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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 10:39 pm Title: Out to Lunch

This was another tight, entertaining chapter. Buffy and Drusilla vying for a completely oblivious William is a lot of fun, as is the Dawn and Buffy banter. Dawn being the wiser sister because "I watch soap operas. They tend to have a lot of people like you on them. Clueless. Miserable. You know..." made me laugh out loud. Buffy and William are a matched pair and it's charming.

Sorry I missed this chapter earlier.

Author's Response: Yes, well, she's not that experienced in real situations, but those soaps are very educational, I'm sure. (Even though, I think in canon Dawn was disgusted at Joyce and Spike's Passions fascination. I kinda changed that for this story.) Glad you liked it . Thanks for reviewing every chapter; it's always fun to see what you think.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2008 - 11:24 pm Title: Out to Lunch

Love how both Buffy and William both think they don't have a chance with the other. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yes, both so unsure of themselves. Thanks very much for the review :)

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Date: 01/20/2008 - 10:37 am Title: Out to Lunch

Uh-huh.... Buffy was too slow to react when Dru asked William. Dawn is right, maybe Buffy should try to ask William. He's too shy.
Uncle Ethan? I hope that's a good thing he's there now.

Author's Response: Probably wasn't too much she could do after Dru asked. It was the before she could've changed. Oh well. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 12:31 am Title: Out to Lunch

Dawn is cute. And it would be a pretty short story if she was right.

Author's Response: Well, some would say it's dragging on too long as it is, I'm sure! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 03:17 am Title: Out to Lunch

Dawn is very very smart. Buffy and William makes things way too hard! LOL

Author's Response: But she flunked at spying this chapter. :) They do make things difficult don't they? Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 02:45 am Title: Out to Lunch

I'm not sure if I have reviewed this story yet, but I have been following and enjoying it for a while. You do a great job with pacing and character development.

I'm always happy to see an update.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I really appreciate it. It's always nice to get feedback. I'm glad you're still reading despite my horrible update lags. :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 02:01 am Title: Out to Lunch

Enjoyed the update...

Poor Dawn.. worked so hard... clueless... sister indeed..



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're still reading. Yes, all that hard work for so little gain! She's a bit frustrated with Buffy at the moment. Thanks for reviewing. :)

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