This chapter leaves me with so many questions, and I absolutely love that. Whatever fate has instore for William and Eizabeth is bound to be all kinds of interesting. Fantastic update as always!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Midnightgirl! Always happy to keep you guessing! : )

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE SAY THAT HE DOESNT TURN INTO A VAMPIRE AND RUN AWAY FROM HER!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that his journey goes well and that he comes back alright. also i totally dont understand susan and i really hope that nothing comes between them. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thank you, Sarah! Don't worry--I won't say what happens, but everything basically works out. Bad answer, I know. : ) Yep, Susan's not making a whole lot of sense to Elizabeth either. The girl likes her codes and riddles. They will make sense though, I promise!

Glad that the barn kept the demon away.
Oh and I see they found a way to kill some time *ggg*
Looking forward to more (like what that thing was that attacked them).

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Cordy! Killing time is always nice. : ) More info on the beastie coming up.

From terrifying fear, to grief and anguish, to love and passion, I think you did a great job of expressing all the different emotions that William and Elizabeth went through in this chapter. The journal entry has me a bit worried though, William's dream was definitely troubling. Wonderful update as always!

Author's Response: Thank you, Midnightgirl! Indeed, things are looking slightly ominous, but it'll basically be okay. Round-aboutly. lol. Really happy you enjoyed the chapter and a pleasure to hear back from you as always!

Oh my! Is this "difference" she feels... slayer-y? Hehehe. I can't wait for more! Loving every second of this. Seriously, I just ADORE it! And kudos to your writing-- last chapter terrified me, and when William told of Susan's death I must admit I cried... And fanfiction NEVER gets me going like that. I love this story!!!!

Author's Response: Slayer-y? Well...hmm. lol. It means so much to hear that you were moved by that scene. I cried over it too. : ) Thanks so much for all your feedback, Devin! *hugs*

I hadn't thought about the title of the story until it was mentioned in passing in this chapter. Dream time, stolen time, divorced from reality and all the harshness of it and it's true. Away in that cabin, away from the real, judgmental world or rules and propriety and dealing with things that Elizabeth had thought were only make-believe. This was a beautiful chapter and the way you've evolved the relationship with William and Buffy wonderfully. I look forward to more, even though I worry about these two when they are forced to wake up.

Author's Response: Hi Albie! Thank you for the insight into the title. That is indeed what I intended. Also dreamtime as one word is an aboriginal concept meaning past, present, and future existing in one time and place. Thanks for the lovely review! I'm really happy that you're enjoying the story!

Oh Yikes! And of course there's no more to read right now..... drat and blast! I loathe the dreaded cliffhanger, but I will try my utmost to be patient until your next update.

The creature reminds me of the Beast from AtS S4. I wouldn't leave the (supposedly) protective circle of salt if I were them. Oh wait, they didn't use salt, they used ashes. Huh. William could be sending Elizabeth running headlong into the critter's clutches but I suppose they've got to do *something*. Can't wait to find out more about this mystery monster.

Author's Response: I'm sorry for the suckiness of that cliffhanger--I'll try to update soon! The Beast parallel was intentional...this creature is quite similar. Actually they did use salt--the "ash" was in reference to the soil or lack thereof. But that's definitely confusing the way it's worded...Thank you so much for all the feedback, Thundercat! You rock!!

Whoo Hoo! A girl's first vamp dusting is a very special day.

Very touching diary excerpt, although I wonder how William knew it was Townsend that killed the child? Also, how would Townsend (or any vamp, for that matter) have gotten the baby? I presume it had been tucked up in bed and was not wandering outside after dark on it's own looking to become a vamp snack. No matter, still loving this story to pieces and determined to catch up fully despite knowing I'll have to endure the waits for more as you write it.

Author's Response: That's a good point about Townsend killing the baby...I actually do have an answer, though it shall be forthcoming. Thank you so much for the reviews! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. : )

Loved that the misunderstanding is now out of the way; and that they had some time for themselves, even only limited time. She didn't tell about her dream so we have to wait what it means, huh?
But what a cliffhanger.... hope you can update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Cordy! The dream will eventually make more sense...soon. : )

You did a wonderful job with the chilling closing scene. The William/Elizabeth interactions were also great, I'm so glad they found a bit of happiness before this new threat began. Loved the update!

Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing, Midnightgirl! Glad you enjoyed their peaceful interlude and I'm happy to hear that the last scene was creepy!

Lovely interlude, despite Giles' unfortunate timing.

Elizabeth is just blasting through all types of boundaries ~ her own and William's. Hard to imagine her going back to live within the strictures and mores of the town.

Author's Response: Indeed--she's entered her own world now--lengthening the gap between herself and her family. There might be some rough times ahead...

OMG I CANT BELIEVE THAT SOMETHINGS ATTACKING THEM!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that theyre getting closer and that he doesnt care about wat giles thinks. i really hope that spike and buffy are ok and that everything works out well. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thanks Sarah! I'm glad you're still liking the story! Update coming soon! : )

Loved the beginning of this chapter, glad their together now , but the way you describe the entity and the fear Elizabeth fells and william too , had my spine tingling , and I don't scare easily. Yor really a very ,very good writer, kudos.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Jo! Awesome! I creeped you out--that makes me really happy lol.