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Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three

Huh? Who did Willow call???

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three

I haven't reviewed before - sorry - I just read everyting up 'till this chapter now - THIS IS SOOOO GOOOD!!! I was reading double time to catch all the action, the exitement and the little twists and turns. So well done!!

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three

Please please PLEASE give me more!!!!!

Reviewer: foreveralways Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three

yay willow...

Author's Response: I love Willow, at least most of the time. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three


Willow knows something? Hmmmmmm, very interesting indeed. And I wonder – was that Xander on the phone, maybe he’s now a police chief? Hopefully Willow is truly going to help her friend – sorry, my wheels are spinning madly trying to guess things. And thinking back on last chapter – Angelus has to have known who Buffy and Gunn were, b/c how else would he have known to send someone to kill Giles, assuming I’m correct in my speculations anyway. Can’t wait for next chapter sweety – well done on this one.


Author's Response: I love that people are trying to work out the truth...it's fun to keep you all guessing! Good catch on the fact that Angelus must know who they are...wonder what he's planning to do next...Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 09:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three

Wow! Very intrigued now! You have a fantastic style of writing, you pull me into the story every time! I wonder if Willow is good or bad... I'm hoping she works for Buffy's side but you never can tell....
Can't wait to read your next update!

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments! So glad you're enjoying

Reviewer: Julia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 09:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three

So... I'm catching up with your story because I didn't have much time to read in a little while. And I have to say... fantastic storyline. But I worry about Spike (of course) and whom Willow called! Hope none of Angelus men. It could be Fred... and I really hope it will be her.
I'm so looking forward your next update. Have to say.... at first I really didn't want to read any undercover story because I love Criminal Games and I didn't want to spoil my imagination how your story will be. But... I love your story exactly the same :) ... so... please continue.

Author's Response: I looked up "Criminal Games', hadn't heard of it before! I'll have to read it soon if you think it's good. Glad you're enjoying my story, and that it's different enough to intrigue you!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 07:00 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three

And the plot thickens some more. This is so good I am now bouncing up and down on the edge of my seat. Fab.

Author's Response: Yay, I made someone bounce! Haha. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 05:46 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three

Do I sense a... Xander coming...? :)*

Author's Response: Perhaps, perhaps. You'll find out soon! ;)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three

OHH I WONDER WHO SHE CALLED!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im SOO glad that she went to willow and that shes helping buffy out. i REALLY hope that spike is ok and that gunn comes to his senses. also i hope that angelus ends up in jail soon and that buffy and spike get together and are happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thanks, sarah g! Glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three

Oh I wonder who Willow called.

Author's Response: You'll find out soon! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Tanit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three

Willow! Yay! Or not? Why did she tense up when Buffy began the Spike part of her tale?

Who is Willow's mysterious phone buddy? Have we met them before? hmm... I can hardly wait until tomorrow! :)

Author's Response: Hmmm wonder who it is? You'll find out soon though! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: beastie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter Twenty Three

i hope spikes okay and Buffy has help now so hopefullly everything well turn out good.


Great chapter ...love this story

Author's Response: Thanks, beastie! Hope things turn out a way you like. :)

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