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Reviewer: mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2007 - 06:18 am Title: A Way To Be There

Claps hands in glee! Yah Buffy's followed him to the Gym which I was hoping she would. With her wrist out of action I can't see there are many pieces of equipment she'd be able to use? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, several people predicted it (well, what else could happen, I suppose, have them apart for the whole story? Already did that in my other one). Well, she can use free weights, and leg machines and the treadmill and...we'll have to see. I'm glad you're still enjoying it. Thanks for leaving a review! :)

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2007 - 05:27 am Title: A Way To Be There

you are AMAZING; please keep it coming, it's wonderful!! (also liking the geeky yet hot spike in this ;)

Author's Response: LOL, hardly, but thank you for the compliment :) I'm glad you're liking the story and this Spike. Thanks very much for reviewing!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2007 - 06:48 pm Title: A Way To Be There

Will, you're really being a dummy.

Ah, the shallow stuff isn't working for her anymore, but she hasn't quite figured it out, yet. Time to embrace your brain, Buff.

Author's Response: A little bit, yeah.

No, well, who can go back to shallow after hanging out with a guy who can talk about interesting topics? Yes, she needs to actually use her brain, that'd be good. However, at least she's being persistent. Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Pam s Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2007 - 06:18 pm Title: A Way To Be There

Spike.. clueless. Guess Buffy might have to literally hit him over the head...

And I am sure Mr. Crawford will make Spike her personal trainer. And Drusilla?

Enjoying.

Author's Response: LOL. Yeah, she probably will have to do that.

You'll have to find out! Dru will be back, next chapter, I believe. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2007 - 06:16 pm Title: A Way To Be There

Poor William, he just can't see that Buffy wants to be his friend. Great chapter, looking forward to the next! :)

Author's Response: No, he's still a bit blind on that. Thank you and thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2007 - 05:31 pm Title: A Way To Be There

Wow, I have to say William really is dense I'll give him some slack considering what's going on, but he needs to ease off just a bit and at least try to be a friend. Loved the chapter though! It's great seeing Buffy pursue the reluctant hero!

Author's Response: Thanks, yes, she's pursuing him right now, though I still don't think she's thought about why in depth :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2007 - 04:56 pm Title: A Way To Be There

Poor William. He really doesn't have a clue. I hope you get Buffy to explain why she wants to be friends with him. I don't think he is going to get it if Buffy doesn't actually tell him.

Great of Jenny to be concern with William doing too much. But keeping busy is how some people deal with everything that is going bad in their life.

Author's Response: Oh, I don't know. At some point he'll probably get it :)

Yes, keeping busy can be a good way to cope. Thanks so much for reviewing :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 09:26 pm Title: Daddy

For Buffy, trying to convince William you want to be his friend is like banging her head against the wall! Hope he eventually sees whats right in front of him. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: LOL. Well, she's only been trying a little while. I'm sure he'll see it eventually. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 07:58 pm Title: Daddy

Looks like you're way further here than you are on LJ. Though I like the communication possibilities available on LJ better, I think I'm going to be reviewing here. At least as long as it takes for you to catch up there :)

Great chapter, btw

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, sorry. I'm new to LJ and I just don't want to inundate Spuffy Fantasy when I go through a quick bunch of chapters as I have been. I feel as though that's rude. Here I don't think anyone minds if I post somewhat rapidly. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 03:34 pm Title: Life, Continued

William asking Dru for help and avoiding Buffy after his "shameful" breakdown is certainly worrisome, but you ended the chapter on a more hopeful note.

This was a bleak, heartfelt passage: " He hoped that by staying busy himself, perhaps tomorrow it wouldn't feel so strange that everything was carrying on, much as usual, just as though his life hadn't fallen apart…again. Maybe tomorrow he wouldn't feel like hiding under the covers and pleading for a timeout from life. It wasn't fair that everything around him should continue normally, the pace not slackening a beat for the lack of his mother. 'It's like she doesn't matter,' he thought sadly, 'no one notices her missing but Jenny and me. Nothing stops.' He closed his eyes." I hope William opnes up to Buffy, she's certainly willing to be a shoulder to lean on.

Author's Response: Yes, he's still mortified from the condition she saw him in, so not so much wanting to see her right now. But, of course, he will...

It's one of the oddest feelings when someone is missing from daily life and stuff just ...goes on. It doesn't feel right. That poem pretty much covers it for me.

Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Harmartia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 02:26 pm Title: Introduction in a library

I have really been enjoying this story. It is very well written and the plot exeptionally interesting, more.....please :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I got uh...waylaid by a really good fic and that will put the update back a tiny bit. I need to get back into my story, lol. If you haven't read it, Let's Get Lost by Herself is REALLY good. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 10:59 am Title: Daddy

:( sad chapter ending but still an awesome chapter:) cant wait for the next update:):)

Author's Response: A little sad, yes, but they can't be apart for long, right? :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MOa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 07:07 am Title: Daddy

good chapter.

keep on writing

MOa from Germany

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to write today, depending on work :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 03:14 am Title: Daddy

He still doesn't believe Buffy cares....

Hank's being a real ass. Eww, Parker...

Author's Response: No, he doesn't, not really. Hank is so rarely not an ass. I'm trying to think of a single story where he comes off well and can't. Well, here he'll be playing the role of part time overbearing father and part time absent one.

I know. I don't even know how I'm going to write that date. Ick. Slimy. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 01:56 am Title: Daddy

poor Buffy. Maybe her dad means well but maybe he's just a jerk. And William brushing her off.

Author's Response: Yeah...I think he's just a jerk. Mostly. As you said, poor Buffy. Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 01:20 am Title: Pride

William asleep in the shower, hee. Good that William mentions that Buffy doesn't talk to him in school or know stuff about him, though really he shouldn't have said it, being a gentleman. But like you say, wacky form sleep deprivation. Hopefully Buffy will be more involved wit him.

Author's Response: Yes, it's good that he said it. At least it's out there now. He's felt that way since she told him to pick her up at that less used school entrance so... Yes, she will - at some point :) Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 01:11 am Title: Grief

ah, sweet Buffy. Dru is evil, with the hair-bleaching. But she isn't too nutty, which is good.

Author's Response: Dru is...bored...which is bad...if you're William. At least she's not vamp Dru. Bored vamp Dru is much more fatal. Thanks for leaving a review! :)

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2007 - 01:07 am Title: Daddy

Spike is evasive and Buffy is trying her best to get close to him. When will they be together? I think its up to Buffy to show Spike that she is interested in more than tutoring from him.

Nice chapter!

Author's Response: I think so too! Thank you and thanks for leaving a review! :)

Reviewer: Maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 11:57 pm Title: Daddy

I really - REALLY - like where you're going with this, and with Buffy's inability to tell him why she wants him to stick around, that it's not about studying anymore. Yeay! Go you! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like how it's shaping up. It'll meander, it'll mosey, but it'll end up spuffy at some point. Thanks for the encouragement! :)

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 10:53 pm Title: Daddy

What a horrid unfeeling man Dru's father seems to be. Ditto Buffy's father. Joyce should have left him years ago and married Rupert. I do hope Buffy goes to the Gym and works out.

Author's Response: Hmmm, I have written some bad fathers into this fic, haven't I - one dies after gambling his family into poverty, one pays no attention to his daughter and one wants to run his daughter's life. Ummmm...the father figure of Giles is nice though...

Clearly my future plotline is super predictable and transparent. Well, hopefully it'll be ok anyway!

Thanks very much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 10:37 pm Title: Daddy

It's good seeing Buffy as the caring one and Spike as the one without a clue :P

Author's Response: haha. Well, without a clue is a little harsh maybe, he does have quite a bit else on his mind. But yes, it's nice to have a caring Buffy for once. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 08:31 pm Title: Daddy

I think Buffy will think of the right revenge for Dawn telling that ;-)
Good to see Buffy 'waking up' (when Claire complained about the food). Buffy can be glad too that Joyce is on her side; when it comes to Hank he seems to be able to sell her out. ~ The thing with William (that he won't see her again) doesn't help either. He really don't trust her a bit to want to help.

Author's Response: Haha, maybe she will. Yes, it's good that Buffy has Joyce in her corner, since her father is so unpleasant. William will see her again, no worries. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 07:51 pm Title: Daddy

I just read this story for the first time - I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Thought it was funny when Dru just bleached his hair like that - shows her nuttyness in an amusing light. I think the way you're showing Williams confusion and pain is well written. Would have preferred more sparks and 'moments' between William and Buffy , not just him avoiding her all the time - but I'm an optimist and I hope they will come... : )
Again I really loved this wonderful fic.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. There will be more William and Buffy interaction :) Thanks so much for taking the time to review, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 07:04 pm Title: Daddy

That was a bit sad. But still very good, I can't wait for the next update. Poor Buffy...

Author's Response: Yes, still a little sad all around. Glad you're still reading :) Next update depends on how boring work is tomorrow. I'm hoping for really boring. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pam s Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 06:46 pm Title: Daddy

Stop worrying about the length of your chapters.. some authors don't update for a month sometimes.

As far as Dru, almost feel sorry for her. Tries to show off for Daddy and he could care less.

And Buffy, trying so hard to get William's attention. Maybe she can start working out at the gym. Like Dawn would help her William !!

Knowing Parker is going to try something at the Bronze and William will have to protect her again.

And last but not least, Giles has a relationship with Buffy's mother. Huh.. Gotta a lot of twists and turns going on. Like it.

Enjoying..

Author's Response: I know, I just don't want updates to disappoint.

Yes, she just wants a little attention that she's not likely to get.

OH MY GOD. Are you psychic? Quit that! lol. Yeah, like Dawn's going to help Buffy out anytime soon.

Yeah, she has to get through the Parker date. Ick. Rotten Hank.

Well, didn't you wonder why she was so familiar with the librarian? hehe. Yes, Giles has been a family friend for a long time. Though I imagine he's not fond of Hank.

Thanks, as always, for reviewing! :)

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