Date: 03/24/2009 - 01:12 am Title: Mothers And Daughters
Love it, cant wait to read the next chapter... so I wont :)
Date: 11/23/2008 - 10:42 pm Title: Mothers And Daughters
Very badly written. No attention to nationality of voice, all American characters sound English. English names for things set in America. Bad spelling and phrasing mistakes. Should have used a spellchecker at least. Bad gramatical mistakes. Rambling plot going VERY slowly. No suspense where there should be. Dialog very bad. Characterizations cheesy. Don't recommend. Will never read anything by pixiecorn again.
Date: 09/30/2007 - 05:23 pm Title: Mothers And Daughters
I like this story a lot infact its going in my faves.
Author's Response: :) thank you so much hehe
Date: 08/31/2007 - 01:21 am Title: Mothers And Daughters
loved it cant wait to read more
Date: 08/21/2007 - 07:44 am Title: Mothers And Daughters
interesting and a bit different to your other story...i'm liking where its going cant wait to read more
Date: 08/21/2007 - 07:44 am Title: Mothers And Daughters
i loved it cant wait to see what happens next:)
Date: 07/22/2007 - 09:38 pm Title: Mothers And Daughters
Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 07/21/2007 - 07:48 am Title: Mothers And Daughters
There seems to be a secret behind who's Tara's father. Not everything is what it looks like.
Interesting summary; looking forward to read more.
Date: 07/20/2007 - 03:10 pm Title: Mothers And Daughters
Loved it!!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/20/2007 - 11:22 am Title: Mothers And Daughters
very interesting beginning . keep it goin
Date: 07/20/2007 - 09:02 am Title: Mothers And Daughters
Oh I love it, and it seems that they are going to show up at a good time, Tara's Birthday party.
Takes some getting use to see Tara a a child and not a friend or something of the groups, But I like it.
More please.
Author's Response: yeah its weird writing Tara as a kid but its still a fun character
Date: 07/20/2007 - 09:02 am Title: Mothers And Daughters
brilliant start, love the way you introduce the mystery about Tara's father, looking forward to more
Date: 07/20/2007 - 04:09 am Title: Mothers And Daughters
I liek it so far, very intriguing.