I love this story. Can't wait for another chapter. =]

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like it, will be updating soon hopefully.

Oh my, just like I feared. Now Buffy has hurt Spike too. And now? *wonders*

Author's Response: You won't have to wonder for long i will be updateing soon ;)

Hey there,

I can see you desperately want this to work, but there are still glaring errors in the story... some simple, some not.

A good example is in one of the first lines - Willow says to Spike: "Spike, your back."

All I could do was picture him twisting and turning to see what was hanging off his back! The correct use of of the word 'your' here is 'you're', as in 'you are'. It's simple, but it's a mistake that is easily picked up if you had been reading through and knowing what to look for.

Similar mistakes are made constantly throughout, and I can't help but feel that if your story has required *so* much work already, and it's still not anywhere near top form, maybe you need to stop, and read up on the basics.... read other people's fics, look up books or sites on grammar, spelling, punctuation etc...

It's not hard, but it will go a long way in getting people to actually want to read your work.

Author's Response: I appreciate your honest but I think my Beta has done an excellent job on this fic, it may not be perfect but I'm not a grammar Nazi.

Ah Buffy is human too, that did she mean in the last chapter. So the main reason Buffy went to L.A. was to become a vampire again. Spike didn't take it too well that Buffy didn't want his help; looking forward to what will happen now.

Author's Response: Thanks.

I like the story so far and will read on because I want to find out what will happen.
Sound as if Buffy got a soul because she was so tortured? Or was it just getting her memories back?
(I would suggest to try to find a beta. Some things like i instead of I a spell check can find, but it can't see the difference between pail and pale. I should know, if I sometimes read my reviews again a see typos I didn't see before. *g*)
Looking forward to more. You know how to do cliffhangers ;-)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, i have posted a new chapter that explains that her soul is weighing heavy on her. I'm looking into a Beta just waiting to hear back from a few people until then I'll try to be more careful. lol yeah i do like to keep people guessing ;)

Another great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks for the great reviews :)

Mwahaha! I remember this story...I thought I fixes some of this up 4 u? or maybe it was on my to do list? I dunno. Im gunna read it again coz I like it so much!

Author's Response: Yeah it was on your list of things to do, the only one you got to was Hope. ;)

I like the story but I think you may need to work on the grammer/spelling in this one a little more. For example you use the word "know" when you should use the word "no"; "and" instead of "an". Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review, i'm glad your enjoying the story so far... i'm sorry for the mistakes i have a habit of getting focused on a story and not looking it over properly I'll try to be more careful... thanks again.