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Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2007 - 04:55 am Title: Performance Anxiety

Definitely one of the hottest fics I've read.

Author's Response: Thanks, Megan!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2007 - 02:34 pm Title: Performance Anxiety

This nicely set up this antithesis to a romantic encounter: " Buffy mustered some sarcasm. "That'll be my date!"

"I'll get the crossbow," Giles said" Hee! Spike was perfectly snarky and pushy and fun, and you somehow made this sexy as hell..

Author's Response: Hee. Thanks.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2007 - 04:19 am Title: Performance Anxiety

Why, fancy meeting you here, Miss Bitz! I thought you had given up the fanfic thing! And soooo glad to be wrong. ;-)

Love the reposting with changes - this one especially:

"What? Excuse me for not wanting to be pierced through the heart because Cuppa Tea over here's never pleasured a real, live woman before,"

What can I say, i'm a sucker for Spike ranking on Giles.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the welcome and the noticing of the new bits. :) And nope, I can't seem to give these two up.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2007 - 03:15 am Title: Performance Anxiety

Their awkwardness just makes it even more erotic. I loved the story before, but I think I may love it even more now. Please, update soon!

And, btw... Welcome back to the Spuffy. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the welcome! I'm glad you're liking the changes. :)

Reviewer: Becca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2007 - 03:04 am Title: Performance Anxiety

Pulls hair in frustration*

Damn clliff hanger. Why you making this so difficult for him. Poor Spike.

Love it by the way

Author's Response: He'll get his. ;) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2007 - 02:19 am Title: Performance Anxiety

"Freshly pedicured with a coat of pearlescent garnet. When she'd sat in the salon, had she been thinking about him gazing at her feet? What color he might like?" did you add the garnet color? little too wordy. Also: As the unlikely couple disappeared into his bedroom, Giles muttered, "Allow me instead."

I liked the original wording. Bu beyond that I love the changes you made. Hee, poor Spike, it's almost not fun for him. but we know Spike; he'll have her panting and moaning in no time.



Author's Response: Do you think so re: the garnet? Maybe you're right. I sometimes get a tad carried away in my editing. But I'm flattered that you remember the old version so well!

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