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Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2008 - 12:31 am Title: As Time Passes By...

Oh my gosh, I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you really like it. :)

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2008 - 12:23 am Title: Making the Call

Excited to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks!

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2008 - 12:20 am Title: A Parting Gift

I'm so sad for her. I'm going off now to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm glad I've attracted another reader. I hope you continue to read the story and enjoy it. The first chapter was sad, even for me writing it.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 11:02 pm Title: Taking A Chance

That was my review down there , i hit the wrong key in my name, tee hee.

Author's Response: Okies. Thanks for letting me know. :)

Thanks for the review too! I'm glad this chapter gave you the warm fuzzies. It was fun to write too. The next chapter should be full of warm fuzzies too.

Reviewer: JOI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 10:59 pm Title: Taking A Chance

Awwww that chapter gave me the warm fuzzies especially the end of it,with them just sitting together. Loving this a little bit more each chapter, update soon.

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 09:16 pm Title: Taking A Chance

Hard for Harmony to understand whey Spike is breaking up with her; she doesn't know his background. Hopefully she'll understood it. If it wasn't for our spuffy pair I would feel bad for her.
I'm right here with Spike, he was an idiot o let Buffy go. A lot to make up to.
Enjoyed the meeting

Author's Response: I can't say that I feel bad for her right now either. I like Spuffy too much to care about Harm's feelings. I'm toying with the idea of having her resurface later though. -wink, wink- Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 08:27 pm Title: Taking A Chance

That was sweet. But I am afraid Harmony will not give Spike up so easily...
Update soon!


Author's Response: Perhaps...

Truth be told, I'm not sure what I'm going to do with Harmony just yet.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 01:31 pm Title: How do we start over?

Okay it's a start , a pretty good start , and what does she mean she doesn't know if she could love him again , she sooo does love him. can't wait for him to see his son. Update again soon , please.

Author's Response: Well yeah, she still loves him, but she doesn't want to get left behind again. She's afraid of getting hurt... but you'll like the new chapter. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 12:35 pm Title: How do we start over?

Well Spike can be mad that Buffy didn't tell him about his son. But he left her and not the other way around. He could have contacted her but he was content to get a new girlfriend. He can't throw stones at her.
*nods* He said it himself. Mainly his fault.
So I guess it's up to him to make up for lost time, invest some work into getting her back. And get rid off Harmony who is the reason he didn't know about his son.

Author's Response: True, true. And now you get to see the last of Harmony (hopefully). I'm posting the update now!

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 11:38 am Title: How do we start over?

Well girl, I like the story very much so far!
I can`t wait to read what happens when lil` William meets his father! Keep on writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! And now you get to see what happens! Check out the new update!

Reviewer: Spiked_Slayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 10:33 pm Title: Awake Now

Really good!!!! I like it a whole lot!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad that you like it :) There's an update coming tonight, so I hope you continue reading the story. :)

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 07:31 pm Title: Awake Now

I'm having a little trouble, no make that a lot of trouble, with William. Supposedly him and Buffy are best pals and he goes away to school and forgets about her within a couple of weeks and quickly hooks up with Harmony just for the sex!?! In my books that makes him a creep, not the 'love of your life' guy.
I'm going to keep with the story though to see where you go with it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I can see your point of view, but I guess when I was writing it I just didn't make it realistic. It's a story so I made it what I wanted it to be.

I hope you continue to read it. The update is coming tonight. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Maia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 07:30 pm Title: Awake Now

I just read this story for the first time and I simply cannot wait to see where you take it!

Please update soon!

Author's Response: Oh yay! I'm glad to hear you like it. :) Update is coming tonight. :) Thanks! And keep reviewing!

Reviewer: Cissi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 03:11 pm Title: Awake Now

Wow, I missed 2 chapters of this amazing story! I'm really ashamed of myself... But on the other hand, I got more to read at the same time ;)
And I need to thank you for writing such nice words about me in the last chapter, that was so sweet of you honey :) Made me all happy! :)
I loved this chapter, I could really feel the tension and the sadness. It's truly well written. You gotta post the next chapter soon :) Thanks for an amazing update hun!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks hun. I love you're stories, so you are very welcome for the kind words. I need to go over and review on Twisted Fate. I just started reading it the other day and couldn't stop. Loved it!

As for your wish of a new chapter.... your wish is coming true... tonight. :) Hope ya like it!

Reviewer: Nicki Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 09:18 am Title: Awake Now

Can't wait to see how the next chapter plays out. Love the fact that he's excited and can't wait for more!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you like it! :) I've been thinking about this story a lot lately and came up with some good ideas and plans. So... chapter 5 will be coming tonight. Thanks again & keep reviewing. :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 12:13 am Title: Awake Now

Yess, now he knows , I hope he see's his sonn soon and no monkey wrench gets thrown into the works , update soon , really like this story.

Author's Response: Yep, he knows now. Hmm... what will happen next? I'm planning on him meeting little Will soon... very possibly in the next chapter. I'll work on getting an update out asap. Thanks for the review! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 11:18 pm Title: Awake Now

I'm glad that Buffy told him, he deserved to know he had a child. And he took it well, no denying and all, that's good. He missed so much.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: He has missed a lot, but I'm working on a way to make it good and sweet now. :) I think there will be some angst too though. Every story has a little angst, right?

Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2008 - 01:32 am Title: As Time Passes By...

please post again soon, don't leave it hanging there, please please please. PS like it by the way

Author's Response: I'm not going to leave it there. I'm just trying to think out what happens next. :) The update should be in sometime in the next week.

And I'm glad that you like it. :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2008 - 10:29 pm Title: As Time Passes By...

Can't blame Buffy for not wanting to get involved again after what happened with William. More please!

Author's Response: Haha. Coming soon! Thanks :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2008 - 09:27 pm Title: As Time Passes By...

Five years... a lot missed time for William. And tough for Buffy. How is the saying? What doesn't kill you makes you harder (tougher). Buffy learned to live on her own because she had to.
And Spike was busy with Harmony (and his work). I'm glad she run into Spike aka William now. Hopefully some things will be explained now.

Author's Response: This 'little' encounter will definitely get the ball rolling for the two of them. :) Thanks cordykitten!

Reviewer: flyingnicole Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2008 - 03:26 pm Title: As Time Passes By...

can't wait to see the interaction between Buffy and Spike, that is once she awakens

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm definitely gonna have to think about how to proceed from here. I'll try to have a new update in the next week. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Ivana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2008 - 09:12 am Title: As Time Passes By...

I love this chapter. I like how you describe Buffy as mom, how she's teaching her son manners! that was so cute!
and I can't wait to see where will you go from here.
I must say that I laugh at idea of Spike and Harmony being soooo long together. hope this means you want have Drussila in this story because I'd like for this to be a fic without so evil and scary people as Drussila alway is!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad! I really wanted to show how she was with Will. I'm not planning on putting Dru in the story, and I totally agree with the weirdness of Harmony & Spike being together for so long. But it is a on/off relationship... Harmony's just so fickle. Ah... thank you! I'll be working on the next chapter soon. I just want to update my other fic first. I should be updating here in the next week though. :)

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2008 - 08:31 am Title: As Time Passes By...

great update. i bet there will be a mix up over fred though.
looking forward to more

Author's Response: Good idea! I hadn't thought of that yet, but it could definitely show up. Thanks!

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2008 - 07:59 am Title: As Time Passes By...

Love the fainting! I have to say I'm a little disappointed that it's been 5 years. I always get a little sad when I read stories where a good guy misses out on the beginning of his child's life b/c a girl was too scared to tell him when she first found out. I'm gonna guess she's not gonna be exactly forthcoming now either especially when she realizes he's there for Harmony! I hope when Spike eventually finds out he gets at least a little angry since he has every right to be. Then I hope for an ending that makes it all worth it!

Author's Response: I thought of the fainting at the last minute, and thought it would serve as a good cliffhanger. Tee hee. I'm still thinking about how to play out the conversation when she wakes up. Hmm... and yeah, it is sad that he missed all the baby stuff. It's not meant to be a sad fic though so there will be more happy moments and hope for the future. Thanks for reviewing! Till next time!

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2008 - 07:55 am Title: As Time Passes By...

Great chapter! I wonder if she's gonna tell him as soon as she's awake or not... Can't wait to read the next part!

Author's Response: Thanks! And oh the suspense... :)

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