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Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2008 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 5

OhMyGoodness! I just caught up on the past four chapters and I LOVE this story!!! Rev Nathaniel irritates the snot out of me, course I know he's only acting in accordance to the way things were back in those days.

As for Buffy marrying Riley...EW! I know he's suppose to be this great and wonderful man, but...geesh, boring much?

I cannot wait for the next chapter to find out what happens after her untimely shriek of horror. And, when will she and William finally spend more time together? Arg...the anticipation is driving me bananas! (But in a good way!)

~Serenity

Author's Response: I'm soo happy to hear you're loving the story, Serenity! Haha can you tell I'm not a big Riley fan?

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh!!! I can NOT make sense of this! And I love it! Can't wait to find out just what role William plays in this, and why Buffy was having (what I assume to be) a slayer dream. :) And those interesting "instincts." Please update soon!

Author's Response: Glad I could keep you guessing : ) Next chapter's coming up soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 5

Maybe Elizabeth didn't dream hearing the baby because there is indeed one missing.
Blue eyes? As if William saw her.
Elizabeth is used to her mother married out of love. No wonder she misses it with Riley, not knowing him.
And it seems this town has its own vampire slayer... and Buffy stumbled upon him.
~ Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your thoughtful responses, Cordy! I'm happy to hear that you're enjoying the story. Indeed William saw Elizabeth; some of his thoughts about her so far are in the diary excerpts. : )

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 4

So Elizabeth met William... and recognized him. I wonder if he noticed it too.
And if Buffy did only dream the crying baby.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 3

What a way to treat women... first how Lizzie was treated at the bible study, then Dawn not be aloud to go to school? I'm glad we live in better days now (at last able to go to school

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 2

Poor Lizzie... a totally new world for her that she doesn't know of and not knowing is her fault too? That doesn't make living there look good.
And strange occurrence .. I hope they won't blame her for the things too.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2008 - 09:23 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1

Interesting start (prologue). Glimpses of the past...
Babbling Dawn was cute; seems as if this is really a totally new world for Lizzie.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 08:35 am Title: Chapter 4

I love all the detail you put into your writing, the scenes really come to life for me. All the new info about William, and the rumors spirling around the town are so fascinating, I look forward seeing where things go from here. Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks MidnightGirl! I'm glad you're intrigued by the rumors. Some answers are coming soon : )

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 05:20 am Title: Chapter 4

Eerie! I can NOT wait for more from this! Eagerly looking forward to an update. :) This fic is very compelling and original. Loving it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Devin! I'm happy you're enjoying the story and even happier that I could be a motivater! I love the name Nathaniel as well--it's actually my nephew's name which is probably why it was on my mind. : ) Great hearing from you!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 04:58 am Title: Chapter 2

The plot thickens! Poor Elizabeth. It's my greatest fear to be shoved into a horrid situation like hers. Poor darling! :( You wrote her frustration and hopelessness very well. Reading on!

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 04:36 am Title: Prologue/Chapter 1

The day I saw this fic get put up I meant to read it, but I haven't had a chance until tonight!!! :) Love how it's started, absolutely LOVE the premise, and you used the name "Nathaniel!!!" It's my absolute favorite boy name! :) Trivial, and I sense he may be slightly villanous, but whateverrrr. Can't wait to see what happens next! (I'm not going to read on right away because I'm going to do some things and keep thinking about this fic to motivate me to finish them more quickly... I'm a nerd.)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter 4

OHH I LOVE HOW WILLIAM WAS INTRODUCED, IT WAS PERFECT!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i LOVE that william is the outsider and that they both share the idea of not fitting in. also i like that there is mystery about him and that she feels like shes seen him before. i CANT wait to read wen they meet again and i hope that thayre able to get closer. also i hope that we learn more about him and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thanks Sarah! I'm glad you're still liking the story. A seond meeting is coming up soon!

Reviewer: PennyDrdful Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ooh, bodies rising up over in Raven Pond; mysterious William Wells; poor Buffy and her crazy strict new family. This is such an intriguing setup you have going on here! Your environment is pretty well done, too. Not all period pieces are believable, but I'm not having any problem just slipping into colonial times. It's great to see Dawn and Tara around. Loved your descriptions of Spike in this chapter. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks for the reassurance! Writing period stuff makes me a little nervous, so I'm happy to hear it's coming off as believable. : )

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter 3

LOVED THIS CHAPTER, IM SO GLAD THAT SHES MAKING FRIENDS AND BONDING WITH DAWN!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i CANT believe that her dad wont lt her go to school, he really is a bastard, but i guess i have to remember the time and place in which the stories set, men were like that back then. i REALLY hope that buffy begins to find more friends and that she meets spike soon enough. also i hope that wen they meet things go well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: William/Spike's on the way! There will be happiness with a good dose of angst...Thanks for the kind reviews : )

Reviewer: erin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter 3

This story seems very promising and I am eager to read more and see how it develops!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 3

this story looks very promising, I am eager to see how it develops!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I really appreciate your comment!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 3

Loved Tara's introduction into the story, I think it's great that Buffy made a new friend. :D
I also think it's nice of Buffy to teach Dawn to read, but I gotta say I'm really worried about the consequences if the secret gets out. Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: There are always consequences...Glad you're still liking it!

Reviewer: BroadwayBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 04:27 am Title: Prologue/Chapter 1

As soon as I read your summary I knew it sounded like Witch of Blackbird pond, which was my favorite book as a child! Fantastic start!

Author's Response: Thank you! I loved the book as well--mostly it will just be the beginning chapters of Dreamtime that will draw inspiration from the novel.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter 3

I just read all three chapters all at once and was pleasantly surpised by how appealing I found it to be. Initially I wasn't really interested in reading about the Puritans (I'm afraid that I share Buffy's attitude toward them) but find this story to be very intriguing. I look forward to seeing more updates!

Author's Response: The Puritan society will fade into the background as the story progresses, I promise! Thank you for giving it a chance!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2008 - 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

OMG WAT AN ASS!! I CANT WAIT UNTIL SHE MEETS SPIKE/WILLAIM, THE SHE CAN FINALLY FIND SOMEONE NOT SO STUCK-UP!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that i started reading it. the character development is amazing and i love the plot, its soo original. i really hope that buffy doesnt get into too much trouble and that her and william/spike meet soon. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thanks Sarah, I'm happy you're enjoying it! William's coming soon! : )

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2008 - 06:58 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1

LOVE IT SO FAR, CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2008 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love historical dramas, and this one is off to a great start!
I'm feeling so bad for Buffy right now, seems that so far Dawn's presence is the only bright spot in her life. I look forward to seeing where things go from here, looks like it's going to be quite an interesting ride. :D

Author's Response: Yep trying to adjust to a new life will be a bit rough for Elizabeth . Silly Puritans : ) Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2008 - 04:07 am Title: Prologue/Chapter 1

Interesting so far, can't wait to read more. Love your writing style, I have an affection for well described scenery! Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you like it so far.

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