Date: 10/13/2007 - 10:26 pm Title: Visitors
What a weird thing for Lindsay to do. I'd leave a longer review, but I have to get to the ice cream chapter now :)
Date: 08/30/2007 - 07:55 pm Title: Visitors
Lindsey and Darla, huh? They are suited for each other. Bettcha he can't wait to find out just who they are and then the shit's going to hit the fan. Come full circle, they will, won't they? At least Buffy and Spike are both single and not cheating like Dru and Liam. This must be a pivital chapter. This is where changes have to begin and others start to interfere. Very well done actually, your beta's right.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 08/28/2007 - 05:08 am Title: Visitors
AWW VERY CUTE!!! loved the chapter and am so happy that u updated. god lindsey was such a jerk. i hope that tey continue to get closer and that buffy and spikes relationship continues to grow. PLEASE update as soon as u can, cant wait to read more. THANX
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it, thank you! Next chap is already up. :)
Date: 08/27/2007 - 07:52 am Title: Visitors
Thank goodness Spike found new friends in Buffy and Hannah, cause the people he associated with before were definitely a bunch of vipers. The closing scene was sweet, I'm glad Hannah and Buffy turned Spike's bad day into a good one. Fantastic update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 08/27/2007 - 05:48 am Title: Visitors
Great chapter, I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that, thank you!
Date: 08/26/2007 - 11:56 pm Title: Visitors
stupid Lindsey......interesting chapt.....cant wait to read the next update:):)
Author's Response: Thank you, I should have it up by tomorrow. :)
Date: 08/26/2007 - 08:23 pm Title: Visitors
I had a really bad feeling about Buffy and Dawn going round to Spike's but it was better than I thought it would be.
Author's Response: Well, that's good, right? :)
Date: 08/26/2007 - 06:19 pm Title: Visitors
Lindsay's such a jerk. Love the Spuffy and Hannah though. How adorable!
Author's Response: *lol* Glad you think so. Thanks!
Date: 08/26/2007 - 04:01 pm Title: Visitors
Ah, Lindsey's an ass. I can't believe he said that to Spike. Especially not that part about Drusilla, it's mean even though Spike seems to be moving on. Hope Buffy and Hannah can cheer him up a little :) Great chapter as always!
Author's Response: You're absolutely right, Lindsey's an ass. Thank you for reviewing! :)
Date: 08/26/2007 - 02:45 pm Title: Visitors
Loved it! :)
So it's Lindsey's fault that Spike lost his job, telling their boss about Spike's alcohol problems.... And now Lindsey comes bragging, seems to me like he's got low self-esteem, because he has to be confirmed by Spike, Lindsey keeps telling himself that he matters, that he is somebody. Almost like Darla did, when she showed those photos. Like a cry for help, a very self-destructive cry. They are definately not happy together, sleeping around with others. Why don't they just break up?
The end of the chapter was sweet, liked that Spike called Buffy and Hannah his two favorite girls.
Author's Response: You'll find out a bit more about Lindsey and Darla's relationship later in the story. Thanks for reviewing, I'm so happy you thought the end was sweet. :)
Date: 08/26/2007 - 02:43 pm Title: Visitors
That wasn't as bad as I expected ..... I like the way Spike is picking up Buffy and Hannah's bad habit of running words together they all said the word "wanna " instead of proper English which is "want to.."
Still loving this thanks honey... Okay better get back to helping do the laundry i'm hanging it out hubbies washing seeing as I normally screw it up....
Author's Response: Well, Spike has lived in the US for quite a while. I'm glad you still like my story hon, thank you!
Date: 08/26/2007 - 01:33 pm Title: Visitors
love it, love it, love it! can't wait for what's next, as always!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! :)
Date: 08/26/2007 - 12:37 pm Title: Visitors
Hmmm....well kinda bad timing but nothing serious, must be one of the first times i've read a part were a surprise visit didn't blow up in the persons face..lol
So let me get this straight, Lindsey worked with Spike and got him fired when he lost his fiancee and doesn;t't realise why Spike not want to see him? Bloody idiot isn't he?
Spike was engaged to Drusilla who is best friends with Darla, who is married to Linsey, who worked with Spike, And both Darla and Dru were cheating on their partners with Angel...who by any chance isn't also Angel is he? because that would just complete this seriously messed up group.
well it was good to read a bit more about Spikes past. Maybe now he's clean and sober he can get his job back and get Linsey fired :D
another great update
Supdate soon
Harry
Author's Response: Thank you, and yes, that about sums it up. :)
Date: 08/26/2007 - 12:33 pm Title: Visitors
Oh thank you Buffy, at least it got Lindsay going sooner.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 08/26/2007 - 12:05 pm Title: Visitors
Aww!Sweet chapter Pet! Loved it, keep up your good work x-x
Author's Response: I'll try. :) Thanks hon!
Date: 08/26/2007 - 12:00 pm Title: Visitors
Well, I see Lindsey, Dru, and Darla are in this story.
Probably drinking over Dru and Lindsey couldn't wait to undercut our boy. Hopefully, Mr. Manners will come to his senses and ask for Spike to return when Lindsey makes some great faux pas. Or?
Enjoying
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 08/26/2007 - 11:54 am Title: Visitors
Indeed Spike had better had kept the door closed. So it was Lindsey's fault (not for the drinking, that's right, that is Spike's own fault) that Spike got fired? He is only there to brag (the promotion), to rub salt in Spike's wound. I wonder if that was the only reason or if he knows something (like that Spike is wanted to come back to work?)
Well Buffy's and Hannah's visit went rather well. Even more reason to show Lindsey where the door was.
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Good to hear, thank you! :)