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Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2008 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter Three

Can't really blame Buffy. She wasn't told William had a twin. More please!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2008 - 08:25 am Title: Chapter Three

Interesting, it should be interesting to see how it goes.

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2008 - 07:40 am Title: Chapter Three

Auwtch... I get that William's mad at Buffy, but why would she take any blame? They didn't have sex yet, so she couldn't know how he would kiss her in -for a lack of better word- throws of passion?

Ooh well, you're the writer and the chapter was great! I wonder who she will chose in the end.. I'm hoping Spike, cause it seems that William wasn't really honest with her.

Thanks for the quick update!

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2008 - 06:58 am Title: Chapter Three

That confession came a little too soon for me. I felt like it was something they both should have carried around and felt guilty for. Either way Will and Buffy both have reasons to be upset here even if Will isn't willing to admit that yet. I mean, his secret did lead to Buffy having sex with a strange man! Want to see what happens next!

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Date: 01/05/2008 - 06:45 am Title: Chapter Two

Not quite what I was expecting. I thought maybe Will had intended for Buffy to meet Spike and that's why he invited her over but this was unexpected. Want to see how this plays out...

Reviewer: Deana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2008 - 04:29 am Title: Chapter Three

First, you seriously need a beta or re-read everything again before posting your chapters. So many grammar errors I found in there. Also, the story seems to be rushed, no real emotions behind the writing. I'm sorry if this sounds a little harsh. Just pointing out the things that you can work on to make your writing better. With that being said, I'm not saying I'm an expert in English, since it's my second language, but I am an avid reader, so I know when I read good fics or not. Hope you'll take this as a positive advice. :-)

Reviewer: Sasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2008 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter Three

This needs some work, i agree about you needing a beta. you keep putting your when it should be you're, everything is also moving a bit fast for me. i might give one more chapter a chance.

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2008 - 09:29 pm Title: Chapter Two

Is anyone in that room a halfway decent person at all?
Because Buffy? What a bitch. She should grovel at his feet for cheating, because sleeping with William´s twin is waaaay worse than him not talking about the family he despises. And she is lying now, too, because she doesn´t have the guts to tell him what happened. Spike? - Complete asshole. My sympathy is with William here, the other two disgust me to extremes.
And by the way I´m ranting you know your story has me climbing the walls.

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2008 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter Two

They didn't tell him?!? Auwtch I bet it's not gonna be pretty when he finds out afterwards... Great update, can't wait to see where you'll take this!

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2008 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Two

This is not a flame. The story is good, but very reminiscent of one by Ashlee and hints of the new one by Greyangel. It is not a crime to use the same idea as another author (lord knows, it is almost impossible to come up with something that has not been done before), but you need to read those stories (if you have not already) to make sure that you are not skirting the plagerism line. The line from the first chapter about baked pineapples I know I have heard somewhere before and the other story you have posted here seems familiar as well. I am not accusing you, just making you aware. Also, the first chapter seemed pretty clear of error, but this one did have a few grammar problems, so you might want to get a beta.

Reviewer: Aidan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2008 - 01:35 pm Title: Chapter One

Oh my god. that is crazy

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2008 - 11:11 am Title: Chapter One

Great start! I hope you'll update soon.

Reviewer: PrettyGirlBPD Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2008 - 05:24 am Title: Chapter One

Now that is the way to start off a story!!! Let me guess... William's twin brother Spike? That was glorious hotness! Hoping there is more where that came from! Maybe William will step up his game to fight for Buffy or perhaps a threesome? *nearly faints* Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: asha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2008 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter One

oooh it's a twin fic, i knew it lol. can't wait to see what happens

Reviewer: stacie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2008 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter One

hmm, sounds very familiar to another story i read a while ago, hopefully this one would go in a completely different direction.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2008 - 10:36 pm Title: Chapter One

Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2008 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter One

That could be a problem, love it though.

Reviewer: Denise Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2008 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter One

I loved this. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Nathalie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2008 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter One

Loved what I've read so far.
Please continue

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