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Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2007 - 04:36 am Title: Where Did It All Go Wrong?

Where did it all go wrong? I'd love to find out!!! More please!!!

Author's Response: Hopefully you should find out soon :)

Reviewer: lacey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 10:43 pm Title: Where Did It All Go Wrong?

hmm, not sure about this yet, i might need to read another chapter before i decide if it's something i will be continuing. just one thing, i think you meant for your title to be the way things were, not where. any typos in the title or summary would sometimes make people not check out the story, just a suggestion.

Author's Response: Thanks alot for the review and for the very helpful suggestions, definately will double check:)

Reviewer: grieveme Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 08:45 pm Title: Where Did It All Go Wrong?

i like it. it's amazing how pain and confusion can draw a person in, but whatever, i like this. please continue, i cant wait till the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely comment, it made me smile so much that I managed to draw you in, I was umming and ahhing if starting this way would make it a horrid read. Thanks x

Reviewer: Cissi Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2007 - 08:35 pm Title: Where Did It All Go Wrong?

Wow, I'm really liking this. You're writing with so much emotion I could really feel Spike and Buffy's pain. Really sad, but it seems to be a great start! Please continue :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely comment. I'm 3 quarters of the way through finishing the next chapter, so hopefully it should be posted either tomorrow or within the next 2/3 days.

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