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Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 07:18 pm Title: Pride

Enjoyed.

Glad they talked about being friends.. even though it was more of a fight.

Author's Response: Yes, it was. Not too much of a shouting match though. William is just pretty tired and resigned at the moment and stating what he thinks. Thanks for reviewing :)

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Date: 07/19/2007 - 06:40 pm Title: Grief

:( Poor, beaten Spike. I do hope that Buffy realizes what she can have before Dru gets her claws into him. And that there's a reason in the near future for Spike to wipe up the ground with Angel's ass.

Author's Response: Yes, poor William. I think Buffy's starting to realize a little, at least she's realizing that she cares about him more than she would just a tutor who is helping her out with her grades. Chapter 9 is up :) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 06:37 pm Title: All Bad-moody

Me thinks Cordy is covering something with the whole Harmony thing. And Buffy needs to not be so concerned with everyone else.

Author's Response: Wow, you are goooood. Yes, Buffy needs to stop thinking so much about what everyone thinks of her and start doing what she really wants to do. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Dark Eyed Seer... to lazy to login Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 06:32 pm Title: Grief

Love it! Love it! Love it!

FIrst time back in awhile and I get this treat! I don't normally go for most all-human AUs unless they're written very, very well... like this! Yay!

I lie in wait for chapter nine.

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. The funny thing is that for the longest time I really didn't see the point in all human stories and never read them, but then I read several good ones and when I had an idea, go figure, it happened to be devoid of vampires and slayers. Thanks so much for the compliment and the review. Chapter 9 was just posted :)

Reviewer: MyBlondieBear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 04:06 pm Title: Grief

I like it, I cant wait for Buffy to realize her feelings for him and act on it.

Author's Response: Glad you like it! Eventually she will :) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 02:03 pm Title: Grief

The story is progressing very nicely that's why i am hoping that you could make your update longer next time, please.

I also hope that Dru will not be able to contaminate Spike with her evil ways. I want Spike to remain pure and dignified as he is now.

Author's Response: Wow, I'll try, but I think the next chapter is shorter, I haven't done a word count yet. This last chapter was the longest yet by about 1200 words. The chapters seem to come out short-ish and I end up posting them more frequently, rather than saving everything up and posting once a week.

Well, funny you should mention dignity, that comes into play next chapter.

Thank you for your kind comments and taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Penny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 01:40 pm Title: Grief

Look out all other drivers buffy is on the road. LOL

I really enjoyed this chapter. I like the Dru and William moments. How she kept calling him Spike even though he didn't want to. Funny. She transformed William to Spike. As long as sweet William is there then it is all good.

My heart is still breaking for William. Not wanting to leave his mom side. Poor boy. He has been through a lot.

I'm glad that willow helped Buffy trying to find out where he lives. I'm surprise she went with it so easily. Probably saw how much it meant to Buffy through her eyes. And I'm glad Buffy wants to help William. That's great.



Author's Response: No kidding! Scary thought.

Yes, Dru latches onto something and doesn't let go. William is there underneath, but he may change on the surface.

Well, Willow likes William so part of helping Buffy was because she likes him and she could see that Buffy was sincerely worried. As for Buffy, well she's changing too. William helped her and she wants to return the favor. Thank you for your reviews! I look forward to them.

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 10:25 am Title: Grief

I Love your story please write more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to. There may be actual work to do at work today. Ick. We'll see.

Reviewer: area Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 10:20 am Title: Grief

I'm quite glad that it's Buffy who is with William and not Dru. She can be fun, but not as a love interest :-)

Poor William. Losing his parents... I hope he doesn't do anything (any more) drastic when his mum passes.

Author's Response: Ummmm....no comment just yet. Glad you think she's fun, though.

Yeah :(

Thank you for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 08:37 am Title: Grief

So it is Dru that bleaches his hair and gives him the name of Spike.. at his disdain. And now with the classic eyebrow injury.

I know I used "Spike" in the last chapter review and then realized it hadn' t been introduced .. just William.

And yeah for Buffy.. taking care of him and getting home in one piece.

Enjoyed.

Author's Response: Yes, Dru's far more than just a motivating factor in this one. She's wielding the bleach.

I've been worried the whole story that I'd type Spike when I meant William :)

Yes, thank goodness the Desoto was an automatic. I had to look that up to see if it was possible. I was like, huh, how am I going to get Buffy to drive him if it's stick. That should be interesting. Dunno about the show Desoto, but at least they came with automatic....

Thanks for reviewing! Glad you're still enjoying it.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 06:36 am Title: Grief

Yeah, you have to have a death wish not to care how Buffy drives!

Author's Response: No kidding! Thanks for commenting :)

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 04:01 am Title: Grief

Boy, all kinds of shit has gone down in the last two chapters. And I need MORE! Interesting how you did the William to Spike switch-a-roo. Nice idea on Buffy's part; can't wait to see the awkwardness to follow.

Author's Response: Yes, it has! Haha, ok, more will be coming. ,br />
Well, I couldn't see this William going bleach blond on his own. So I wondered what would happen if you put a bored Dru and Faith, some leftovers from Oz's hair experiments and a thoroughly unconscious William in the same room. Apparently, Spike happens. Kinda :)

Oh and there will be awkwardness, of that you can be sure. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Pamela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 03:39 am Title: Grief

Sweet story with good characterization and nice twists and turns.



Author's Response: Thank you! Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment :)

Reviewer: Maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 02:50 am Title: Grief

I love Dru! She is my favorite character in this story:) I also like the direction you are taking William.

:)

Author's Response: Haha! I'm not sure if that's good. Maybe that means William and Buffy aren't that interesting! I love Dru too. She's not boring, at least, although she may be dangerous to be around when she's bored :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 01:25 am Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

The fights were good, don't worry. Granted, I never fought in my life. Ah, everythings muddled. I'm curious what will happen next.

Author's Response: Thanks, yes everything's in a bit of a mess. I just posted a new chapter :) Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: OCHIT DUZON Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2007 - 12:07 am Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

Im sorry for Spike's mother. Even more for Spike. he already lost a father he is about to lose a mother now. And to add to that his secret love wont even notice him! Poor guy!

Please make Spike happy in the next chapter. He deserves a break.

Author's Response: Oh dear. Well, I've given him so many reasons to be unhappy, I'm afraid he's not very happy in the next chapter or maybe even the one after that. This is kinda the angsty bit of the story for little while. I'd tell you when the fluff is coming if I knew in which chapter it will reappear, but I'm only about a chapter and a half ahead of posting as of now and uh, he's not happy. I'm sorry :( Thank you for commenting though!

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 10:16 pm Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

Yay! I was hoping for something in the flame thrower famliy, but that works to.... Good chapter. Dru is creepy though, but at least she helped him get away from the bouncer. I hope his mother dosn't die.

Author's Response: I don't think they let flame throwers in the club with all of that flammable alcohol around. If he beats him up again, I'll try to work in some fire, but no promises, lol.

Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 09:48 pm Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

Spike was out of line with his comment about Buffy. On the other hand he can wipe the floor with Angel anytime! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Well, keep in mind she'd been going out of her way to publicly ignore and avoid him at school except when he was helping her study. Like when she had him meet her at the door nobody uses. Though she was getting much less careful about that, the hugging and the whole confronting Angel thing and she's taken flack for that. Anyway, he thought that was what she was doing again at the Bronze and he was just a little sick of everything...not to mention kind of drunk.

Yeah, I can like Angel sometimes, but he's kind of a jerk in this story, so yay to floor wipeage! Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 04:47 pm Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

Well I liked the fight part, seemed believable to me. It wasn't really a drag out action movie fight and it was part of the story that made it move forward so I don't really feel the need to be too acurate about how people fight in real life and stuff like that.

Author's Response: Oh good. Yes, I didn't draw it out blow by blow, because I lack expertise in that area. It happened and I just wanted to move the story along. Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 04:12 pm Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

Oh, Spike... Dru has you in her clutches. And now
Buffy is torn. William was a little cruel to Buffy in his drunken state. ." stuck up bitch" I found ooc, but maybe the booze talking.

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Yes, he was. It was the alcohol and also he's understandably upset about his mother. Another perceived rejection from Buffy was just the last straw. He's human, after all. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Author's Response: I'm sure it wasn't the word choice that you were probably referring to when you said it seemed ooc, but the more I tried to picture William saying it, the more I couldn't. I just changed the word, the sentiment's pretty much the same. But thanks for making me think about it.

Reviewer: Red Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 04:11 pm Title: Quarrelling Like Cats

Poor William. It must be so hard for him right now. Losing his father and now his mother with an illness. Then being new there. I can only imagine how he feels.

I must admit I didn't feel that bad for Buffy with the whole Angel thing. Angel is a jerk. So, happy that William go to hit him. That was great.

Author's Response: Yes, William's in a bad place. He's lost or losing everything important to him. Angel is a jerk, but she's still confused about how she feels about him. She can't just turn off her emotions, no matter what's happened. Me too. I enjoyed William hitting him. Violent, vengeful me. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 03:13 pm Title: Canary in Winter

Good story. More, please, soon?

Author's Response: Thanks! More about to be posted. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Maddy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 05:59 am Title: Making Peace

I'm actually feeling a little bad for Drusilla, I like how you've written her.

Author's Response: Yes, at present she's just a little strange, not bad. Thanks and thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 04:50 am Title: Canary in Winter

Get him William!! Get him!!! I can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: lol. Everyone's out for bloodshed. I'll try to write today if there are lulls at work. Maybe have the next chapter tonight.

Reviewer: Lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2007 - 04:43 am Title: Making Peace

Creepy Dru, hope William knows better. Also Angel is worried, Wahhaahhha (that was an evil laugh) Maybe Buffy will give him more reason to be jealous.

Author's Response: Well, he's certainly not in love at first sight with Dru. Yes, Angel's not too happy. Thank you for reviewing!

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