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Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2008 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 11

AWWW HOW SWEET, I LOVED THE KISS AND LOVE THAT SHES THINKING ABOUT IT!! i LOVE this story so much and am SOO happy that u updated. i thought it was so cute that he asked to kiss her and i thought it was a perfect kiss for them to have. im glad that hes training her and that hes opening up to her. i really hope that they continue to get closer and that the quotes that u always have from his diary are forshadowing her death or something like that becuase that would be awful. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read wat happens next. THANX SO MUCH

Author's Response: Thank you, Sarah! I'm happy you liked the kiss. Don't worry about anything bad happening--the fluffier part of the story will last for a while yet.

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 10

this was lovely! The image of William sitting among the gargoyles on the top of Notre Dame was gorgeous. I love this one.

Author's Response: Thanks, Puska! I could really picture William appreciating that view. : ) Happy to hear you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 10

Aww, this chapter was so romantic, the imagery of hilltop scene was simply beautiful. And I just loved that William shared his favorite spot with Elizabeth. Their conversation was also wonderful, especially William's heartfelt remark in french. Fantastic update! :D

Author's Response: Thank you, MidnightGirl! I'm happy you enjoyed their conversation, and I'm glad to hear that the atmosphere of the hilltop worked for you! Really appreciate all your comments : )

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 04:29 am Title: Chapter 10

AWWW HOW SWEET!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i LOVE what he said and that theyre getting closer. also im so glad that shes staying with him and that hes getting her out of her shell. i really hope that they kiss soon and that they get together. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Don't worry--I promise kisses soon! Thanks for the review, Sarah! I'm glad you're still enjoyiing it!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 03:40 am Title: Chapter 10

Yay! Cannot wait until Elizabeth begins her training (or at least the up-close and personal aspects of it). :P Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you, Devin! The first training sesion is coming up in the next chapter. Glad you're looking forward to it.! : )

Reviewer: Rakkle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 02:54 am Title: Chapter 10

A lovely chapter.
Glad she's adjusting to the idea of staying.
William's so lovely to her. Suspect the wooing may take some time after the whole kidnapping incident but she doesn't seem opposed to the idea.
Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, Rakkle! Yep, the wooing will be a bit of a slower process for them. I'm really happy you're liking the story!

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2008 - 12:46 am Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter! I really hope that Buffy can stay with William and Giles and not be sent back into the horrible living conditions back in town with her family. And maybe Dawn can be rescued, too!

I'm eager to find out what nasty secret Nathaniel is hiding by the way! I always felt there was something uber fishy about that ogre of a man.

Author's Response: Thank you, Serenity! Indeed, that ogre Nathaniel has a few tricks up his sleeve. : )

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2008 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 10

Now you made me curious what's the matter with Nathaniel ...
So Buffy is staying. She'll be happier there.
William's kind of training? Fun, especially when you're not fond of heights. :)
Loved William's French... it spoke volumes.

Author's Response: Nathaniel's whole story will be revealed eventually...Elizabeth will indeed find a nice escape with William. ..'m glad you liked the French! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2008 - 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 10

"I wish that you could stay with me forever."
Awwwww! So sweet and I wish that too. I am loving this story more and more with each new chapter. I love the subtle little connections to the regular buffyverse like Darla's appearance and now the mention of the Master. Excellent.

Author's Response: Thank you, Francine! I'm so happy that you're able to get into the world of these characters! More of the Master to come. : )

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2008 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 10

Je souhaite que vous resterez avec moi toujours...
Translation?
I wish that you stay with me always...
So sweet
(I didn't take four years of french in highschool for nothin')

Author's Response: Yep, I was a French-taking highschooler as well, though that was a while ago and my brain has since been overun by Italian...Actually my translation at the the end was off--I believe that should've been "would" instead of "could". Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 9

Really lovely new chapter. I'm enjoying the development between William and Elizabeth and learning even more about the characters as they get to know one another as well.

I'm curious how those back in the village are reacting to Elizabeth's disappearance. Then again, they are used to these disappearances at this point and I can see them writing it off as well. Even if Jenny and Dawn want to search her out, it's not as if they have more say in it. As Elizabeth thought, there would probably be no one looking for her and if she wants to get back, it would be up to her. Though, it doesn't look as if that's her priority right now.

Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, Albie! I'm glad to hear you liked the chapter. You will eventually discover what the townsfolk have been up to. Nice insight into Jenny and Dawn's situation.

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2008 - 05:03 am Title: Chapter 9

Wonderful story. You have a great talent. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you, Francine! I'm so happy you're enjoying the story! More to come soon. : )

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 9

NOOOO WHY DID GILES HAVE TO INTERRUPT!! THEY WERE ABOUT TO KISS, THEY SHOULD HAVE!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that spike and her got closer and that theyre bonding, i just wish that they had kissed. i hope that they dont brush it off and get together soon. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Don't worry, more kisses on the way. : ) I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks for the review, Sarah!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 9

AH!!! John Donne is my absolute FAVORITE poet of all time!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have no idea how much I adored this chapter. Every single bit of the literature mentioned is something I hold dear. But most especially John Donne!!!!!!!!! Forgive me my excitement, but I just started squealing uncontrollably the second John Donne was brough up. :) Adoring this fic, I knew it would be excellent the moment I read the summary. Can't wait for another update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Devin! I love Donne's work as well, and I thought he would be an appropriate favorite of William's. I'm so happy you enjoyed the literature discussion!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 9

Damn , did he have to walk in just then , I like the gradual way William and Elizabeth are getting closer, but that flashback at the beginning was a bit disturbing. Update again soon,

Author's Response: Oh stupid Giles...he won't walk in next time. : ) The flashback in the beginning is a disturbing situation...more details to come. I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thank you so much for the feedback!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 9

*shudder* Too cold for a swim. But it's more kind of a training for William, huh? But a little challenge can do a lot ;-)
But they go along really well :) It's a bit outside the world though, at the moment at last.
Bad timing for Giles to arrive (but this will cause more UST) ;-)
Rain, huh? Quick thinking but not true *gg*
More soon I hope :)

Author's Response: Definitely too cold! William is a little crazy and Elizabeth's just stubborn. : ) Rain...Indeed, he's such a bad liar...Yep, I had to linger a little on the UST before the ST. lol. More soon--I promise! Thanks for the review, Cordy!

Reviewer: Ann Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 11:44 am Title: Chapter 9

Wow!
I'm astonished! ..and MAD at you for leaving it there and for breaking the most beautiful moment - it had my whole body buzzing.
I just started reading your story today, I can't believe what I'd missed! Now I can't wait for the next chapter to come.
Sincerely, Ann

Author's Response: *hides* I'm sorry for leaving it there--I know it was a bit evil. But I'm so happy to hear that you were moved by that scene. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! More Spuffiness is on the way!

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 10:08 am Title: Chapter 9

Ha, giles is classic. This is really good. I love William and Buffy's interaction at the pond, very good. Nice!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Puska! Great to hear from you! Lol, oh Giles and his cluelessness...I'm glad you enjoyed their banter : )

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 07:16 am Title: Chapter 9

Loved watching them get closer and learning more about each other. They could have a good life together.
Too bad Giles came in when he did. We could have seen a lot of Spuffy heat coming to that cozy little cabin.
And Buffy would have had all the proof she needs to know where she belongs.
Please update quicker. It kills me to wait so long for the next chapter.

Author's Response: hehe in time. A cabin in the woods without Spuffy luvin' is just a waste of space. : ) I think a weekly update is all I can do for the time being, but I'm so happy to hear that you're really enjoying the story! I'll get back to it as soon as I can. Thank you!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 06:14 am Title: Chapter 9

Aww, it's a pity Giles ruined such a beautiful moment. Loved the Spuffy interaction throughout the chapter. Great update! :D

Author's Response: *slaps Giles* haha. I couldn't resiste a "Daddy's home" moment. More uninterrupted Spuffy to come. I'm gald you enjoyed the update! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 8

they are just too cute right now. I can see her staying with them for a little while. Elizabeth and William are going to be fun to watch go around each other..

Author's Response: Hi Letitia! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Yep Elizabeth will be around for quite a while : )

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 06:06 am Title: Chapter 8

I'm really loving the William/Elizabeth interaction, they play off each other beautifully. :D Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, MidnightGirl! I'm glad you're liking the developing relationship : )

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter 8


that was pretty good, the way Elzibeth decided to leave because she's brave and stupid. I like the moment the two had.

Author's Response: haha she is brave and stupid. I'm glad you enjoyed their moment! : )

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh you got me confuse a bit about your new name :)
And now I've lost my comment. What was it already...
William has no clue about Elizabeth's stubborn streak or he never told her to stay back alone.
But at last she wasn't useless in the fight, she had her share :)
Elizabeth taking care of William? Mmmm UST ;)
Enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: Oh I'm sorry for confusing you! I meant to put an "it's still me" in the author's notes but I guess I forgot. I'm happy you liked the chapter, and it's always great hearing from you!

Reviewer: PennyDrdful Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 8

I continue to enjoy this story immensely. I love seeing these two forced to deal with one another, and kind of figure out who they really are. Can't wait for your next update! I'm sure the rest of the townspeople will be forcing their way back in any moment now, whether they're wanted or not.

Author's Response: Thanks Penny! I'm really glad to hear that you're still enjoying the story. Those pesky townspeople will be back in a bit, but there will be a nice respite first.

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