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Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2007 - 03:39 pm Title: An Inappropriate Boy

I hope Joyce goes after Parker with the sharp end of an ax. i would LOVE to see how that played out. Great update, I hope they both start acting maturely some time soon.

Author's Response: Yeah, if only you could reasonably do that in real life. Too bad he's not a vampire. They're fair game for axes 'n stuff. Thanks for reviewing :)

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Date: 08/12/2007 - 11:01 pm Title: An Inappropriate Boy

Sisterly bonding? Cute :)
Good that Buffy was warned (even her mother did) and she was careful enough to notice the spiked drink. And the lessons paid off already :) Parker deserved it. ~ I wonder if Angel really told or if Parker made it up.

Author's Response: Yes, I have a soft spot for Dawn. Well, when she isn't being thoroughly obnoxious. Not bad huh, get a lesson, use the knowledge later in the day. Good payoff! Buffy wonders the same thing! :) Thanks for reviewing, Cordy!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2007 - 03:26 pm Title: An Inappropriate Boy

This was another vivid, entertaining chapter. I enjoyed the bonding with Dawn. You're building believable connections between all the characters, and their sibling push and pull feels real.

Buffy's reaction to Parker was in character. She's strong willed and level headed in this story, and I'm enjoying it immensely.

Author's Response: Thank you. Oh good, I was worried people wouldn't find Buffy confiding in Dawn to be very believable, but she really has nobody else to tell about William and she and Dawn were, as you said, bonding at the time.

Oh good! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks so much for reviewing :)

Reviewer: zyromos Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2007 - 05:55 am Title: An Inappropriate Boy

Love the story so far. Keep up the great writing.

Author's Response: Thanks! I think it's going to be updated about once a week, but if I get time and write more I'll post more frequently. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: MOa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2007 - 04:16 am Title: An Inappropriate Boy

Great

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2007 - 04:00 am Title: An Inappropriate Boy

Good she got out of that unscathed, and was smart enough not to drink that coke.

Author's Response: Right, I don't know if it was entirely smarts on her part that kept her from the drink, since Parker had been nice up to that point. I think her dislike of alcohol saved her here. But it's a good thing something did, because he seemed awfully sure she'd be more receptive when the drink was gone! Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2007 - 02:11 am Title: An Inappropriate Boy

Ok, I was anticipating a really bad Parker experience (like he drives her to an out-of-away place, or tries something in the car; even a roofie), so I'm glad it wasn't too bad. I was thinking William would save her, but it was good how she got out of the situation. Alos, I like that she confided in Dawn.

Author's Response: Well, I think there may have been something in the diet coke :) His attitude was awfully different when he came back and saw it gone. Buffy had to save herself here, I think. I'm glad you liked the Dawn part, I was nervous about it as she's been a bit of a brat in this story at times! Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2007 - 12:48 am Title: An Inappropriate Boy

I really liked Buffy's view on things, and that you didn't jump into the ol' "William rescues her" that some other author's do (when Parker went to cope a feel).

You're a very prolific and you seem to have their feelings in order (or, out of order, depending on the sitch). Keep up, you're doing so well!

:)

Author's Response: No, this time Buffy needed to save herself. I want her to be strong like she is on the show only minus the superpowers. Thanks for the encouragement and for leaving a review, I appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2007 - 12:08 am Title: An Inappropriate Boy

Parker deserved what he got! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Yes he did! I'll try to get some more written soon. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2007 - 09:57 pm Title: An Inappropriate Boy

Another good chapter. Parker the sleaze got his!!! It's great that you've now got someone helping with the Self Defence moves.I'm really enjoying that part of it.
Won't be near a computor for next two weeks cos of Hols. Hope I come back to lots of Spuffyness!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, Caia was a huge help, thank goodness. Have a lovely holiday and I'll try to have some Spuffyness for you when you get back! They're getting there anyway...lol. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2007 - 08:33 pm Title: An Inappropriate Boy

Have just started reading this from the beginning and am really enjoying its ups and downs. Thank God Joyce in on Buffy's side regarding creepy Parker and way to go Buffy. She seems to have her head screwed on - no unwanted alcohol and she's picked up what Spike's shown her. Although how she managed to keep her mind on learning when he's around I'm not sure!! Really looking forward to more of this story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Yes, Joyce is the sane parent, lol. Well, I figured Buffy's a lightweight (seriously), so even without the enchanted beer experience she'd probably find out that she and alcohol aren't mixy pretty darn quickly. I know! Who could retain anything from a lesson with Spike? Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2007 - 06:52 pm Title: An Inappropriate Boy

You're very welcome, and... good job, Buffy! Proud of her in this one, she was smart and quick-thinking... and showed just the right level of competence for one lesson, I think. Brava to you both.

Author's Response: Thanks again, your email was very helpful. I was little nervous putting in the move she did because I hadn't specifically shown it, but I did mention that he demonstrated things to her, so I think it's ok. I'm glad you think it jibes with her level of competence (which is pretty nil, lol). Thanks for reviewing too!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2007 - 05:50 pm Title: An Inappropriate Boy

Thought it might be Spike to the rescue again.. but glad Buffy was able to use a few of those defense moves he taught her. Broken wrist and all,

Enjoyed.

Author's Response: Not this time, no. Buffy needs to stand up for herself, after all. William can't follow here around all the time. He's not even following her at all at this point, hehe. Besides, I wanted her to be strong, like she is in the show. (Though without the superpowers of course) Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2007 - 05:46 pm Title: An Inappropriate Boy

Brilliant! I love the way this storey is going, and I'm glad that Buffy discovered Parker's less savoury side before succumbing to his so-called charms. Yay Buffy!*

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like how it's progressing. Well, Parker's slimy side was bound to show up. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2007 - 05:43 pm Title: An Inappropriate Boy

Stupid Parker got what he deserved, thank god. Really liked the update, keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: Yes, he did! Thanks and thanks for reviewing! :)

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