, Yeay for Buffy being there for him! Loved this chap hun, on to the next! xxx

Author's Response: Thank you, yes it's good she tracked him down. It's tough leaving a review every chapter when you know the next one is just sitting there isn't it? Must...not...click...next before commenting...argh. hehe. Thank you for doing it though :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 01:11 am Title: Grief

ah, sweet Buffy. Dru is evil, with the hair-bleaching. But she isn't too nutty, which is good.

Author's Response: Dru is...bored...which is bad...if you're William. At least she's not vamp Dru. Bored vamp Dru is much more fatal. Thanks for leaving a review! :)

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Date: 07/20/2007 - 09:38 pm Title: Grief

I hope William won't forget. Though he never noticed that Dru drugged him. Only that the bleached his hair without asking.
Buffy asked Willow for help; good turn, so she was able to find William. He is devastated; I can understand why.

Author's Response: No, well, he was kind of out of it to begin with, so he wasn't noticing all that much. Yes, Willow took a chance and helped Buffy, so that was good. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 06:40 pm Title: Grief

:( Poor, beaten Spike. I do hope that Buffy realizes what she can have before Dru gets her claws into him. And that there's a reason in the near future for Spike to wipe up the ground with Angel's ass.

Author's Response: Yes, poor William. I think Buffy's starting to realize a little, at least she's realizing that she cares about him more than she would just a tutor who is helping her out with her grades. Chapter 9 is up :) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Dark Eyed Seer... to lazy to login Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 06:32 pm Title: Grief

Love it! Love it! Love it!

FIrst time back in awhile and I get this treat! I don't normally go for most all-human AUs unless they're written very, very well... like this! Yay!

I lie in wait for chapter nine.

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. The funny thing is that for the longest time I really didn't see the point in all human stories and never read them, but then I read several good ones and when I had an idea, go figure, it happened to be devoid of vampires and slayers. Thanks so much for the compliment and the review. Chapter 9 was just posted :)

Reviewer: MyBlondieBear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 04:06 pm Title: Grief

I like it, I cant wait for Buffy to realize her feelings for him and act on it.

Author's Response: Glad you like it! Eventually she will :) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 02:03 pm Title: Grief

The story is progressing very nicely that's why i am hoping that you could make your update longer next time, please.

I also hope that Dru will not be able to contaminate Spike with her evil ways. I want Spike to remain pure and dignified as he is now.

Author's Response: Wow, I'll try, but I think the next chapter is shorter, I haven't done a word count yet. This last chapter was the longest yet by about 1200 words. The chapters seem to come out short-ish and I end up posting them more frequently, rather than saving everything up and posting once a week.

Well, funny you should mention dignity, that comes into play next chapter.

Thank you for your kind comments and taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Penny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 01:40 pm Title: Grief

Look out all other drivers buffy is on the road. LOL

I really enjoyed this chapter. I like the Dru and William moments. How she kept calling him Spike even though he didn't want to. Funny. She transformed William to Spike. As long as sweet William is there then it is all good.

My heart is still breaking for William. Not wanting to leave his mom side. Poor boy. He has been through a lot.

I'm glad that willow helped Buffy trying to find out where he lives. I'm surprise she went with it so easily. Probably saw how much it meant to Buffy through her eyes. And I'm glad Buffy wants to help William. That's great.



Author's Response: No kidding! Scary thought.

Yes, Dru latches onto something and doesn't let go. William is there underneath, but he may change on the surface.

Well, Willow likes William so part of helping Buffy was because she likes him and she could see that Buffy was sincerely worried. As for Buffy, well she's changing too. William helped her and she wants to return the favor. Thank you for your reviews! I look forward to them.

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 10:25 am Title: Grief

I Love your story please write more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to. There may be actual work to do at work today. Ick. We'll see.

Reviewer: area Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 10:20 am Title: Grief

I'm quite glad that it's Buffy who is with William and not Dru. She can be fun, but not as a love interest :-)

Poor William. Losing his parents... I hope he doesn't do anything (any more) drastic when his mum passes.

Author's Response: Ummmm....no comment just yet. Glad you think she's fun, though.

Yeah :(

Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 08:37 am Title: Grief

So it is Dru that bleaches his hair and gives him the name of Spike.. at his disdain. And now with the classic eyebrow injury.

I know I used "Spike" in the last chapter review and then realized it hadn' t been introduced .. just William.

And yeah for Buffy.. taking care of him and getting home in one piece.

Enjoyed.

Author's Response: Yes, Dru's far more than just a motivating factor in this one. She's wielding the bleach.

I've been worried the whole story that I'd type Spike when I meant William :)

Yes, thank goodness the Desoto was an automatic. I had to look that up to see if it was possible. I was like, huh, how am I going to get Buffy to drive him if it's stick. That should be interesting. Dunno about the show Desoto, but at least they came with automatic....

Thanks for reviewing! Glad you're still enjoying it.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 06:36 am Title: Grief

Yeah, you have to have a death wish not to care how Buffy drives!

Author's Response: No kidding! Thanks for commenting :)

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 04:01 am Title: Grief

Boy, all kinds of shit has gone down in the last two chapters. And I need MORE! Interesting how you did the William to Spike switch-a-roo. Nice idea on Buffy's part; can't wait to see the awkwardness to follow.

Author's Response: Yes, it has! Haha, ok, more will be coming. ,br />
Well, I couldn't see this William going bleach blond on his own. So I wondered what would happen if you put a bored Dru and Faith, some leftovers from Oz's hair experiments and a thoroughly unconscious William in the same room. Apparently, Spike happens. Kinda :)

Oh and there will be awkwardness, of that you can be sure. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Pamela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 03:39 am Title: Grief

Sweet story with good characterization and nice twists and turns.



Author's Response: Thank you! Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment :)

Reviewer: Maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 02:50 am Title: Grief

I love Dru! She is my favorite character in this story:) I also like the direction you are taking William.

:)

Author's Response: Haha! I'm not sure if that's good. Maybe that means William and Buffy aren't that interesting! I love Dru too. She's not boring, at least, although she may be dangerous to be around when she's bored :) Thanks for reviewing!

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