Looks to me as if you don't know how to fix the wrong format in the chapter. Or take the link to Photobucket out of the link like it is done here with the icon. If you don't know what I'm talking about, just ask.
If you need to make the letters bigger and you can't is a bit annoying. Lucky one if you still have good eyes /*end ramble*
The Arachardim don't sound good, more like trouble. Glad they won't stay at Earth but bad that they want to take Willow with them and kill her.
Enjoyed the Spuffy moment.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your feedback for this fic so far =). As for my lousy formatting, you're right, I'm not really sure what is wrong with it. When I load up a chapter of my fic, it comes up fine (not centered) regardless of whether or not I'm signed in and the writing is the same size as that in other people's fics, so I'm not really sure what you're meaning by wrong format? As for the pic, I don't know how to disable the link - it's a little frustrating because I know my way around the html coding in myspace really well, but the same shortcuts often don't apply on a different site, as I discovered when I tried putting in the photobucket link area to disable it and it didn't work... Despite how this all sounds, I'm really not an idiot, I swear =P. But I would be grateful for any help you can give me =). Thanks again!

Great update! Can't wait for more and I'm happy Spike and Buffy had such a sweet little moment.