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Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 8

AWWW THEY ARE SOO CUTE!! IM SO GLAD THAT HE SAVED HER AND THAT SHE SAVED HIM!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i love that spikes opening up to her and that shes starting to like him. i really hope that they continue to get closer and that she doesnt go back to the city. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thank you Sarah! More "opening up" to come. : ) I greatly appreciate all your comments!

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2008 - 12:51 am Title: Chapter 7

I love the depth you've woven into this story.
It's going to be hard for Buffy to go back to the repression of her home after this. And I also have to wonder if her family will take her back without a lot of doubt about her virginity after being away unchaperoned for so long.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Shadows! It will definitely be difficult for Elizabeth to just go home after all she's learned. And that's a good point about her family--it will indeed be a very complicated situation.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 7

*nods* with his sister being the Slayer William should have learned some things.
And Giles is (was) their watcher first before he became family. This Sukáyuw sounds like their own hellmouth there.
~ Enjoy your time off :)

Author's Response: Thank you, cordy! The field is indeed very hellmouthesque : )

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2008 - 04:11 am Title: Chapter 7

Wow, this was a great chapter! The whole explanation about his past, the Slayers and the evil place in the woods was brilliantly written. Eagerly awaiting more!

Author's Response: Thanks, serenity! I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter of backstory! It's great to hear that it was still interesting even with the long explanations...The next chap is currently in my beta's hands. : )

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter 7

“What’s a slayer?” hee
“Wow. Could you please get a little more poetically vague for me?” hee.

I like William. Things arn't simple

Author's Response: I've really enjoyed reading your comments GDO! Thanks so much for the feedback! No Andrew in the cards so far, but you never know. He might make an appearance : )

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter 6

Liz really is a spitfire. Ah, Giles, love Giles.

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter 5

peculiar, hee.
dreaming of the desert. I can imagine it.

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 4

I like to hear more of Elizabeth's parents. And is Andrew going to be in this fic?

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 - 12:41 am Title: Chapter 3

“Dizzy Lizzie.” hee

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter 2

Ok, Nathaniel is something else. Either a man of his times, or just a mean person.

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2008 - 12:27 am Title: Prologue/Chapter 1

ok, this sounds interresting.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2008 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 7

I really like the way their characters are developing and love the insight into Williams past . They both seem so lonely and living in that town among such repression is depressing, hopefully they can find some solace in each other. Update soon, you write very well.

Author's Response: Thank you, JO! I'm so happy that you're liking the story! Indeed, more bonding time to come now that Elizabeth can experience a taste a freedom.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2008 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter 7

OHHH I LOVE THAT THEYRE GETTING CLOSER AND I CANT BELIEVE THAT HIS SIS WAS A SLAYER!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im glad that things are gong well between buffy and william and that theyre starting to open up to each other. also im glad that she knows the evils that live in her world and can be more careful. i really hope that they continue to get closer and that she doesnt return to her home. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Sarah! I'm so happy to hear you're eager to read more and that you like the developing relationship! : )

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 09:18 am Title: Chapter 7

I enjoyed learning a bit more about William's past. I also enjoyed learning more about the village and the goings on in the countryside... the atmosphere of the story so fascinating. Loved the chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you--I'm glad that you found the backstory interesting!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 05:16 am Title: Chapter 7

This whole story is just so RICH! I'm loving every chapter, it's getting more in depth and exciting with each update. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks Devin! I was worried about this chapter being a little too talky, so I'm happy to hear you're still enjoying it!

Reviewer: PennyDrdful Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2008 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter 7

Love the new chapter and all the interaction between Elizabeth and William. Your description of the 'evil, grey bitter field' is really interesting and makes for an intriguing setup. It feels a bit like foreshadowing. Can't wait to see how the plot unfolds!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Penny! Haha I'm glad the bitter field was intriguing.

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2008 - 10:14 am Title: Chapter 6

That's just evil...leaving it there! Gah! I want more!

Author's Response: Aw I'm sorry for evilness, but spring break is coming up, which = more posting time! I'm so happy to hear that you want more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 - 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 6

Heh :) If Elizabeth had been a bit quicker she would have gone away. She is clever, almost tricked William.
Looking forward to the next morning; things will be a bit clearer by then for Buffy. The clothes belonged to William's sister. Sounds as if she was fighting vamps too and maybe died because of it.

Author's Response: hehe yep good guesses. : ) Thanks for the review, cordy!

Reviewer: Samara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 6

This is a fascinating story! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, Samara! I'm happy you're intrigued so far. : )

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 11:52 am Title: Chapter 6

My hunch was right, it was William! :D And wow, that was one exciting confrontation with Elizabeth... that girl definitely puts up one good fight. I can't wait for the upcoming Giles/Buffy/William talk. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: Indeed, Elizabeth is pretty good at fighting back. : ) Thanks for your comments--I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 07:33 am Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Djonie! I'm happy you're liking the story so far : )

Reviewer: djonie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 07:22 am Title: Prologue/Chapter 1

Good start! I'm looking forward to read the next chapters!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter 6

OHHHH I CANT BELIEVE IT WAS WILLIAM AND THAT HES WORKING WITH GILES!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i CANT believe that william took her and i hope that they grow closer. also i REALLY, REALLY hope that things work out and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read wat happens next. THANX

Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews, Sarah! I'm glad you're still enjoying it.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2008 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 5

OMG I CANT BELIEVE WAT SHE JUST SAW!!! I REALLY HOPE THAT THE GUY DOESNT HURT HER!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i LOVE that she had a dream about her feeling safe with william and that her mom was telling her that thats her destiny. i HATE riley, errr hes just sooo boring and i HOPE that he doesnt end up proposing. also i really hope that william and buffy meet again soon and connect. PLEASE update as soon as can, i CANT wait to read wat happens next. THANX

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Sarah! William/Buffiness is on the way!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2008 - 07:20 am Title: Chapter 5

There were so many interesting things going on in this chapter, especially the closing scene. I could be totally wrong but after re-reading the diary entries I think I might have an idea who was doing the slaying. ;) Can't wait to learn more about William. Great update!

Author's Response: I think you probably have the right hunch : ) Thanks for staying with the story!

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