Date: 04/26/2009 - 10:18 pm Title: chapter 3
Ohhh... wow, I wonder how Spike is going to take the whole 'There really is monsters out in the world, Buffy kills them' thing lol
Its sad about William. I can't wait to find out what happened and see how Spike and Buffy get together. Should be a rocky ride.
Great chapter!
Date: 02/03/2008 - 11:44 am Title: chapter 3
yey!! there are slayers and vampires!! hurray!! :)
Author's Response: *lol* Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 09/23/2007 - 01:22 am Title: chapter 3
I was hoping Buffy just had a weird dream. Poor Buffy and William. Neat that you have William as Giles' son. It would make more sense if both William and Spike looked the same.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 09/12/2007 - 11:15 pm Title: chapter 3
interesting.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so, thank you! :)
Date: 09/09/2007 - 07:16 pm Title: chapter 3
OOOOH! love the sexy banner! Loving the story as well! Keep up hun!
Author's Response: *lol* Thank you so much, happy you like both the banner and the story. :)
Date: 09/08/2007 - 08:59 pm Title: chapter 3
So Buffy is a slayer :) Liked the interaction between Spike and Giles.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thank you! :)
Date: 09/08/2007 - 09:28 am Title: chapter 3
I enjoyed Spike and Giles' talk, the new info about William and Buffy was really interesting. Love how the story is progressing. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 09/08/2007 - 09:00 am Title: chapter 3
Loving this story !! Its brilliant - yeeey! I love your storys Pet xx
Im reiled in!
Author's Response: *blush* Thank you so much honey!
Date: 09/08/2007 - 08:14 am Title: chapter 3
Great story, I can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 09/08/2007 - 03:19 am Title: chapter 3
OMG HOW SAD!! I CANT BELIEVE SHE DIDNT TALK FOR A YEAR!! I HOPE SPIKE AND HER BECOME FRIENDS!!! also i wonder how spikes going to react to giles' news, i hope he doesnt freak. i LOVE thhis story and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that buffy and spike get closer and that they talk to each other about their past and bound. also i hope that everything works out well and that they both end up happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read wat happens next. THANX SO MUCH
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! :)
Date: 09/07/2007 - 10:32 pm Title: chapter 3
oh, wow!!! loved it lots and lots. please post soon cuz damn...this is way interesting. great job.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 09/07/2007 - 08:40 pm Title: chapter 3
Hey Pet :)
Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter. I think the reason you may have not got much of a response, it because many people may have still been a bit confused still about what exactly this story.
Whether you choose to continue this story now, later or not al all is of course up up to you, but I for one would enjoy reading more of it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! Maybe you're right, though I think the confusion will clear up a bit soon. I will absolutely continue writing this story, just not sure of how often I will be able to update. :)
Date: 09/07/2007 - 08:07 pm Title: chapter 3
Just started to read this. I like it but its a slow brewer. Give it some time. Its actually a better story than the other but it was hard to see where you were taking this until the hints you gave in this chapter. This is a story that would benefit with longer chapters. Like using the start of chapter 1 as a prologue and then using the rest as a chapter 1 or such. Sometimes that makes the diff. in getting people involved. I think you have a story here.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. Unfortunately(?) writing long chapters aren't my thing, so if the length of the chaps is causing lack of readers, then I'll just have to live with that. But I appreciate your opinion, thank you! :)
Date: 09/07/2007 - 05:02 pm Title: chapter 3
Oh Buffy isn't in a coma any longer... she's awake (but maybe not really there, huh?) Spike was in jail for something he did (after a lot of fights... that sounds as if someone got killed *I'm just guessing here*).
Now I know more... William has been Spike's cousin so it's not as if William is back now that Spike is there. Wasn't sure about that. But we have a slayer here... Spike will be surprised. Or maybe he knows more about this things than Giles knows. *thinks of the mysterious fights*
Till next chapter; may it be sooner or later.
Author's Response: Well, I haven't started on the next chap yet, have been writing a new chap on my other story instead. But I'll try to write more soon. Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/07/2007 - 04:57 pm Title: chapter 3
I wondered if she was a slayer, so William was his cousin, I wonder what his real name is then.
Author's Response: *lol* I think I can already say that Spike's real name won't be relevant in this story. Not like I can name them both William, and I simply refuse to make up another name for Spike. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 09/07/2007 - 04:38 pm Title: chapter 3
Still interested if you are...
William is not Spike... and Buffy is still a slayer?
Author's Response: Keep reading and you'll find out. :) Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/07/2007 - 04:32 pm Title: chapter 3
I absolutely LOVE your Saving You story but this one is also very interesting and selfishly I'd love for you to continue both. Your writing is simply lovely and it is amazing how to draw out the emotionally relationships between the characters. You express their emtional reactions and motivations very well. So please continue with both of them--though I understand if you need to work on first one and then the other :-) But I'm anxious to see both this and Saving You finished!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, your words meant a lot to me and your review brought a big smile on my face. I will definitely keep writing on both stories and finish them, no question about that. I just feel like maybe I should focus on one at the time. But I'm not sure I'll manage to do that, since I have all these ideas for this story as well. :)