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Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2008 - 04:52 am Title: chapter 43

Wow. I have just finished reading from the beginning and I am in awe! This story is AWESOME!!!!! I absolutely LOVE it! I will be following it faithfully from now on.

I have to say, jl, that I love your style of writing. It flows beautifully, your vocabulary is rich and the descriptions are vivid. I think the only other fic of yours I've read so far is Dark Sail, but I think I'll have to go and have a look at the rest of your works. After I give the kids some mum-time, that is - I pretty much left them to their own devices while I lost myself in this fic for the last two days! :) Naughty me. Maybe Spike can spank me and cure me of my wicked ways.... Well, I wouldn't want to be cured too quickly. :)

Thanks for sharing your work. Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, there is a little more to come my kids need mum time as well so updates may be a little delayed:~) thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2008 - 09:24 pm Title: chapter 43

I feel awful for what the first slayer had to go through. i can see why this was so hard to write. i love the safe haven there own little heaven is just to cool. great update i loved it. everytime i read a new chapter i get more excited to read the next. :)

Author's Response: update as soon as the muse allows:) she wants to write dark sail at the moment...thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it

Reviewer: DragonflyLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2008 - 11:56 am Title: chapter 43

Wow. The thing with the first slayer, really nasty, poor thing... That Sunny Haven sounds nice and peaceful!!
What's next?

^_^

Author's Response: wait and see, but we are galloping towards what i saw as the end of the tale, hope you enjoy the ride and thanks for the review

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2008 - 10:50 am Title: chapter 43

If the pic don't work (the upload), just post a link so we can see it. (No clue why the posting isn't working with the pic.)
Sweet when they were so excited over Buffy being pregnant (Willow and Dawn).
Oh no, that was so cruel what the watchers did to Syneta. Poor one.
Now I understand why you said it was hard to write. But well done.
Being given the New Sunnydale is a great gift for them.
And that means they won't loose Dawn forever should she die (or her Martin).
Enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: thanks for the review, the com was really misbehaving for me, Sunny haven will become an incredible place, more soon and thanks for the review

Reviewer: BuffyLuvsSpike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2008 - 06:30 am Title: chapter 43

I just sat here and read this through i took three hours or so but i finished and i can't wait for more
You know you are reading something wonderful when you get happy and sad when the characters do.
I became so happy when they found out spike and anya would be returned and i was sad when i found out about giles' treachery and the death of buffy and spike's baby because of giles.
So i hope you know you are doing a wonderful job and i can't wait for more

Author's Response: what a wonderful review, thank you. I wanted the story to touch people and it obviously has, hope you enjoy the rest

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2008 - 05:08 am Title: chapter 43

Dear Lord, the watchers really screwed up with the poor First Slayer, it's awful that they killed the baby and father. *shudders* Didn't see that one coming, although perhaps I should. I'm very happy now they have their safe haven in Sunnydale, a place where their baby will grow up healthy and happy and above all, secure. Very well done, sweetie! I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: yes, their child will be safe and have a safe place to grow up and learn i wanted to show giles wasn't the only watcher who betrayed a slayer, it was endemic

Reviewer: DragonflyLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2008 - 01:07 pm Title: chapter 42

Woohoo for Spike in sunlight!! :)
Great of Morgana to stop by and let them know. ^_^

Author's Response: more from morgana next chapter, glad you liked it

Reviewer: Naurolim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2008 - 09:22 am Title: chapter 42

Yet another great chapter, I just love your stories so much.

I am so glad that everything is going so well for Spuffy now, after all the trauma they have suffered.

The way you write your stories makes the reader care about what is happening to the characters and leaves me begging for more.

Thanks again.

Author's Response: what an amazing review and thank you for it. there will be more soon

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2008 - 02:06 am Title: chapter 42

wow that was awsome. i love this story so much. it just gets more interesting everytime i read it.

Author's Response: more twists and turns on their way:) glad you are enjoying

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2008 - 12:20 am Title: chapter 42

Wow, that was awesome! Thank you for the update, I've been pining for more of this fabulous story.

Author's Response: and there is more coming...beta has it at the moment

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2008 - 11:10 pm Title: chapter 42

Awe, what a treat :)) So the sunshine in the last chapter was an inkling of what's to come. Even better if Spike is immune without the ring, a ring can be lost.
Now he's save to protect his family :))
Enjoyed the update, good to see you posting again.

Author's Response: thank you for your lovely review...trust me to drop hints

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2008 - 10:06 pm Title: chapter 42

Yipeeee!! Thank you so much for the latest; and good news for Spuffy , too.

Author's Response: lots of good news...glad you enjoyed and thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2008 - 10:19 am Title: Chapter 41

Arrgghhh you can't leave it there!!!!

OMG! You are so evil, leaving the chapter there and ... no more chapters to read onto and going away for two weeks!!!

Well, all I can say is that I am so happy to have caught up with this fic... hmmm I don't want to know about those two watchers and what they are planning, so please kill them off ! lol it's brilliant huni welldone! xxx

Author's Response: oh yes I can leave it there:) evil laugh.. more when i get back

Reviewer: DragonflyLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2008 - 11:54 am Title: Chapter 41

*full of glee* the baby is back.. Can't shake the grin off my face. It was nice they got to see their mums.

I loved how she called to the demon.. Gives me warm fuzzies.. ^_^

Author's Response: I take it you enjoyed...more from the ladies later

Reviewer: DragonflyLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2008 - 11:17 am Title: chapter 40

Finally remembered you'd updated.. Andrew is back-ish, that's great!
She's getting a lot of back pain, eh.. Wonder what's up with that...

*hugs*

Author's Response: more about that soon and yes Andrew is sort of back. glad you enjoyed and thank for reviewing

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 09:00 am Title: Chapter 41

I guess that's one way of conceiving!
They do deserve some happiness after the whole ordeal.
I hope this story won't end so soon, though!

Author's Response: the ending gallops towards us but I'm glad you are enjoying

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2008 - 01:39 am Title: Chapter 41

OMG that was beaitful i loved it. this story just gets better and better everytime i read it. I'm so happy for spike and buffy i can't wait for more.

Author's Response: thnak you for the review and I'm glad it worked for you

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter 41

Awwwwwwww, that last bit was so sweet! I'm so happy they got their baby back. And my oh my, the rest of the chapter was sizzling hot. I just love this story, sweetie! Looking forward to more.

And again, feliz cumpleaños (Happy birthday)!!!! love, Mari

Author's Response: perfect awww, that's good. glad you enjoyed...more soon

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 41

A baby... nice ... and enjoyed the Spuffy scene..



Author's Response: thank you, glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2008 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 41

Is it still the 18th for you? Best wishes then again :))
So very hot when the chapter started :)
Then you made me AWE when they had visitors and now a little baby.
Enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: I'm relieved it was hot enough, it had made me nervous, glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2008 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 41

Yummy, yum, yum!! Loving this story and always look forward to new chapters. What will the baby be?

Author's Response: humanish!! glad you enjoy and there should be more soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2008 - 09:49 pm Title: chapter 40

The chocolate sauce made me giggle. Thanks for that.
And the book is really interesting.
Good to see Andrew again :) He must be very lucky to see all the TV Series in advance now :)
Enjoyed the update :)
But the site is so slow again ..... I have to wait to post this.

Author's Response: the site was slow for me as well...glad you enjoyed, the book should be fun

Reviewer: Pat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2008 - 11:56 am Title: chapter 40

Neat! I love Septemus and this is a really interesting journey. Glad to see Andrew back and whole. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: he was always due back in to the story..glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2008 - 05:49 am Title: chapter 40

Ooooh, very interesting, I'm sure the book will be very helpful for them in the present and even more in the future. Loving Septamus and Cordy is just brilliant in this story. Fantastic chapter, sweetie! I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed, cordy is such fun to write....more soon

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2008 - 10:33 pm Title: chapter 40

Interesting..

Author's Response: i hope so

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