Can't really blame Buffy. She wasn't told William had a twin. More please!

Auwtch... I get that William's mad at Buffy, but why would she take any blame? They didn't have sex yet, so she couldn't know how he would kiss her in -for a lack of better word- throws of passion?

Ooh well, you're the writer and the chapter was great! I wonder who she will chose in the end.. I'm hoping Spike, cause it seems that William wasn't really honest with her.

Thanks for the quick update!

First, you seriously need a beta or re-read everything again before posting your chapters. So many grammar errors I found in there. Also, the story seems to be rushed, no real emotions behind the writing. I'm sorry if this sounds a little harsh. Just pointing out the things that you can work on to make your writing better. With that being said, I'm not saying I'm an expert in English, since it's my second language, but I am an avid reader, so I know when I read good fics or not. Hope you'll take this as a positive advice. :-)