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Reviewer: yubi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2009 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter Five

great story although it really does have potential to longer..

Reviewer: Ashes Falling Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2009 - 11:51 am Title: Chapter Five

Fantastic. Must read sequal.

Reviewer: Jessy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2008 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter Five

Ohh.. :( Over so soon? But it's good the way it is. I definitely liked it! Maybe you can continue it on a sequel :P

Reviewer: DestructoGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2008 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter Five

I enjoyed this! I kind of wish you did make it longer, but you're the author and it's up to you. :]] It's a good fic.

Author's Response: No, you're right. It needs to be longer. I had to rush it at the end to make the Seasonal Spuffy deadline (which I nearly missed). I'm hoping to get to the sequel. I think I could do more with this situation. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2007 - 11:44 pm Title: Chapter Five

Good that you could finish this one and could post this.
I wouldn't mind to read more of this (what was planned for the longer version).

Author's Response: Yes, I'm hoping to get my act together and write more. I have some written, but I'm spending my free time on my other story at the moment. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2007 - 08:19 am Title: Chapter Five

So? Sequel Time!!! The Further Adventures of....those who must stay near one another...this one is packed w/loads of scenarios and misadventures...Don't make me stamp my foot or squeal...!!! Or worse, whine!
So, MORE! Get to gettin' it girl! As in down on paper, typed into the little machine...
Thanks, enjoyed it, even tho' I felt kinda lost there at towards the end...
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com

Author's Response: Haha! Yes, I know that there's so much more I could do with the spell and situation and I hope to get there after my other story is finished. I wrote this in a tearing hurry and thought it was a bit too abrupt at the end. But maybe if it's a prologue, people will forgive me. :) Thanks so much for reviewing.

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