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Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2009 - 07:52 pm Title: Revelations

Just found this wonderful fic again after I began it what seems like aeons ago... devastated not to see an update for so long. Please don't tell be it's been abandoned just as it's getting to the meaty bits.....

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2008 - 10:52 pm Title: Revelations

Oh lucky for them the connection is still active. They needed a little luck here.
Awe, now even Buffy is lucky about having told their secret. Maybe the timing wasn't right but telling was.

Reviewer: Lou Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 09:17 am Title: Revelations

Although it wasn't exactly the best time for Buffy's reveal, it's probably just as well Spike took a stand there. It might never have happened once the truth spell ended!

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 09:11 pm Title: Revelations

aawww! she said it! :)

Reviewer: Tanit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2008 - 05:09 pm Title: Revelations

I just adore the whole truthiness of this story.

Hope they get to Willow in time. The fallout when everyone learns she's the one responsible for their forced honesty should prove interesting!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2008 - 08:54 pm Title: Kleptomania and other catastrophes

Hi :) I see you managed to take the link out (from ch. 8). Now the letters are write; I don't know why, the other chapter is good. (And I can make the letters bigger, so YAY *g*) (When copying to Word I see the end of the chapter to early) ;-)
So Willy knew indeed what's the what with the new big bad.
Loved the Spuffy moment when Spike calmed Buffy down. And then the spell did strike again, a new secret out.
Seems it was a very good thing for Dawn to happen. And yeah, Spike was cute :)

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 01:31 am Title: Kleptomania and other catastrophes

Ooh! I missed a couple of updates of this fic. But I just caught up and I'm enjoying it more than ever. Nice plot twist with the new demons, and the Spuffy is moving along sweetly. :D

Reviewer: lisa_dec Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 - 02:13 pm Title: Kleptomania and other catastrophes

I remember reviewing this in the beginning, but then I must have missed a whole bunch of updates. How could that happen?! Well, I'm really enjoying the story :) And now I had a lot to read!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2008 - 09:28 pm Title: The Arachardim

Looks to me as if you don't know how to fix the wrong format in the chapter. Or take the link to Photobucket out of the link like it is done here with the icon. If you don't know what I'm talking about, just ask.
If you need to make the letters bigger and you can't is a bit annoying. Lucky one if you still have good eyes /*end ramble*
The Arachardim don't sound good, more like trouble. Glad they won't stay at Earth but bad that they want to take Willow with them and kill her.
Enjoyed the Spuffy moment.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your feedback for this fic so far =). As for my lousy formatting, you're right, I'm not really sure what is wrong with it. When I load up a chapter of my fic, it comes up fine (not centered) regardless of whether or not I'm signed in and the writing is the same size as that in other people's fics, so I'm not really sure what you're meaning by wrong format? As for the pic, I don't know how to disable the link - it's a little frustrating because I know my way around the html coding in myspace really well, but the same shortcuts often don't apply on a different site, as I discovered when I tried putting in the photobucket link area to disable it and it didn't work... Despite how this all sounds, I'm really not an idiot, I swear =P. But I would be grateful for any help you can give me =). Thanks again!

Reviewer: MonsieurRipper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2008 - 03:32 am Title: The Arachardim

hahaha "Are we not enjoyable company?"

Ah... I hope those two don't end up in any big personal trouble:(

:( I like Willow's brain where it is

Great story, keep it up ^.^

Reviewer: my_perfect_muse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2008 - 03:20 am Title: The Arachardim

Great update! Can't wait for more and I'm happy Spike and Buffy had such a sweet little moment.

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Date: 03/04/2008 - 11:07 pm Title: The Mall

So loving how everyone is reacting to the truths that have been revealed. And can I just give a big 'yay!' for Dawn pushing at Buffy. Good for her!

Now. Who the hell has Willow? Nice little cliffhanger, there. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 08:52 pm Title: The Mall

Same goes for this chapter (centered link) *copies to Word*
Apparently too much truth is indeed bad for the inhabits of Sunnydale.
At last Buffy answered Spike's question truthfully. He should keep trying to convince her though. Oh he will, I just read. Good that Dawn is helping Spike too. Buffy gets to know more about herself now.
Willow? Mmmm as if someone saw what she did (the spell) and is punishing her now.
Till next time, to find out.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 08:23 pm Title: JD and single malt whiskey

(First: close the 'center' and the link tag and the chapter won't be centered and a whole link for your banner *copies to word to read*)
Oh right, if someone asks Willow she has to answer truthfully and will be caught. LOL I thought she was clever but then I've read what Dawn did. Brat *ggg* but fun. I wonder how long Willow's distractions will work.

Reviewer: MonsieurRipper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 05:42 am Title: The Mall

Oh the suspense! What's happened to Willow??? Can't wait for my Spuffy lovin'

Reviewer: my_perfect_muse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 07:54 am Title: JD and single malt whiskey

*ROFL* This chapter was hilarious! Especially Dawn's inquisition of Buffy at the start... I just wish she would be nicer to Spike... can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 06:13 am Title: JD and single malt whiskey

Xander so bugs me when he gets on Anya's case like that! Loved the Dawn/Buffy sequence - very funny! Dawn totally cracked me up : )

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 03:57 am Title: JD and single malt whiskey

This chaos should be interesting. Good story and more please soon.

Reviewer: jess Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 02:43 am Title: JD and single malt whiskey

“I don’t know what I believe anymore. I don‘t think I want I believe it though.” huh?

Reviewer: MonsieurRipper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 11:15 pm Title: JD and single malt whiskey

I'm loving this story, I can't wait to see more things unfold with the truth spell. And I think Buffy's feelings around Spike right now are great, very realistic.

Keep it up and I'll keep the reviews coming muchacha XD

Reviewer: Lou Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2008 - 10:48 pm Title: JD and single malt whiskey

Truthful customer care at the mall? No wonder there's trouble!

Reviewer: Jama Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2008 - 10:28 pm Title: Uh Oh

I'm really enjoying this story, i had it on my radar for a while before i got a chance to read all 5 chaps. It's a good way to put out words in their mouths..

Keep up the great work

J

p.s. i laughed so hard when you had a line 'doubled tenfold', the whole idea of that was just too funny, although i'm sure it wasn't meant to be

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2008 - 09:53 pm Title: Uh Oh

Willow thinks she still can hide what she did; I guess it's only a matter of time till the other find out.
Especially when the spell is so big like the one she did.
I hope being honest will help Buffy, Spike and Dawn too to get along better, strengthen them. Because till know it still got Spike hurt, Buffy not believing him (or thinking it unimportant).

Reviewer: Tanit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 07:19 pm Title: Uh Oh

Such a wonderful story you have here.

I'd like to slap Buffy upside the head for being a raging bitch. Oh, sure, she got pulled out of heaven... but really, girl need a good shaking. And don't get me started on Willow! lol You've really got the character's down, well done.

Please continue, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Lou Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 06:20 pm Title: Uh Oh

At least the openness is good for Dawn and Buffy's relationship - I wonder how the rest of Sunnydale are coping!

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