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Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 10:02 pm Title: chapter 29

Awwww Buffy's gonna stay with them!! YAY! And it seems strange, two brides and one groom...but hey, not knocking it! Great update!

Author's Response: takes all sorts and this makes Tara secure for life, cause Willow's beomes hers. glad you liked

Reviewer: dannii Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 07:41 pm Title: chapter 29

I LOVE THIS STORY THIS IS MY FAVOURITE,, LOVE THAT SHE IS PREGNANT

Author's Response: thank you for the kind words..and glad its a favourite. have you checked out my other stuff?

Reviewer: MrsP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 06:53 pm Title: chapter 29

Great descriptions of the preparations for the wedding. As always your writing creates such lovely pictures in my head (and yes, I know you laugh at that but it's just the way I'm wired; I'm a painter not a writer and I see the world in pictures.)

Heard a rumour somewhere that a bloke called Hrolf officiates at Norse style weddings; would that be your Hrolf by any chance?

Author's Response: glad you like the pictures. i try to say what i can see... and yes my Hrolf does do weddings...in the UK

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 01:29 pm Title: chapter 29

It was so nice to visit with Buffy, Willow, and Tara in this chapter. I'm glad Buffy had someone like Kelda looking after her at the beginning of her pregnancy, it's still so sad that William is missing out all all this. :( I also enjoyed the Willow/Tara talk, Connor definitely choose his wives well. :D Fantastic update!

Author's Response: thanks for the review. most Norse men would have missed that bit anyway, being aay from home for most of the year

Reviewer: Ava Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2008 - 12:17 am Title: chapter 29

It's so sad that they long for each other but can't be together, and that she's going to have his child. You can just imagine what great loving parents they would make together. The way you've written this really makes the reader be able to feel their emotions and those are the best kinds of stories - where you actually care what happens in the end. Thanks and very well done

Author's Response: many many thanks for your lovely review. i have tried to let people see what they are feeling and how torn they are between what they want and what they know is right. more soon

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2008 - 11:39 pm Title: chapter 29

Oh hon, this was positively an awesome chapter. A breath of fresh air despite Buffy's continued sadness over her loss of William. I adored how well Tara and Willow have come so far together as sister brides and them deliberating on filling the hall with children. I was beaming after they read Buffy's letter. Can't wait for your nex installment. Hugs and kisses.

Author's Response: many thanks for the kind words...more o the way as soon as i can

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2008 - 11:35 pm Title: chapter 29

Awwwww, that's so sweet and endearing. Methinks that Willow should correct the deficit in Saxon Tara's learning, or lack thereof, and teach her to read script, whether runic or? What about ogham? I get confused with that too. Somewhere in the back of my mind I remember there were different dialects, several different versions of runic script dependent on locality?
Plus certain things isolated to one area alone or another...? The way this came about was yrs ago I had a beau (in a medieval society) and we lived about 100 miles apart, pre-net days, so corresponded by letters romantically as well as (expensive) phone calls...we got mischievious & creative sometimes & began to send letters to one another written in various cyphers or alphabets...and the game was for the other to figure out what it was written in, where from, what it pertained to, etc...before being able to decipher the letter. Sometimes we stumped one another. I wrote him in Theban Script (occult) & he wrote back in Viking Runes...which was cool the first time, but later he found diff't versions/dialects etc....and if not using the right "key", it was nonsense...He stumped me a few there...luckily I had a book w/things like this, about 100 yrs old with all sorts of odd, wierd, historical & occult stuff in it...then I too Medieval Lit in college & had to READ *IN* the language & translate, of the piece, so ie, Old English, Middle English, Western dialects (I think it was---it used "thorns"?--runic combination sounds like "th" & "ng" etc almost like our contractions..., but apparently might've been significant to a specific locale/area???) Make any sense?
Now it'd be so easy to scan it in and either run a Opt Recog. Pgm or put up two windows side by side, one scanned, one a key...Plus, hey, these missives to each other were illuminated, and sometimes calligraphed, etc, depending on type...he was an incredible graphic artist. I think I still have a portrait he did of me in pencils, and a Green Man mask he sculpted on my balcony while I was in class for nursing school & he was visiting me, He cast it and made copies; I lost mine in my house fire, but when my best girlfriend died a few yrs ago, her copy was in the goods her sister shipped to me of things she thought I might like to have. I wish I had the missives, but they are long gone.
You should link us up with some examples of things in your A.N.'s, so we can see examples of the writing, carvings, etc, god/desses, tents, longhouses, etc...Having done the re-enacting thing, I've hung out in Viking A-frame tents, with carved dragon etc heads on the wooden beams of the frame, seen carved horn (Mr. F has even done some scrimshaw, as he's into all things sailor-y & naval, and is a "chantyman", a bard, singing sea chanties from numerous centuries. He also blacksmiths, carves horn (often for hilts) & bone, & wood a bit, & can drop spindle & work an Inkle loom). We had/have an acquaintance who is actually from Denmark, and follows a family's "runic tradition"? He speaks English really well, and does cool presentations on the Norse 'verse, but occasionally there's a language barrier to wade thru...sorry for the ramble...having puter probs, seriously think it's possessed, while I'm doing this...
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~



Author's Response: the runes would be fulthark and my DH reads and writes them very well:) i lost a lot of precious stuff in a house fire so know how hard it is... would love to set out the bits on a site, still trying to work out if i can

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2008 - 10:30 pm Title: chapter 29

Lovely chapter, you brought me to tears. That letter was so sweet. :) And Tara has a family who loves her :) / Ariadne

Author's Response: a true family of the heart. more soon. muse is playing hard to get today:)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2008 - 07:41 pm Title: chapter 29

Awe, good to see Buffy so happy even if she is still sad inside (can't express it better).
Tara is at a place where she belongs now. Good to see her blooming.
Sweet chapter; enjoyed the read.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2008 - 07:12 pm Title: chapter 29

Awwww, this chapter was so sweet. I'm so happy Buffy's pregnancy is going so well, that she has a new reason to live now and she might be returning to Connor's hall where everyone will dot on her. I loved seeing how Tara is faring now, how well she's doing now she's found a family that truly loves her. I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: returning to the hall for the wedding and the birth..glad you enjoyed...

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