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Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2008 - 11:29 am Title: chapter 43

Well, I like it and the bit about the origins of the Slayer is interesting.

It's not clear though if Sineya was a Slayer before the scene in the cavern, or she really was transformed then, or if the slayer part was removed and then reintegated.

Just my two cents.

Author's Response: the ambuguaty was intended, hope you enjoy the rest

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2008 - 04:52 am Title: chapter 43

Wow. I have just finished reading from the beginning and I am in awe! This story is AWESOME!!!!! I absolutely LOVE it! I will be following it faithfully from now on.

I have to say, jl, that I love your style of writing. It flows beautifully, your vocabulary is rich and the descriptions are vivid. I think the only other fic of yours I've read so far is Dark Sail, but I think I'll have to go and have a look at the rest of your works. After I give the kids some mum-time, that is - I pretty much left them to their own devices while I lost myself in this fic for the last two days! :) Naughty me. Maybe Spike can spank me and cure me of my wicked ways.... Well, I wouldn't want to be cured too quickly. :)

Thanks for sharing your work. Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, there is a little more to come my kids need mum time as well so updates may be a little delayed:~) thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2008 - 09:24 pm Title: chapter 43

I feel awful for what the first slayer had to go through. i can see why this was so hard to write. i love the safe haven there own little heaven is just to cool. great update i loved it. everytime i read a new chapter i get more excited to read the next. :)

Author's Response: update as soon as the muse allows:) she wants to write dark sail at the moment...thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it

Reviewer: DragonflyLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2008 - 11:56 am Title: chapter 43

Wow. The thing with the first slayer, really nasty, poor thing... That Sunny Haven sounds nice and peaceful!!
What's next?

^_^

Author's Response: wait and see, but we are galloping towards what i saw as the end of the tale, hope you enjoy the ride and thanks for the review

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2008 - 10:50 am Title: chapter 43

If the pic don't work (the upload), just post a link so we can see it. (No clue why the posting isn't working with the pic.)
Sweet when they were so excited over Buffy being pregnant (Willow and Dawn).
Oh no, that was so cruel what the watchers did to Syneta. Poor one.
Now I understand why you said it was hard to write. But well done.
Being given the New Sunnydale is a great gift for them.
And that means they won't loose Dawn forever should she die (or her Martin).
Enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: thanks for the review, the com was really misbehaving for me, Sunny haven will become an incredible place, more soon and thanks for the review

Reviewer: BuffyLuvsSpike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2008 - 06:30 am Title: chapter 43

I just sat here and read this through i took three hours or so but i finished and i can't wait for more
You know you are reading something wonderful when you get happy and sad when the characters do.
I became so happy when they found out spike and anya would be returned and i was sad when i found out about giles' treachery and the death of buffy and spike's baby because of giles.
So i hope you know you are doing a wonderful job and i can't wait for more

Author's Response: what a wonderful review, thank you. I wanted the story to touch people and it obviously has, hope you enjoy the rest

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2008 - 05:08 am Title: chapter 43

Dear Lord, the watchers really screwed up with the poor First Slayer, it's awful that they killed the baby and father. *shudders* Didn't see that one coming, although perhaps I should. I'm very happy now they have their safe haven in Sunnydale, a place where their baby will grow up healthy and happy and above all, secure. Very well done, sweetie! I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: yes, their child will be safe and have a safe place to grow up and learn i wanted to show giles wasn't the only watcher who betrayed a slayer, it was endemic

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