i loved the story and can't wait to rea more of your stuff. The only problem I found was the many errors in text. I'm sure most of them are typos but they did make reading a little difficult. Do you have a Beta? It's something worth looking into.

I absolutely loved this story. There were a few places that could use polishing up with a Beta - and I seemed to get the impression that you might be Swedish and writing this in English. If that is true - it really puts me in awe. This story and was great and I loved the whole thing. Thanks everso for writing it.

i loved this. original story line and so sweet!

That was just...awesome and really beautiful. Loved it! Go Willow!

Author's Response: Thank you for the reviews, all of them! I'm glad you liked it.

awe. how cute was that?

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you.

Really enjoyed your fic!

Author's Response: Glad. Thank you so much!

I enjoyed reading this , thanks for writing it.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Execellent story. Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you liked.

Perfect ending here! I'm guessing that was Willow on the phone and that she didn't tell Buffy what she was gonna do. Also, love Buffy laughing about the Harmony thing! Great story. BTW, this isn't my first review I've just been reviewing as Dom.

Author's Response: Happy you've followed my story! Thanks for the review and I'm so glad you enjoyed the ending. Oh, and the call... like I wrote in another response I'm not gonna say anything about who it was.

Awwww! This was one great story! Thank you!

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Author's Response: Thank you for following me through the story. Happy you liked it!

Didn't expect Buffy to love, I feared she would have been more upset.
Glad it ended well with the claim now complete. And look there, Buffy had help finding Spike again :)

Author's Response: Thank you=) Happy you like.

I loved the story although I think you should either get a beta or just not rush with publishing. You have tons of mistakes. 'on' should sometimes be read as 'one', 'of' as 'off'. etc.
As I enjoyed the story so much it did not bother me but some readers might.
The other thing I want to comment on is the Spike of the past. What happened to him? Did he forget it all or not? Because if not and if he went through the next 2 years with unfinished claim it would have been torture. Besides, how do you explain that the future virtually did not change? If Spike knew two years before that Buffy would miss him, he would surely go to other in Rome and ignore the Immortal.


Author's Response: Thank you for pointing out some of my mistakes, I know I have some problems with grammar and especially with prepositions. The thing is that since English is not my mother language I most often can't just "see" if something is wrong, and even if I read the story carefully I still (as you've noticed) miss it. I'll think about what you said about getting a beta, or at least a better grammarprogram. I'd prefer not to say all this things you've asked questions about because I think it's up to the reader. Since none of us think a like I've mine point of view of this story, which I'm sure is different from yours. And some thing I just wanted to leave unfinished... but maybe I stepped to far... (?) Anyway, I really want to explain how I (I with a giant I) looked at past-Spike. I'd say that it was future-Spike that got sent back into past Spike's body with no memory and no soul. A little weak, yeah. But I'd say the whole story is crypthical. I didn't name it "Nothing Like Dreaming" for nothing. I mean, was it a dream? Or did any of them really go back to the past? But how do I explain the claim then? Did it just show up? For this story, you get to have your own truth. I really appreciate your review; thank you!