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Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2010 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Magnificent!

Reviewer: dragonflylady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2008 - 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1

So I finally made it to this fic of yours and I'm hooked already!!
*grins*

Author's Response: glad you like it and thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Ok hun, thought I'd give this story a try - since your muse needs a MASSIVE BUFFET! hehehehe. So far I really, really like this! And that's saying something, cause I usually don't like post Chosen or NFA fics - too damn depressing. BUT, I thought it was pretty cool that Spike saved Riley (gag) and his wife and child. And the blue diamond was heartbreaking! Plus the 150 yellow crayons for Willow - so very sweet. So I'm off to the next chapter :D!

Author's Response: glad you like it, I'm re-reading at the moment just to get things straight in my head for the next bit...and thanks for the review, you're right I needed the boost

Reviewer: Cissi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2007 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey, hun! just thought I should let you know that I read the first chapter of your story today and really love it :) Had been planning to do it earlier but well real life got in the way ;) Enjoying it so far and good to see a different side of Riley :)

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, so many people don't bother when a story's been up for a while. hope you enjoy the rest

Reviewer: Curious Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2007 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Why does Dawn have to be over 21 to have coffee?

Author's Response: well for one it got you to review:) some people don't like younger members of their family having too much caffeine. hope you like the rest

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2007 - 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I found your new fic! I'm so happy now :) Loved the ring Riley and Sam gave to Buffy, so sweet. Wonderfully written.

Author's Response: thank you for all your compliments. they really made my day

Reviewer: timeends Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2007 - 04:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story, need to read more. ^_^ . Spuffy!! Oh and also, commander in the army should be used as small letter 'c' or 'C' because there is no official rank of Commander in Army. In Navy yes, but not Army. It is only used for general terms i.e commanding officer, US Army commanders. Carrying on. ;)

Author's Response: many thanks for the correction. I have upgraded him to a leutenant Colonel:) Spuffy will come but it will take time with this one. It has a story and I want that story to unfold. lots more angst on the way:) thanks for your help

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2007 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay, about halfway through the first chapter I had to stop, so I thought I would drop you a line to let you know. Your writing style is not bad but I think the characterizations are a little off. I don't usually mind a liitle alt reality but this is supposed to be cannon at this point. It seemed a little odd, might just be me though, that Buffy would call Riley "Finn" and to have Giles call Buffy a child seemed a bit off as well. I hope the story turns out the way you hope and I might check it out again once you have more of it up.

Author's Response: never said it was cannon:) thanks for taking the time to review. i hope you enjoy it if you pick it back up.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2007 - 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1

Not quite sure about Riley's benevolent attitude to Spike, but everything else certainly rings true in this intriguing opening chapter. I can certainly believe Giles' attitude after the events in season 7, although I did think he acted completely out of character in that whole story arc. Interested to see where you're taking this...

Author's Response: Riley's behaviour will be explained. promise. and as for giles, Crucitanium? band candy? ethan rayne? Giles wasn't always a fusty librarian. thanks for the review. more soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm late again but I was away today so I still have to catch up. ~ Riley really sounds nice (helpful) here. And reading that they told Buffy that Spike hat died again had me awake :)
And he died as a hero. Neat, having made a ring for Buffy. [You can decide to get that here too but the process had to be made out of Germany, there's a firm that does that.] And yet it hurt Buffy that Spike didn't tell her that he was alive. Giles knew and thought of what's best of his slayer. *raises hand* I think it's time to join the Hate-Giles-Fanclub now. What an idiot.
Buffy wanted a protection, sealing spell? Good thought. Especially because Willow noticed that it was harder than it should have been. I don't think this is normal for Willow to have problems? *thinking the worst* Rather then Giles did something.

Author's Response: the firm that does diamonds is called biogems and it takes about 9 months, so i used a bit of poetic licence more soon glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

I gotta tell yu, there were a lot of characters on the show I loved to hate ,the biggest were Angel, Giles , Xander and Finn. I like Finn in this one, and hope he becomes a staunch ally to Buffy and friend to Spike, because I know, and yu know ,yur bringing him back. Just once I would love for Buffy to beat the crap out of Giles, well in fics like this one where he's a creep anyway. I'm liking this story and hope yu do have Spike become godfather to Finn's baby. I'll be looking for updates.

Author's Response: will aim to update once a week. glad you enjoyed. this story insisted on being written more soon

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2007 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, wow...Riley is actually rockin' in this fic. I find myself enjoying that very much. : ) Lovin' the start of this. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: updates weekly (hopefull) glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, very intriguing start. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story.
p.s. I already hate Giles. *shudders*

Author's Response: more soon. and you'll hate giles even more soon

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