[Report This]Date: 02/15/2008 - 07:53 pm Title: Five
LOL, well... I did leave a review for the last chapter it seems... Oh well, you get another :D!
So the transformation for Buffy is so WAY COOL! Violet... mmmmm love purple. And now their bonded...SWEET! You go girl! And you could have posted this chapter even without me...you've got it going on! But thanks for the nod.
Author's Response: You may not have thought it needed any work but I would never have had the guts to post this chapter without you assuring me it was good. So trust me the nod was well deserved!
Yeah I thought the violet eyes was a nice touch... lol! I love purple!
[Report This]Date: 02/15/2008 - 07:51 pm Title: Four
Sorry I didn't leave a review for this chapter! My bad! Great work hun, and I'm glad the poof is staying with Cordy...they deserve each other. Awwww, and I love they way Buffy said "I love you" to Spike... hehehe "say it again..." LOL
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you! you know I love getting a glowing review from my favorite beta!
[Report This]Date: 02/15/2008 - 06:19 pm Title: Five
okay, great scene but wtf happened to Buffy?? c'mon Erin!! give it up! :)
Author's Response: lol! I would love to share but your going to have to wait like everyone else. Hopefully the next chapter will be done soon! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2008 - 10:11 pm Title: Five
Very hot! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Well I cant wait until I actually get the next chapter written so I can post it.
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/10/2008 - 02:58 pm Title: Five
As long as Spike gets Buffy I don't mind Angel getting his shanshu ;-)
H O T :) And Buffy even has fangs now? Cute :) Her inner slayer? Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Well of course Spike is going to get Buffy! Like I would put her with the Poof! LOL! I should have more up soon! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/09/2008 - 07:38 pm Title: Five
good chapter! liked the last little bit especially! looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/09/2008 - 07:16 am Title: Five
OMG Erin! This was HOT!!!
Good smut, good expression of emotions, very good claiming!!!
Bravo, girl! Really glad to have woken up to this!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response: LOL! Well you know I did it just for you! There was no was i could let you go without smut!
LMAO! I'm glad you liked it, thanks for everything!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2008 - 10:00 pm Title: Four
So Angel got his prophecy and even more. Harsh decision he has to make.
Good to see Buffy and Spike talking :) That's a good start.
Author's Response: I'm glad your enjoying it, and I'm glad that you seem to like Angel getting the shanshu!
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2008 - 05:27 am Title: Four
Much as I wanna get to the smut, I really liked this chapter!
Again, you have all the voices right and the choice Angel was presented with intrigued me...!!!
LOVE Cordy, LOL, and LURVE how Buffy and Spike admit their love without having second thoughts and going around the subject in circles!
Well done!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping you would like it! And I dont think I will be keeping you waiting for chapter five. I might post it tomorrow...
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2008 - 04:23 am Title: Four
okay, Erin, i'm really liking this story. i think it can go far. i like ur writing. u're really talented.
that being said:
oh HELL NO!!! ANGEL is HUMAN!! ANGEL!!! what freakin' bizarro world did i wake up in????? (quoting Cordy there. heh.) *bangs head against keyboard* i SOOO hope that Spike gets a sweet deal out of this!!!! he has too!!! Angel SIGNED the Shansu AWAY!!! AWAY!!! there's no givesy-backsey!!!! omg!! omFg! fix Erin!! please! PLEASE!!
and i'm reading/writing this drunk too! DRUNK!! that just makes it worse! *cries*
i still like ur story though. :)
Author's Response: LMAO!!!! Girl you are crazy! I do hope you like where I take Spike in this and I really hope you dont hate it and therefore change your mind about this story. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2008 - 12:11 am Title: Four
Wonderful chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I really glad your enjoying it! I should have the next chapter up in a day or two! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2008 - 10:55 pm Title: Four
okay i got a little lost with the explanation of angel's choice could you clearify it seemed like the same thing.
Author's Response: I'm sorry it was confusing! He has to chose between living as a human with his memories and possibly continuing the good fight or living a completely normal life where the powers will take his memories from him. He wont remember anything about being a vampire or that there are demons or anything. He just has to chose which one he wants.
I hope that helps! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2008 - 10:44 pm Title: Four
So sorry for taking so long hun, but I hope it's worth it! I love the line "The Sam's Shoe Thingy" when I first read it, that was a riot! I can't wait to look at the next chapter... mmmmm SMUT! Yeah! Great job hun!
Author's Response: Thanks sweetie! But we know there was no way i would have gotten Cordy right without you help! *Hugs*
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2008 - 07:31 am Title: Three
okay E wtF?????? he better not be human!!! HE BETTER NOT!!!!! oh i'm gettin' mad! update!!!!
Author's Response: Girl you need to calm down! You might bust a blood vessel or something! Oh and you and everyone else will just have to wait and see what happens!
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2008 - 07:24 am Title: Two
sooo biting my nails here!
Author's Response: Be careful! You might draw blood it you bit them too much! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2008 - 11:20 pm Title: Three
It's good that Spike and Buffy had a chance to start to catch up. Love to know what's happening to Angel. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Well chapter 4 is almost ready so you may not have to wait long. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2008 - 11:08 pm Title: Three
Good to see Buffy and Spike talking :) And another cliffhanger again *gg*. I wonder if Angel shanshued...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad your enjoying the story. You will just have to wait and see what happenes with Angel.
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2008 - 01:25 pm Title: Three
it's good so far i hope angel isn't shanshued i want that for spike or maybe that can both be why not. or is he feeling Cordy coming back?
Author's Response: I can give nothing away but some answers will be givin in the next chapter, Thanks so much for the levely review!
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2008 - 12:23 pm Title: Three
I love kissage...mmmmmm hehehehe. Great job hun, love those cliff hangers! Thanks for your sweet words, but it was all you...you wrote the bloody thing!
Author's Response: MMM, Spuffy kissage... Oh right I was answering a review... sorry but... spike lips, lips of spike!
LOL!
Yes I wrote it but you kept it from looking and sounding stupid!
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2008 - 08:06 am Title: Three
cliff hangers are good! Don't apologise! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I think Sotia may disagree though, I thought she was going to start throwing things, she even tried to blame DarkRiverTempest for influencing me! lol!
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2008 - 06:12 am Title: Three
'When no one spoke, he began to wonder if they were ever going to say anything. He definitely didn’t want to spend the rest of his unlife this way, so he spoke up.
and
Spike hadn't actually planned on kissing her, but who was he kidding? None of his plans seemed to work out anyway.
had me rolling on the floor laughing (well, almost! I'm at work after all :P)
Loved the Buffy/Spike interaction... and the kissage :D
Oh, and I have a couple of thoughts on what's happening, but I won't write them here ;)
Great chapter, now more... I mean now, seriously!
*hugs*
Author's Response: LOL! I know you want the chapter that gets all smutty but I figured you would like the kissage until I can give it to you! Im glad you liked it! Now I just have to et going on the next chapter...
[Report This]Date: 01/30/2008 - 05:12 am Title: Two
Glad to know how the fight went down! A bit sad to see Illyria go though. Loved that bit about peroxide and hair gel! Things are about to get interesting for Buffy and the vamps she loves!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2008 - 10:51 pm Title: Two
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Im glad your enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2008 - 09:35 pm Title: Two
Oh my god! I sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo can't wait for ur next 1
luv yhoo!
dessie
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad your enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2008 - 08:31 pm Title: Two
Yay for another chapter after that cliffhanger.
*reads on* Well look there, ... another cliffhanger ;-)
So that was the reason that they were able to beat W&H's demons. But I fear too that W&H will think of another way to kill them.
I wonder if we'll see Illyria again. And now I'm looking forward to the meeting with Buffy :)
Author's Response: The next chapter should be up n a few days I hope and you will just have to wait and see what happens with W&H. I'm sure its a few Cliffhangers away! LOL!
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