Date: 09/27/2007 - 02:26 pm Title: The Need For Seed
Another sharply written chapter here. It's still fast paced, but there was real desperation in Buffy's plea. Nice job lending emotional weight to this premise.
Date: 09/26/2007 - 03:05 am Title: The Need For Seed
That was a priceless exchange. Still totally sassy and snarky. Totally loving it.
Date: 09/26/2007 - 02:03 am Title: The Need For Seed
*is in love with this fic...*
So, I just wanted to let you know that even IF this story was complete crap - which it's so NOT, just the opposite in fact - i would give it an A+ for the chapter titles alone. So funny! ;)
Author's Response: Hee. And I give you an A+ for your sense of humor! ;D
Date: 09/26/2007 - 01:35 am Title: The Need For Seed
Hmm, lot of changes, like: "'Possibly'? That was more satisfying than cookie dough ice cream," Buffy said, shoulders scrunching, "with Cool Whip and strawberries and little yellow bunny sprinkles."
"Quick Ben & Jerry's detour?"
"Oh, yeah."
and the last line. But change is good; it's funnier. But again, Nauti is always a genius.
Author's Response: Wow, you're good. And thanks. :D