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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2012 - 04:35 pm Title: Five

Very sweet and lovely. Is this finished? It seems to want more...

Reviewer: Kaitlynn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2004 - 02:21 pm Title: Five

This was so sweet. I can't believe it was so short! I hope your in to writing more!

Reviewer: cammie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2004 - 08:23 am Title: Five

An enjoyable story, overall, but you desperately need to break up some of those incredibly long paragraphs into managable bits, especially when you have dialogue.

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