Date: 03/21/2008 - 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
I got woefully behind on this entertaining story, and what a chapter to continue with. Spike is so nurturing and romantic, like Buffy I was lulled into believing him the perfect boyfriend. You deftly turned that notion upside down, he's also a murderous, violent predator. How is Buffy going to explain this away? It's not just a sun allergy that makes Spike different.
Date: 03/18/2008 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
I luv demon spike i mean some people make him to be a really bad guy but he makes william spike and i love it i mean you do have to admit he can be a lil rough but i think your doing a wonderful job of describing him.
Date: 02/20/2008 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Hi! I got some sleep and now I'm back (don't have work today). And now I'm a little more coherent so I can tell you that I'm loving the little bits of the Buffy world you're throwing in - like Willow dating a werewolf, Giles' presence and the Harmony ref had me giggling like crazy.
I love the balance of light and dark too (not to mention HOT and sweet). Spike's nature is a problem, they're both aware of it and hoping it'll be ok. But there's some necessary trepidation, and even suspense that add to the hotness of it all.
Excellent writing!
And now there's only one more chapter before I have to wait for updates! Woe is me! :D
Date: 02/20/2008 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Hi! I got some sleep and now I'm back (don't have work today). And now I'm a little more coherent so I can tell you that I'm loving the little bits of the Buffy world you're throwing in - like Willow dating a werewolf, Giles' presence and the Harmony ref had me giggling like crazy.
I love the balance of light and dark too (not to mention HOT and sweet). Spike's nature is a problem, they're both aware of it and hoping it'll be ok. But there's some necessary trepidation, and even suspense that add to the hotness of it all.
Excellent writing!
And now there's only one more chapter before I have to wait for updates! Woe is me! :D
Date: 02/07/2008 - 05:54 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Love how tender he is and how it is causing the demon a bit of unrest. Gotta wonder what she will think of all that. Hope she can reconcile the roughness with him still loving her. Hope your muse is feeling better. Know I'll be here whenever that happens.
Date: 02/05/2008 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Awesome story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 02/05/2008 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Still here for the ride!! I couldn't keep away even if I wanted to, which I don't. :)
Date: 02/05/2008 - 07:07 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Love this chapter!
Date: 02/05/2008 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Oh yeah! You've still got an audience! Loved this chapter! So used to Spike not killing humans once he's fallen in love with Buffy. Very interesting to see him just as vicious as before, but not so with Buffy, with the exception of the rough sex. But, the tears and him falling asleep without really making sure the tears are good or bad has me a little worried. Please update soon!
Date: 02/03/2008 - 08:41 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
I'm still with you! :) Great update, this story is worth waiting for ;) I just loved it, so keep up the good work! / Ariadne
Date: 02/03/2008 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
just keeps getting better!
please post the next chapter soon.
Date: 02/03/2008 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Mmmm Spike is a wise one. Comes from living so long I guess. He can at last explain Riley's behavior (or his errors)...
Spike will be good for Buffy, he completes her (well not really but I can't express it better). But he is still feeding? I can understand why he isn't feeding (can't feed) from Buffy alone but I wonder if she'll take it in the long run that he kills to survive.
I wonder how they'll go along in the long run... so I'm looking forward to more. No, you didn't lost me, I'm still reading.
Date: 02/03/2008 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
You have countered his sweetness with Buffy when he tries to convince her of her own worth, with his merciless treatment of the girl in an alley. Her blood was necessary but her life was worthless to him.
Then he returns home and the demon reasserts his claim on Buffy. She has already met this other side of Spike, but is it a part of him that, if this treatment is going to be regular, she can embrace, adapt to - or ultimately fear and reject?
Powerful chapter.
Date: 02/03/2008 - 07:09 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02/03/2008 - 06:11 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
So happy to see another chapter for this story (although I loved tempt me not as well). Poor Buffy with the insecurity - hope Spike helps her with that (in a good smutty way of course).
Loved the post-feeding sex - wonder what Buffy will think of it...
Date: 02/03/2008 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
yay =]
you updated.
and of course you still have an audience
i think this is possibly one of my favourite spuffy stories of all time!!!
keep up the good work
Date: 02/03/2008 - 04:19 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
I think the answer is a resounding yes, you DO still have an audience. I had a feeling this was going to happen sooner or later, Spike hurting Buffy just a little to much after he's let the demon out to play. I also have a feeling that she's going to find out about the feeding too. She doesn't seem to connect the dots, feeding with killing the people he feeds from. But Buffy's not stupid, and eventually she's going to figure it out. Totally awesome chapter, I love the way you're moving things along. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 02/03/2008 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
OH that was good, wonder what she will do when she wakes up.
Date: 02/03/2008 - 02:15 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Still here, I've been anxiously waiting the update and you didn't disappoint. I love how you're showing Spike's struggle between man and demon. I'm looking forward to more of this story. Loved the kink at the end.
Date: 02/03/2008 - 01:20 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Spike is so sweet, trying to reassure Buffy. And am I a bad person to think it's ok for Spike to kill as he feeds? Oh well. I did think he might have picked Faith or someone who would whip his butt, but luckily no. Great chap.
Date: 02/03/2008 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
SPIKE NEEDS T CLAIM BUFFY!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i kinda am worried about his demon and i hope that he doesnt lose control. i really hope that everything works out well and i think that he should claim her. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX
Date: 02/02/2008 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Good to see the block was lifted - its frustrating when that happens And a great update this was. Interesting to see Spike adjust to having Buffy stay with him for awhile and still feed his basic needs. Can't wait for more sweety.
Date: 02/02/2008 - 10:47 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Uh-oh.....Spike's still a bit too beastly. And Buffy's still naive enough to think he isn't killing, just feeding.
Date: 02/02/2008 - 07:45 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
You couldn't tear me away from this fic! I'm soooo happy you updated! Especially now that things are going to get a bit complicated again. Not only do they have to deal with Riley the insane asshole, but now we know for sure that Spike kills when he feeds. When Buffy finds that out, I'm guessing she's not going to be too pleased. Glad to see your muse is still singing to you, and looking forward to more!
Date: 02/02/2008 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
Awesome story! I love the whole concept! I love your spike in this one.