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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2007 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapters 17 & 18

Buffy imperiously calling Spike Ken and making him model shorts was hilarious, and then you get them tussling and touching and my mind goes to a very happy place.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2007 - 01:36 am Title: Chapters 17 & 18

OH that was good.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapters 17 & 18

Just checked again! This time I could get "Crush and Burn", but when I tried "A Bunny In The Oven" I was directed to a page identical to your homepage saying //FILE NOT FOUND//
The page you're looking for has either moved, is under construction, or doesn't exist.*pouts*

Guess I'll have to wait till you post it elsewhere!

Meantime, I got "Crash and Burn"!!!

Yeeee-y!

Thanx!
XXX

Author's Response: Oh, that's because I haven't put that one up yet. :) (BitO is the original unrevised first chapter of "Heart Don't Lie", which IS there -- first chapter and all. I'm putting that up just for the people who liked the original.) That should be the only missing story. Glad you found C&B!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapters 17 & 18

Love this story! It's like I can see -and hear- the characters! Tried to read it on your site, but it said the file wasn't there! Is it gonna be?

Please say yes, I've been trying to get to read other stories of yours there too, but quite a few of them are not available :(

Oh! and please keep posting:P
XXX

Author's Response: Everything is there. Did you try going to http://www.nautibitz.com/fic/ ? Glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: flyingnicole Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2007 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapters 17 & 18

great chapter....the tension between these two is amazing...can't wait to find out what happens next with them

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2007 - 09:31 pm Title: Chapters 17 & 18

I really love the banter (the conversation) = like this:
Naughty Buffy... Lookin' at my bulge. ~ It's right in my face! How can I not? ~ By lookin' at the bar that's about to crush your chest. ;-)
Heh and Buffy won :) Shopping trip.
And she even won the water fight *gg*.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2007 - 08:30 pm Title: Chapters 17 & 18

She's such an awful tease! LOL

Reviewer: Andrea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2007 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapters 17 & 18

It´s really fresh and funny, I like it

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