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Reviewer: Jama Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2008 - 10:28 pm Title: Uh Oh

I'm really enjoying this story, i had it on my radar for a while before i got a chance to read all 5 chaps. It's a good way to put out words in their mouths..

Keep up the great work

J

p.s. i laughed so hard when you had a line 'doubled tenfold', the whole idea of that was just too funny, although i'm sure it wasn't meant to be

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2008 - 09:53 pm Title: Uh Oh

Willow thinks she still can hide what she did; I guess it's only a matter of time till the other find out.
Especially when the spell is so big like the one she did.
I hope being honest will help Buffy, Spike and Dawn too to get along better, strengthen them. Because till know it still got Spike hurt, Buffy not believing him (or thinking it unimportant).

Reviewer: Tanit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 07:19 pm Title: Uh Oh

Such a wonderful story you have here.

I'd like to slap Buffy upside the head for being a raging bitch. Oh, sure, she got pulled out of heaven... but really, girl need a good shaking. And don't get me started on Willow! lol You've really got the character's down, well done.

Please continue, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Lou Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 06:20 pm Title: Uh Oh

At least the openness is good for Dawn and Buffy's relationship - I wonder how the rest of Sunnydale are coping!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 06:04 pm Title: Uh Oh

Oh nice work! I'm still hoping for a lot more of jummy Spuffy action with the 'can't hold back the truth' tension - pretty please, with sugar on top??

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