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Date: 11/06/2008 - 11:11 pm Title: chapter 45

Dru and Darla have now done their part to be kept away from the wedding. The fight was fun and furious and I laughed at the image of Faith and Buffy sitting on the two complaining about the lousy quality of their weapons and their inability to fight. Anne is going to be well coddled in Buffy and William's household.

I'm looking forward to more punishments coming for William's ill mannered family.

Author's Response: thank you, i could just see them 'talking shop' while chaos erupts around them..thanks for taking the time to review

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2008 - 08:37 pm Title: chapter 44

The formal meeting was fascinating in its pageantry. There's such ceremony with each of these groups and you make it come to life.

Liam and Harold acting the put upon asses was appalling, though it seems they have finally overstepped enough to get justly punished. I doubt even blistered palms will keep these two under wraps, but finally something's being done about their boorish and cruel behavior.

Author's Response: again, thank you, and yes their punishment is on its way:)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2008 - 08:25 pm Title: chapter 43

This was another rich, emotional chapter. Anne's insistence on accompanying William to see his intended worked beautifully in forging yet another friendship between these Saxons and Norsemen. Her reaction to the warmth and genuine friendships William has made was pitch perfect. Lady Anne is going to find a loving family home with these two.

William and Buffy's wordless reunion was romantic and giddy and erotic. They have a lot to talk about, but there will be time enough for that after the wedding. William's shock and happiness at his daughter was a thing of beauty, mirroring Xander's reaction to Anya's presentation years before. I loved Anne's ‘You cuddle your lady, I’ve got the baby,’ she said determined not to let go of the child. " She's finally going to have a daughter-in-law and grandchildren that she can be proud of.

Author's Response: thank you, i hoped this was the reaction i would get, i'm glad it worked

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2008 - 08:10 pm Title: chapter 42

You built a wonderful amount of excited anticipation in this chapter. William's brothers petty tormenting could do little to dampen his spirits. He knows what's coming. I thoroughly enjoyed the frisson of panic that rant through the both of them at the sight of the Norse disembarking their ships. Here's hoping they and their cruel wives come to a brutal end some time soon.

Author's Response: cruel and unusual endings for angel, i promise...thanks for teh review

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2008 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 41

Buffy setting Jon up for a surprise freeing was charming. She really loves a surprise, and this was a corker. Her marriage to William to solidify a treaty between the Norse and the Saxons was an even greater surprise. It's no wonder she fainted dead away.

Author's Response: it was a 'poor buffy time..glad you enjoyed. thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2008 - 07:48 pm Title: chapter 40

William's rising star at court and the offering of trust in handling the negotiations was all beautifully realized. He enters into things whole heartedly, endeavoring to do his best to serve his king. It was wonderful to expose the small group of Saxons to some of the warmth and hospitality he had enjoyed. That should go a long way toward the groups trusting one another.

William's traitorous brothers were an unwelcome surprise, though the threat was cleverly handled in the short term. Harold and Liam are not going to stop until William is dead, so the threat is still strong. Everyone keeping quiet about William's daughter is interesting, though I can understand their respect for the woman keeping them from gossip. Is Ingiund negotiating a husband for Buffy? I certainly hope so.

Author's Response: I'm pleased that the weaving of the story works for you, this chapter was fun to write...

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2008 - 06:21 pm Title: chapter 30

William's return to his own people was bittersweet. He's blossomed with his "captors," and now he is able to hold his own with his brothers, but he's lost even more than he knows. Liam's humiliating defeat at his hands has made an enemy, so it's a good thing he and his mother are remaining with the king.

Tara not being ransomed by her father severed her ties with her family completely. It's lovely that she found a loving place in this hall. Both she and William deserve the love that they've found here. I'm sure William gets his chance to find his way back to Buffy, but there's still a lot of story to go. I'm enjoying each rich, emotional chapter.

Author's Response: a sad parting for william, and a bittersweet home coming...glad you liked...

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2008 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 20

The relationship between William and Buffy is lovely to read, and his imminent departure puts just the right amount of angst into the plot. Their love doesn't trump honor in either culture. William's view of this matriarchal society is also fascinating. He's adapting extremely easily, though it may be more due to his being treated well by the entire clan. He doesn't resent Buffy's wealth and power, it seems he's wholly accepted her.

Again, I commend you on the rich detail and vivid story telling. This world and these people are three dimensional and you make me care what happens to each of them.

Author's Response: thankyou for your kind words and for taking the time to review. it's lovely to know that someone is enjoying this tale.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2008 - 11:14 pm Title: chapter 10

Just read the first ten chapters of this fascinating story and wanted to say how much I'm enjoying the rich detail and vivid setting you've provided. William and Tara's reactions to this strange new world are wonderful. They've been adaptable and pliant, unlike Harmony. I'm already enjoying the connections these two are making amongst Buffy's people, and the Tara and Connor interaction is charming.

There's a strong sense of community in this group, and William and Tara should thrive under their roof. The glaring differences between this place and their own homes is being pointed out day by day. It's fascinating. I'm looking forward to finishing this up bit by bit.

Author's Response: this is my favourite period of history and i loved playing with our fav characters. hope you enjoy the rest

Reviewer: MrsP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2008 - 08:41 pm Title: chapter 58, Epilogue

Lovely story from beginning to end.

Wonderfully written and excellently plotted with just the right mix of detail and background explaination.

Thank you so much for sharing and I hope you write many more.



Author's Response: thanks, there are more in the pipe line buut i have a script to learn first:) wicked fairy in the panto

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2008 - 07:22 pm Title: chapter 58, Epilogue

Thanks for the entertaining ride... adventure, romance, drama, it was definitely a boat load of fun! You put so detail into it, at times it really jumped off the computer sceen and came to life for me. :D *misses the fic already* Loved the story!


Author's Response: what wonderful compliments, glad you enjoyed...thanks for the review

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2008 - 06:54 pm Title: chapter 58, Epilogue

I really loved this story, very good with the historical facts as well as writing deep characters. I hope to see more writing from you in the future.

Author's Response: its one of my fav periods in history, i have more stories in the planning stage...so there should be a new one early next year

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2008 - 04:22 pm Title: chapter 58, Epilogue

A thoroughly wonderful tale, I enjoyed all of it!

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2008 - 02:05 pm Title: chapter 58, Epilogue

Hahahhaha - loved the big brothers comment. I have two myself and yeah - they do tend to spoil you rotten, giggles. And YAY - I'd always secretly hoped Olaf would pursue Anne - and I don't think we needed any more of a hint that she'll accept - woo hoo! I like that they returned to where it started, it's a very fitting ending. A job well done my friend, I loved reading every word of it from beginning to end. Hugs you tight.

Author's Response: thanks for the lovely review, glad you ejoyed hugs

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2008 - 06:16 am Title: chapter 58, Epilogue

Wonderful, wonderful story. I have loved every chapter. Thank you for sharing. I will definitely read it again sometime.

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2008 - 04:38 am Title: chapter 58, Epilogue

Wonderful story. So happy for all of them. Thanks for all the effort you put into this.

Author's Response: thank you, i'm glad you enoyed

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2008 - 12:34 am Title: chapter 58, Epilogue

This was such a perfect ending for a wonderful tale, honey. Really well done! I love that Anne and Olaf will end up together and that even Giles traveled with them back home. And of course that they have their little Helga to complete their lovely family, I'm sad Helga died though. *sniffs* Lovely story, sweetie!

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed, and glad it worked for you, more stories soon

Reviewer: bw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2008 - 12:04 am Title: chapter 58, Epilogue

loved this story from beginning to end. Nice to see it finished but sad to see it stop. Loved the ending, it rounded it of nicely. I look forward to reading any future works

bw

Author's Response: thank you, glad you enjoyed and there are more stories in planing at the moment

Reviewer: Abbyland Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2008 - 10:38 pm Title: chapter 58, Epilogue

This is a fabulous, wondrous tale and I have thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your imagination, time and creative energy in making this one of the best Spuffy fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading. I am almost sad the journey has ended. Thanks again for sharing your talent.

Author's Response: you are welcome and thanks for the review

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2008 - 09:56 pm Title: chapter 58, Epilogue

Sad to know that this is the end of the story now :(
Poor Helga... are they going back to Buffy's lands now? Ah indeed. A journey to stay there I assume because they were so sad to leave Helga behind.
Thoughtful of Buffy to take Anne with them. Seems Anne is really interested in Olaf :) And if he is good for her, even better.
*sniff* Happy ending.
Loved the story; indeed sad to see it end now.

Author's Response: they are headed back to the northlands and Buffy's holdings...glad you enjoyed. and thanks for all the reviews you have left

Reviewer: flyingnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2008 - 09:44 pm Title: chapter 58, Epilogue

so sad to see it end..amazing story
I was with you from the beginning on this and now that it id complete I can go ahead and read it from start to finish. *sigh*

Author's Response: hope you enjoy it in one go as much as you seem to have enjoyed the serial...thanks for the review

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2008 - 09:37 pm Title: chapter 58, Epilogue

I can't believe this is finished. I loved it and will be looking for your next Spuffy adventures.

Author's Response: Its been a long road, but glad you enjoyed it. there are others on the way

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2008 - 08:13 pm Title: chapter 57

That was just AWESOME!!! I really have no other words of praise to offer because it was just THAT awesome. I had THE greatest chuckle over William's behavior tho - brings back good memories, hee hee - men really are quite useless unless given a job to do while we women give birth, LOL. Luv ya hon and can't wait for the final chappy.

Author's Response: so very glad you enjoyed...more very soon, when my muse allows...

Reviewer: Mere Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 10:41 pm Title: chapter 57

I just started reading this story last night and I haven't been able to stop. I love it! I can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response: i'm so glad you enjoyed, there is actually only one more chapter to go, hope you ejoy the last one. thanks for taking the time to review

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2008 - 06:37 pm Title: chapter 57

Poor William's emotions were really put through the wringer in this chapter, gotta say I found his nervousness incredibly endearing though. :-) And the twist with the twins was a wonderful surprise, can't wait to learn their names. :D Good update!

Author's Response: thank you, more when my muse allows, she has to be obeyed or she sulks!!

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