[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 06:25 pm Title: 34
Even more beautiful.
Author's Response: :-D Thank you, really glad you thought so! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 06:18 pm Title: 33
Painful!
and very beautiful.
Author's Response: Glad you thought so, hope the next chapter makes it all better for you!
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 06:10 pm Title: 32
Now what a way to end a picnic : )
Kudos!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it hun, thank you!!! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 05:44 pm Title: 34
Honey, that was just wonderful! Beautifully done! So looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: YAYYYYYYYYYYYY, I'm really glad you liked it!!! Thank you, angsty chapters worry me so much, I'm ecstatic you thought this was well written! More on Wednesday!*huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 05:24 pm Title: 34
*happy sobs* Aww, you fixed it already, yaay!! I was so afraid it would take many chapters before everything would be okay again, I'm so happy now! This chapter was really amazing, I really felt for both of them. Also, I'm so glad you're posting twice a week now! *does happydance*
Author's Response: Naaaah, I could never be as evil as you, making people worry for many chapters *coughs* Healing *coughs*! I'm really glad you liked it, honey, yayyyyyyy, thank yououououou!!! Hope you like what's coming too! Happy birthday again, *huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 02:48 pm Title: 34
YAY - you made it right, squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Stupid Xander anyway, poo. And omg but you're winding down your first story ever, *sniffles*. But with your newest fic, well, you know it's gonna ROCK my dalring sister. You're so full of bright ideas I wonder what else will be up your sleeve. Smoochies to you sweety.
Author's Response: Honey I love you to bits!!!!! I'm so glad you like it, thank you so much for everything! I am sad to see QS ending and you know I'm jittery about the new fic, but having you by my side makes me feel strong!*huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 02:13 pm Title: 34
aw, that was so cute! Still hate Xander, of course cause he was still an idiot, but it still was sooo sweet. I guess it's time for the family to come back from their family! I wonder what is going to happen next! *giggles*! I have absolutely no clue! lol!
Loves you hun!
*hugs you tightly*
Author's Response: LOL, you're a gem, you know that? And I love that you don't have a clue about the future! *giggles with you*Loves you more, *hugs tight back and smooches*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 01:04 pm Title: 34
Wow, I can just imagine how hard it must have been to write these last two chapters, honey, but you did it beautifully. They were angsty, yes, but they were done in a realistic, reasonable way. Especially this chapter, you made me run the full gamut of emotions, from Xander's guilt to Spike's rage and despair, then his resolution to get his girl back and his desperation when he couldn't get her back from the place she had gone within herself and Buffy's shock and guilt and loss and love. I'm glad they could put this past them, they make sense and that they made it through something as hard as this just means that they can get through the year since they can be truly together, they're unbreakable. Bravo, cariño! Take a bow, because you outdid yourself!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much, honey, I'm soooo glad you think I managed to do their emotional state justice!I too believe that since they made it through this they can make it through anything! *huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 12:52 pm Title: 34
Hey honey,
`ve just finished crying. :-) These last two chapters...brilliant work. I can see what you were talking about going back to that dark place and I totally understand never wishing to return there. Nut here you go, you made it, and the result is 2 wonderful chapters. And they made up, so bravo.
*hugs n kisses* Suz
Author's Response: Awwww, you're such a sweetheart! Part of me is sorry I made you cry, but the other part is ecstatic that what I wrote touched you this way! Thank you so very much, *smooches*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 12:22 pm Title: 34
Lovely! :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you thought so!!! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 12:19 pm Title: 34
Xander will fess up? Good, then I don't have to find a way to strangle him ;-)
I'm glad you made it better; Spike had to fight for it. You made me worried when Buffy didn't want to wake up again. But in a way it's a great break in the story = they have come to the end of their carefree time together now that her family has arrived / will arrive soon. Eh more the end of an era.
Looking forward to more :)
*hugs*
Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, lots of people wanted to strangle Xander!!I'm really happy you liked it, and yeah, it is the end of an era for them, but the next era may not be as bad as they think ;-)*hugs tight*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 12:17 pm Title: 33
Oh wow! Awesome chapter! I kept hoping we'd get to the juicy, angsty bits! :D
Author's Response: THANK YOU! I'm so glad you liked it!!! There's a bit more angst to come, but I'd say this was the worst of it!*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 12:00 pm Title: 34
Yayyyy Sotia - I'm glad Spike is the stubborn Spike and that Xander knew what he did wrong. This was fabulously written - I can't wait to see how they deal with the family being home.
Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm really glad you liked the way this was written! Hope you like what comes next!xxx
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 10:53 am Title: 34
Okay, i'm better now. You are AWSOME, there was soo much emotion in this chapter. i'm glad they made up and everyone's okay. i still think Xander needs to be punished, but it sounds like Willow will take care of that. More soon please.
Author's Response: Yayyyyyyy, my life isn't in danger anymore!!! I'm ecstatic you liked it, hun! Yeah, Xander is in serious need of punishment, but at least his heart was in the right place:-P Hope you like what's next too! *huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 10:26 am Title: 34
Well done hun, for managing to go to that dark place and channel it into something so beautiful. Buffy's stupor made me think of Cathy in Wuthering heights when she goes slightly mad before she dies when Heathcliff and Edgar fight- although of course Buffy's state wasn't brought about by jealousy and a desire to punish - nevertheless your writing brought that agitation and removal from reality immediately to mind.
I'm so glad they sorted it out though, now all we need is for a year to pass very very quickly OR for there to be some way that they don't have to be apart!
Sarah
x
Author's Response: Honey just bringing Cathy to your mind gave me a huge silly grin!!! I'm ecstatic you liked this! As for the second part of your review, I'l just say 'tehehehehehehe' and wink at you! :-P*huggles and smooches*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 08:37 am Title: 34
totally worth it (i.e. visiting your dark place); the chapter was excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you so much babe! The fact that you liked it means a lot!!!! Love you lots, φιλάκια!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 07:17 am Title: 34
I absolutely loved it, i think you captured that moment perfectly. To think you've lost someone you love is absolutely devastating and to get them back is almost worse for a while because of the guilt over what happened.
The brilliant thing is that by revisiting a dark place you've turned it into something beautiful with your words.
i meant what i said with the last review, anytime sweets!
this story is starting to dredge up things in me and that means that it's working, youre writing is touching others and thats all an author can ask for!
xox
L.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, sweety, I'm happy the depiction of their emotions worked for you cuz it really took a lot out of me to write it! The fact is that it also kind of exorcised some of the dark stuff, so I feel better for it! Thank you again for being there, you're a darling, and I can't begin to tell you how much I appreciate it!Managing to write something that touches people is more than I could dream of, you've made me a happy woman! *hugs and squishes*
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2008 - 07:16 am Title: 34
Hey sweetie, well that might have taken a lot out of you to write, but you did a brilliant job! The emotion in Spike's reaction was just amazing, had tears prickling in my eyes when he was shaking Buffy and screaming at her to look at him. Gracious!
And so, they are back together, but sadly not for long. I wonder how the seperation is going to effect our young lovers? Very interested and can't wait for Wednesday to read the next chapter. Ok, maybe I can wait because that will mean I am back at work, but at least there will be one good thing about returning...I get to read more of this!
Great job! LOVED IT!
Author's Response: Honey you cannot imagine how happy the fact that you liked it made me! *hugs you tight* Thank you so very much! The future holds surprises, and your questions will be answered soon ;-) *huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 02:30 pm Title: 32
i am kinda jealous! i soooooo wanna spend a night like that!! and the swing-thing... OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very good one! you rock babe!!!
Author's Response: I want a night like that too *sighs* Have to get a swing like that for my balcony methinks (and search the world for a boyfriend! lol)Thanks babe! *smooches*
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 02:28 pm Title: 33
well she pissed me off a little bit 'cause she doesn't mean a word of what she said ! ! !
BUT I shall admit that I liked it very much and that you're a great author my friend!
PS so u know, I kinda liked her reaction lol
Author's Response: LOL, I do love you, you know! *giggles* And keep talking me up, you're the best best friend ever - 13 more days babe! SQUEEEE!!! Love you!
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 02:17 pm Title: 33
Xander is stupid and Buffy can be a big b*tch. She is a good one to whine that she is tired of people trying to make decisions for her. I know it's just fiction. :) I can't wait for more. Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you, honey, I love it that this chapter made you leave such a passionate review! More tomorrow, hope you like!*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 02:14 pm Title: 33
No Buffy!! Wrong choice, definitely the wrong choice!!
*SOB* Sotia!!! *in a whiney tone* fix it!! please!!! now!!! I just wanted her to turn around so he could see how upset she was and call her on it :(
This didn't help my hangover young lady - I hope you're proud of yourself! :P
More soon please!
Sarah
x
oh and STUPID Xander that boy needs his arse kicked!
Author's Response: Sorry for your hangover hun! And yeah, I wanted her to turn around too, but shit happens in life, and they couldn't stay together forever, could they? Mwahahahaha!!! Just kidding woman, no need for violence! Trust me and trust Spuffy ;-) More tomorrow,*huggles*
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 11:58 am Title: 33
good one!
Author's Response: Huh. I was expecting a rant from you. LOL! Glad you liked, love you!
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 06:26 am Title: 33
OMG they had it all sorted and then along comes meddling Xander and now everything's shot to bits. Please let them sort this out before Spike leaves because it's just too sad - still loved it though!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it, thank you!! And trust me and my Spuffy-loving heart ;-) This story has a policy concerning angst... More tomorrow, hope you like,*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 12:44 am Title: 33
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you sweety!!!! *hugs*
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