*nods* A beta can help with the 'little things' and when she is good even with the plot (nothing plot holes).

Well I liked the story; good to see it end well. Looking forward to a sequel one day.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'd love to get a beta, but I'm not sure how to go about doing that. I guess I'll look around today to see if I can post somewhere saying that I'd like one.

And you're in luck for a sequel. I got inspired this morning. I just had a good idea that I couldn't pass up and the first chapter just came out in a rush. :) I'm still working on Father of Mine though and thinking about starting another story, but I don't want to being too much at once. Thanks so much for all of your reviews!