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Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 06:26 pm Title: Daddy

I would have never guess that Dru and her father don't have a good relationship. Poor Dru.

I think William doesn't really realize that Buffy wants to be his friend. I still think he just thinks that they are only talking because of him helping her with his work. I feel bad for Buffy because she wants to be his friend. But she needs to tell him how she feels. Cause I don't think William will get the memo if Buffy didn't tell him that she wants to be real friends.

Author's Response: Yes, poor Dru. She doesn't get much attention from him.

Yes, he does think that. Plus he has so much other stuff to think about. Buffy will have to show him, I suppose :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MOa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 07:09 am Title: Life, Continued

Just liked it!


Author's Response: Thank you! Thanks for telling me so!

Reviewer: Kiska12 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 02:14 am Title: Life, Continued

Very nice story. Please continue!

Author's Response: Thanks! If I get a chance to write today, I should have another chapter up soon. Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: mona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2007 - 02:06 am Title: Life, Continued

I love this story! I like how that there are several developments in each chapter but they are told with care and there's no sense of rush. I was intrigued and read ten chapters at once.

I hope William gets a little rest. And I'm glad the flower shop lady was so nice!


Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you don't think I'm rushing the story too much. Wow, another person who read all the chapters at once. Cool.

Yes, people can be unexpectedly kind when you're feeling bad sometimes. I just had William meet one of them.

Thanks for much for reviewing!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2007 - 11:36 pm Title: Life, Continued

Glad William noticed that Buffy noticed he was gone. That sounds crazy, but you know what I mean. Love that poem; I remember bawling my eyes out when John Hannah recited it in Four Weddings. Can't wait for your next installment.

Author's Response: I know what you mean. Oh yeah, that was so sad in Four Weddings.

I love the poem too. Thanks for leaving a review, I appreciate it :)

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2007 - 09:15 pm Title: Life, Continued

Sat here & read all 10 chapters in one sitting. Really love what you've written thus far. Lookin forward to reading more soon.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Wow, that's pretty cool that you read it in one sitting. Glad you're enjoying it and thank you for leaving a review :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2007 - 07:55 pm Title: Life, Continued

The joys of WIPs... when I read the Spike/other warnings I always fear the worst to happen. *sigh* (sorry, I'm in a not so good mood)
William was lucky when he was buying flowers. Anne liked them but he has to go back to school anyway ;-) Yeah, the hospital bills will be big, extra money wouldn't be bad.
Seems at the moment William will do his best to avoid Buffy. (Even he cherished the thought that she missed her.) That's an haunting poem. I've read it before because somebody posted it as a reminder that a friend had died.

Author's Response: I know how you hate Spike/Other and I'm sorry. No problem, if that's not what you like to read, I totally understand. I think I put it in the beginning warnings, I'll have to double check. Anyway, if you do continue reading, don't lose hope for spuffy :) I hope something cheers you up soon. (see Ratatouille when it comes out near you, that'll do it! Fantastic movie.) Quick, read some fluff! That helps sometimes!

Yes, it's an incredibly haunting poem. Thanks for reviewing, even if you don't like recent developments.

Reviewer: Pam s Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2007 - 06:49 pm Title: Life, Continued

We appreciate any part of the story you write.

Poor William.. and another reason for Dru to get next to him. Guess if she helps him get a job..ok. See that life is pulling Buffy and Spike in different directions. Buffy will have to be the one to...

Enjoying

Author's Response: Thanks, I feel bad that the chapters keep coming out short, but most of the time I have set things I want to happen in them so...

Yes, they are being pulled in different directions, but don't lose hope :) Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Penny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2007 - 05:53 pm Title: Life, Continued

Poor William. That boy is going through so much. With losing his father and now his mother being sick. It doesn't look well for his mother. I hope she gets better but something tells me you are going to make that a sad ending for William and his mother. Spending his little money on flowers for his mother was so sweet.

Calling Dru and asking for a job was a good idea. William is the type of guy who has to do something. And if money is tight he knows he has to work. Dru is an odd one, indeed.

I like how Willow was asking Buffy why she cared so much about William. It was like Willow wanting to see was Buffy intentions were for William. Willow looking out for William. Love it.

I hope William talks to Buffy soon. Cause I don't want Buffy to think that William doesn't want to talk to her.

it was perfect. I just got on this site and look I saw this story on top. One of my favorites. I usually don't leave such long reviews with other stories but I can't help it with this one. Keep up the wonderful work.

Author's Response: Well, I love your long reviews! It's especially fun to see the same people reading each chapter and to find out what they think.

William is resourceful and yes, he needs to be doing something.

Willow is still a little confused at Buffy's interest, yes.

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it and flattered you consider it a favorite. I'll keep writing!


Author's Response: PS: I have my baby on my lap and am trying to keep him from adding his comments while typing one handed, so pardon the relative brevity!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2007 - 12:52 pm Title: Pride

I just got back from a weeks vacation and found 6 new chaps on this fic. Yaay! Really liked all of them, but now I want more. :) Poor William...

Author's Response: Haha. Yes, I don't know what happened there. I went on a writing and posting spree. I'm glad you liked them. I'm almost done with the next couple chapters, should be another tonight, maybe. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 09:51 pm Title: Pride

Buffy is starting to see Spike (William) :) But William hasn't forgotten that Buffy didn't want to be seen with him. If she really wants to be his friends she'll have to prove it. Yeah, not sleeping can make your grumpy. ~ All caught up now; looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Exactly,. Before this, she hasn't really proven she's a good friend to him. Not sleeping makes me a total zombie! Glad you're enjoying it and not put off too much by the Dru parts yet. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 09:38 pm Title: Grief

I hope William won't forget. Though he never noticed that Dru drugged him. Only that the bleached his hair without asking.
Buffy asked Willow for help; good turn, so she was able to find William. He is devastated; I can understand why.

Author's Response: No, well, he was kind of out of it to begin with, so he wasn't noticing all that much. Yes, Willow took a chance and helped Buffy, so that was good. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 09:25 pm Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

That's bad, William's mom is very ill? A lot of things changed; Buffy seems to be drawn to Riley after Angel being with Cordelia now. And William turns into Spike. Well he had enough 'spiked' drinks (alcohol to drink) too.

Author's Response: Yes she is...William is at least called Spike now, by Dru anyway, whether he likes it or not! :) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 09:10 pm Title: Canary in Winter

Loved Buffy stand up for William (even if he would be able to do it himself. And like you can see (breaking her wrist, the way Angel treated Buffy) he isn't good for him. She's only good as long as she does something that pleases him.

Author's Response: Angel certainly was angry she stood up to him. She couldn't really stay with him after he hurt her. Thanks for your comments :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 08:37 pm Title: Making Peace

Oh my, you were busy posting.
So Dru's father owns the gym; therefore she was there.
Maybe he'll run into her again. ~ William liked the book definitely better then the clothes. :)

Author's Response: Yes, I don't know what happened. I was writing fairly quickly for a few days. Bored days at work, I suppose! That's why Dru's at the gym, yes. Well, c'mon, books ARE better than clothes... :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 01:03 pm Title: Pride

I am really enjoying this entertaining, emotional story. The rich details and sharp dialogue are painting a vivid picture of Buffy and William's lives. Buffy's growing attraction in the face of William's grief is both funny and awkward. William's reaction to this helpful Buffy was in character. She hasn't really tried to be a friend, and he's feeling vulnerable and embarrassed as well as bone weary.

I loved this turn of phrase: " William thought these were quite possibly some of the worst and also most confusing few days he'd ever had, though the number of those was growing rapidly. Grabbing a pair of jeans, he pulled them on. He wished he could knit together the tattered shreds of his lost dignity and don it as easily." Poor thing.

I'm looking forward to more of this.

Author's Response: What a lovely, thoughtful review! Thank you very much. Oh good, I'm glad you felt William was in character. He's behaving a bit differently than he has up until now, but it's the additional stress that's causing the changes.

I'm glad you're enjoying it. I sat down and got a little more done, I hope to have another update this weekend. Thanks again for commenting!

Reviewer: Maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 03:47 am Title: Pride

I'm confused...am I supposed to be mad at William? All I feel is empathy for the poor guy. And I really wanna hug Buffy right now. Still love Dru, though.

:)

Author's Response: Oh no, not at all. I was worried that people would be upset that he didn't just fall into Buffy's arms. I was worried that what he said about not being friends might get people annoyed at him too. But I thought it was right for him to say it, because they haven't really been friends yet. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 02:24 am Title: Pride

Can't wait to see what happens next please write more soon! Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think it may be busy at work today, but I'll try to get another chapter up this weekend. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 12:50 am Title: Pride

I love this story and this was a great update. Poor William is feeling so awful and I admire Buffy for trying to take care of him and for caring enough to be his punching bag for a few minutes. William is so exhausted he simply doesn't have any filter and no reason to hold back. It was good for him to say those things and good for her to hear them. Hopefully after some sleep they can have more of a decent conversation.
And as another reviewer said...hopefully this can be the start of their romance!

Author's Response: Yeah, no filter is a bad thing. But what he said was pretty true. Can't say anything about the romance part :) Thanks for reviewing! Glad you're liking the story.

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2007 - 12:04 am Title: Pride

I totally understand Spike's actions. He's stressed out and depressed. I admire Buffy for taking care of him. But if i were her i would stay in his bedroom to see more !! LOL!

Hope this will be the start of their romance. Now that she have seen his naked self, surely she cant resist him now!!!

Author's Response: LOL. I think a lot of people would have stayed longer. :) Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 10:51 pm Title: Pride

Yeah, he's entitled to be grumpy, with all that's gone on recently.

Author's Response: I think so too. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Penny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 10:09 pm Title: Pride

Why would anybody be mad at William for. I can understand why he would question Buffy helping him and being there. And it is true they are not really friends. He helps her with her homework and that is it.

Anyways, good chapter. I hope better days are in the future for sweet William and Buffy.

Author's Response: Oh good, it sounds like it came out the way I meant it to then.

Thanks for reviewing. There will be better days ahead, just don't know when at the moment. I thought of some more stuff on my commute home, maybe a couple or three chapters worth, so now I just need to get some uninterrupted writing time so I can figure out what goes where.

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 09:51 pm Title: Pride

Just caught up with the last three updates. This story is shaping up very nicely. I love the way you had Dru create the Spike look! I love the way Buffy is trying to take care of William. Please update soon I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks! Ummm...I can't wait to find out what happens next either, lol. Hopefully, I'll have a little time to sit down and flesh out my notes tonight. That usually helps me get unstuck. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 09:05 pm Title: Pride

Thanks for giving us updates. I loved the awkwardness in this chapter and am not mad at William/Spike at all. This is all a weird situation. And I'm sure there will be some more--no problems with that. I just hope he realizes Dru isn't a real friend either, at least I assume she won't be. I could be wrong.

Author's Response: You're welcome. Good, I'm glad you didn't mind it. That was bound to be awkward, it was a really strange situation. Can't comment on Dru at the moment. Mostly because I haven't actually written anything past this point, although I have some notes so anything could still happen/change. Thanks so much for continuing to read and give feedback! It's encouraging.

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 07:39 pm Title: Pride

Poor William. Everything is so hard for him right now and made worse by the fact that he seems to be one of those guys who resents it when he's deeply attracted to a girl and that translates into being angry with her all the time. Poor Buffy with her good heart, can't seem to fathom what she's done to deserve his anger. So sad. Hope they can connect on some level soon. Beautifully and sensitively written as always. Can't wait for the next update.




Author's Response: Oh, this is one of the reasons why it's so interesting to get reviews, getting to see what other people think the characters are motivated by etc. See, I don't think William is angry at Buffy all the time because he's attracted to her. I think he's had specific reasons each time he's been angry. Seeing her with Angel put him in a bad mood (not Buffy's fault); what he perceived as her ignoring him at the Bronze on top of all the other times she didn't go out of her way to talk to him in public and also seeing her dancing with Riley; now, he's got those things in the back of his mind, plus she's seen him at his very worst, and he's usually pretty dignified and reserved so that REALLY gets to him. Granted the last one isn't her fault at all and the lack of sleep is what makes him raw enough to mention it.

Anyway, it's just really interesting for me to get a different take on things, so I thought I'd tell you mine. Thanks for reviewing and for the wonderful compliment!

Next update may take a little while. I wrote the last few in quick succession and now...I have nothing at the moment hehe.

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