Date: 10/30/2007 - 12:58 am Title: Chapter Two
LOVE IT! So very real. I love how you flesh out the characters. Little things from Spike sniffing around, then at himself, to the little problems at with Buffy and Willow. There's detail, there's background, and there's good character voices. I'm definitely enjoying it so far, please continue when you can.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing : ) I love that you're catching the little things. I've always felt the little things are important in a story...sometimes they're relevant, sometimes not. Thanks again : )
Date: 10/22/2007 - 01:22 pm Title: Chapter Two
Next chapter please!
And who is the baby girl?
I wanna know now!!!!!
Lol please write more soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! You'll find out about the little girl before too long. I'm glad you like it : )
Date: 10/19/2007 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter Two
Great chapter, so when does Spike meet his child?
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! You think it's his kid, huh? Well...time will only tell.
Date: 10/19/2007 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter Two
Great fic so far, was all ready to hate Xander for not telling anyone about Spike then I find out he's doing it to protect him from what he thinks will be the wrath of Buffy an Dawn, Oh and I so know the kid is his, can't wait for the big reunion.
Author's Response: I was a bit worried that I wouldn't be able to pull off Xander as a nicer character than is usually portrayed (not that is a bad thing; I've read many fic's where a prick-like Xander is perfect : )
Date: 10/18/2007 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter Two
love it-had me going there about the little girl, thought she must be xander & anya's but she's obviously buffy & spike's--yes?
Author's Response: She is definitely not Anya and Xander's. That's all I'll say : )
Date: 10/18/2007 - 02:26 pm Title: Chapter Two
Really like it. Glad Xander is a good guy in this... too often he's the scapewgoat meanie. Keep going.
Author's Response: That's was my thought too. I wanted to write Xander in a better light. I see potential in his character (though he pissed me off on the show quite frequently).
Date: 10/18/2007 - 11:27 am Title: Chapter Two
Buffy with baby-hmm? Like it better when Xander is not with the jealous Spike hate.
Enjoying.
Author's Response: I know what you mean here. While in a lot of fic's the whole Xander hating Spike thing works, and it works well, sometimes I like to read a story where Xander isn't all jealous and spiteful. Not that I can promise he'll always be so good throughout this fic.
Date: 10/18/2007 - 10:50 am Title: Chapter Two
My curiosity is piqued, is she Spikes? I do hope so... Xander is still a sop , sorry not a Xander fan... he needs to stop playing god with peoples lives... nothing really changes with him... still knowing what's best for Buffy...
Update soon... great story!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know. I think Xander will always have a slight god complex. Trying to control people, even if he doesn't always realize it. But don't write him off too quickly : )
Date: 10/18/2007 - 10:40 am Title: Chapter Two
Yeah liked it! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: 10/18/2007 - 10:20 am Title: Chapter Two
love the chapter. need more info cant wait to read more
Author's Response: I'm very happy you loved it : ) Thanks so much
Date: 10/18/2007 - 09:13 am Title: Chapter Two
Later when I noticed in which season this story takes place I figured that 'her' is Buffy.
Xander changed too since Spike last saw him.
I wonder what the other sent was it was something very sweet but also very familiar, almost like he'd smelt it before but had forgotten it. I have a guess about that... a very small/young one.
I were right :) But I wonder whom she belongs to (even I guess she's Buffy's and Spike's.)
And a new danger on the horizon. Seems as if they (sounds like Buffy and Dawn but Xander only knows of Dawn for sure) aren't so fond to see Spike again. Maybe he could help. Xander asked him so we'll see. ~ I wonder how long Xander can keep the secret to himself. ~ Don't worry, still love it.
Author's Response: Sorry I didn't make the 'her' thing more clear...it is Buffy : ) You're a perceptive reader, I like that. Not that I will give anything away ; )
Date: 10/18/2007 - 08:46 am Title: Chapter Two
So Buffy has a baby I guess spike is the father? Well we'll see. So far the story is good I like reading it!
Author's Response: Glad you like it : ) Thanks for the reveiw : )
Date: 10/18/2007 - 06:26 am Title: Chapter Two
Whoa Freaky, the first thought I had when I read your summary was if Buffy had a daughter and what do you know she does...wonderi if she's Spikes, is that why Xander is feeling guilty about lying to the gang?
Well I guess the best place to hide would be New York, 6 Million people live there afterall.
I like this one, will be interesting to read how things go, I have a feeling these nightmares involve Spike somhow.
Author's Response: The 6 million people was a thought I had, too. I was thinking: ' what city could two people live in, for an extended amount of time, but never see each other?' : )