Date: 12/20/2007 - 11:56 am Title: Chapter Ten
This was a wildly erotic chapter. Spike is able to read Buffy beautifully, and he's playing her body like a finely made violin. Her responsiveness is a joy to read, but her insecurities keep coming to the fore.
The last scene, with Spike arriving in the elevator, was actually quite scary. The lack of dialogue lent a menace to the sex, but you did a good job making it clear that Buffy was into it. I really think Buffy could come through this weekend unable to walk.
Date: 11/30/2007 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Absolutely love this story! Thanks for sharing it! I keep wondering how she's gonna find out he's a vampire en when.. soon?
Date: 11/30/2007 - 04:52 am Title: Chapter Ten
Animalistic Spike. I love him. Gotta wonder what brought that on. Love her loving it as well. Great chapter. Always excited to see more.
Date: 11/29/2007 - 04:47 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Still loving where it's going. :)*
Date: 11/28/2007 - 05:39 am Title: Chapter Ten
LOVED IT, IM GLAD THAT YOURE SHOWING SOME INSIGHT INTO SPIKE!! DYING TO READ MORE,THANX!!!
Date: 11/27/2007 - 10:25 pm Title: Chapter Ten
dont listen to those complainers.. keep doing what youre doing because its wonderful and it is YOUR story.. i hope you continue on with this story because its been a lon time since a fic has got me stuck to it where im checking for an update everyday.. go at your own pace because its working perfectly thank you for this wonderful read
Date: 11/27/2007 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter Ten
I'm really enjoying this story as usual when it is one written by you.
I do have to say I never understand when I read notes at the end or beginning of a story explaining the author's position on what has or hasn't been written. In my opinion the reader should sit back, enjoy the story and review to let the author know they are writing a good story. It drives me crazy when people think an author should conform to how they think the story should be or justify why it isn't. To me the choice is read or don't and if you think you can do better then have at it!
Keep up the great work. I for one trust the direction you plan on taking us and appreciate the work it takes to write a quality story.
Date: 11/27/2007 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Very hot! ;) Absolutely loved! Please update soon :)
Date: 11/27/2007 - 08:04 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Ooo, snarly Spike's coming out to play! I wonder if he had just come back from feeding or something, and that's why he was still in game face. Excellent chapter! The true confessions part was so sweet, both of them admitting that they're falling. And I like that you've written this in Buffy's POV only. The mystery surrounding Spike is really enjoyable and I'm content for it to last as long as possible. Looking forward to more!
Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter Ten
My, my, my... what a naughty boy SPike is in the restaurant - I loved it. And hmmm, sounds like someone went to feed and came back home in demon mode a little too horny for his own good. I suppose questions may arise again especially since he said he'd never hurt her. Granted she liked it, but still, he did hurt her and the glowing eyes and rough sex has to have her thinking by now. Bravo sweety, can't wait til the next update.
Date: 11/27/2007 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Hmm, seems Buffy just had sex with vamped out Spike in the dark. Did he just come back from a kill, I wonder.
Date: 11/27/2007 - 06:11 pm Title: Chapter Ten
*gg* Naughty Spike! (In the restaurant).
In a way Spike isn't what he seems to be (but Buffy doesn't believe that he is a vampire). So he is completely not what she thinks he is when it comes to be human. The other things? I think this shoe fits :) Spike is for Buffy what she thinks he is (loving her, caring for her).
Mmmmh I wonder where Spike has been when Buffy woke up alone. Spike reacted different when he was back (primal, almost).
Enjoyed :)
Date: 11/27/2007 - 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Damn that's....that's hot. Can't wait to get into Spike's mind. ;)
Date: 11/27/2007 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Awesome update!! Don't worry about what people say about Spike's POV. You're doing an awesome job and i can't wait for more!
Date: 11/27/2007 - 11:50 am Title: Chapter Ten
Great chapter - very hot - but here we all are expecting Buffy to say "oh yeah the bloke I'm sleeping with is a Vampire". If someone told me my boyfriend was a Vampire I'm sure I wouldn't accept it. Yeah Spike is getting more violent during sex and far more bitey (is that a word?) but I'm not sure Vampire would be the first thing that came into my mind. We know he's a Vampire so are in on the secret. This is in no way a criticism just an observation - I love this story - and would assume that Spike has just returned from feeding (we must assume he still is because that is what he initially took Buffy for - isn't it?). Am really looking forward to your next update.
Date: 11/27/2007 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter Ten
Very good I loved it, and I meant no criticism by asking for Spikes POV, I just love to know what going on in everyones head. Sorry
Date: 11/27/2007 - 07:10 am Title: Chapter Ten
Good call with keeping it all with Buffy POV, although I think most of the readers knows what's coming it's just fun following Buffy this way. I find that if an author does several POV and especially the one that is a secret then the whole mystery flies out the window since you can have a character lie to another and conceal his true agenda but you can't really have that if you are inside his head then it's just stupid.
Date: 11/27/2007 - 06:59 am Title: Chapter Ten
now what happened while Buffy was asleep to let the demon out i wonder?
loved this psuffyness and kink in this chapter, looking forward to more
Date: 11/27/2007 - 06:23 am Title: Chapter Ten
This story is so HOT, I think I should stop reading it at work, as I'm the only woman in a department full of men... *blushes*
I can't wait to read what's next, and I adore the way Spike tries to balance his feelings with his needs, as well as how responsive Buffy seems to be even towards his more primal urges!
XXX
Date: 11/27/2007 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter Ten
i like how you've only done it from buffy's pov.....as you said it adds way more mystery to spikes character lol
awesome chapter:) hope you update again soon:)
Date: 11/27/2007 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter Ten
Wow. Bet Buffy's rethinkin' that whole vampire thing again about now. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 11/27/2007 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter Ten
I LOVE the direction this fic is heading. :) Can't wait for more from this! There is definite mystery surrounding Spike, and it makes me look forward to everything we learn about him. :) Update soon!
Date: 11/27/2007 - 03:56 am Title: Chapter Ten
Thanks for the note at the end - its nice to know you have it all planned out and the fic is going where you want it. Sometimes it is hard to keep them on course.
Date: 11/27/2007 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter Ten
Oh, my! *swoons* I think this was by far the hottest chapter yet, and that's saying something. They're getting a little less vanilla all the time, and I like it!
I wonder if the last bite was different from the rest, in that it will leave some evidence not present from the other ones. I have to admit, I'm embarassingly curious about if he's been biting her with his fangs all along, and if so, why she's only seeing hickeys instead of the usual two hole thing. Or is she, and she's in some really serious denial? I'm sure you will reveal all in good time - I'm just being a perve thinking about the possibilities regarding the bitey goodness of Spike.
Fantabulous chapter, as always!
Date: 11/27/2007 - 03:33 am Title: Chapter Ten
exciting!! i can't wait for some of the inevitable angst :]