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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2007 - 03:16 pm Title: Nightmares

Thanks for the warning but I stay by my opinion: Put that on the summary that is on the main page. Then everybody is warned if he want to read it or not. You did it for your other story that way too.
So William lost his memories completely. He only remembers in nightmare. And even he remembers Buffy face he doesn't remember more. That's really sad.
If only Ana had mentioned it to the new Council. I think it would have been expected from her.
Faith met William? I fear she won't tell a soul either about that fact.
Good for the memory flashes though. Maybe the memory will come back.
I didn't like the Spike/other part especially when William does it to forget a special blond he can't remember clearly. but I guess you didn't expect I would. At last the next chapter is up.

Author's Response: I have now updated the story with a change of warning concerning the Spike/Other part. Thx for your pointers - they help mold me into a better (hopefully) writer. xoxo

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2007 - 04:04 am Title: Nightmares

Love that the first name is Angel and that he encountered Faith. More please soon.

Reviewer: ComeUndoneRob Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2007 - 06:38 pm Title: Nightmares

that was a nice chapter, it's good that spike is remembering something... obviously for us spuffy lovers is a little sad the spike/other thing but i think that we can go over because it's not about love, right? I really think that I've done enough errors (I'm italian, forgive me!)... i'll wait for the next chapter...

Reviewer: Katkin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2007 - 05:23 pm Title: Nightmares

Opps sorry forgot to put anything else in there didn't I!

Hope Faith mentions the uncanny likeness of the man she bumped into on the street to Buffy and also, hmmm does it seem that Spike is starting to get his memories back? brilliant chapter, need next one as soon as you can possibly update! xx

Author's Response: Thx for reviewing! Will work on the next chapter as quickly as possible :) xoxo

Reviewer: Katkin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2007 - 05:19 pm Title: Nightmares

Next chapter please!

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