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Reviewer: dampersandspoons Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 24

Ok...so now I'm freaking bawling. This chapter was gorgeous and yes, it was filled with so much heart ache and hope and desperation, but it was so wonderfully written that I'm in awe and crying like an idiot. Oh, you HAVE to update soon. I'm just in love with this! Bravo, bravo!!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much, dampersandspoons! I'm so happy that you were moved by the chapter! Your kind words inspire the muse : )

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 24

William's journal entry was very insightful, darn that Giles and his so-called good intentions. I'm glad William sees things clearly now.
Wow! Elizabeth's labor was definitely harrowing, a real nailbiter to the end, thank goodness Elijah made it. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, MidnightGirl! Giles is defintely obtuse in his good intentions. Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 07:25 am Title: Chapter 24

Poor Buffy - that was a hard labour! And no William! He has to get there soon. I hope they can hide the fact that the baby has been born for a few days. Give her some time to recover before anything happens. And the baby needs her, not a wet-nurse.

More soon, please!!

Author's Response: Buffy certainly had it rough--but you know, makes for better drama. : ) William's on his way! Thanks for the review, IT!

Reviewer: dampersandspoons Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 06:49 am Title: Chapter 21

I knew it! I just knew Nathan was behind that guardian! *clenches fists* Such a heartbreaking chapter and I'm so sad for Elizabeth. What a difficult choice for her to make, I only hope it doesn't come back to torture her more than she's already endured. Lovely ending with the blood, however bitter sweet it may have been. It was a nice nod to who they are and the bond they share. Still enjoying the hell out of this! And now I have to sleep before I pass out. It is well past my bed time! Look what you did to me, haha!

Author's Response: haha yep--evil Reverend all along! I'm glad you enjoyed the bonding scene. Also flattered to hear that you lost some sleep lol. Thank you so much for reviewing! It really is a pleasure to hear from you : )

Reviewer: Thundercat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2008 - 04:26 am Title: Chapter 24

Oh! That was killer. What a chapter! Thankfully ending with a live birth, but now I'm scared of how quickly Elizabeth will be forced to meet her fate.

I'm unsure if the visions in her dreams mean that William is enroute or that he somehow is still in England, unable to find passage. And the flashes of Spike in Elizabeth's visions are just heartbreaking.

Moving to L.A. ~ I wish I had the balls (and the bucks) to do that. Safe travels and I'll wait as patiently as possible for the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks, Thundercat! Glad you liked the chap! As far as William being en route...that's explained in the next update...haha maybe I have the balls (or it could also be reckless stupidity) but the bucks, hmm not so much lol. Always glad to hear from you!

Reviewer: dampersandspoons Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2008 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 10

I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed until this chapter but I've been so engrossed that I couldn't pause! This is breathtaking, sweet and romantic. It's sating the little historical romantic within me and it's still so Spike and Buffy that I'm just in love! What a wonderful concept and I'm already brimming with theories but afraid of thinking on it too long in case I spoil it! Just had to stop and say thank you for writing such a wonderful story and now I must finish it!!

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much, dampersandspoons! I'm so happy to hear from you, because I really admire and love all your work! I need to get back to my reading soon and catch up with all your wonderful stories : ) I'm so glad to hear that you're enjoying Dreamtime! Intrigued by your theories : )

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2008 - 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 23

Yay!! Some good new for Elizabeth, for once! I'm sorry I missed a few chapters while reviewing, but my boyfriend came up from Orange County and I haven't had much time for fanfiction. :P But reading everything today was SO exciting. I can't wait to find out what Giles and Spike are to do, but I'm so afraid... that "character death" warning just keeps on looming forebodingly. I love your story and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks, Devin! Great to hear from you again! Things are looking brighter for Elizabeth for the time being...Hope you're having fun with your boy : )

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 23

So somebody sent a warning to William. If he won't hurry he'll be too late anyway. It looks bad for Buffy.
Fred is a bit of help, that's right. Especially for the baby. Being in that prison is bad for it.
Hopefully things will get better; and good luck for you.

Author's Response: Very true--William needs to get his butt over there! : ) Fred will definitely be a big help. Thanks so much for the review and for the luck!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 23

AWW HOW SWEET, IM SO GLAD THAT FRED HELPED HER!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i CANT believe that william hasnt come to get her yet and i hope that it happens soon. also i hope that william and her and the baby are able to live together and are happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Aw thanks Sarah! I'm happy you like Fred. William will be back soon : )

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 23

Hmm... Fred is really an interesting character, her attitude and manner of speech make me very curious to learn more about her. I'm extremely glad she showed up. Good update!

Author's Response: Fred has a different background--you'll learn more about her next chapter. I'm glad you're curious! Thanks so much for reviewing! : )

Reviewer: Edgehead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 23

Damn...where is he?...He can't leave her all alone in this terrible town...!!!!!
I hope you fix this soon...I can't stand this any longer!

Author's Response: He's detained, but he'll be back soon--I promise! Thanks for the review, Edgehead! : )

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 03:32 am Title: Chapter 23

Wow, I really hate Tara. Love Fred though and curious as to what is holding up William and Giles. Quite shocked with what Aunt Jenny told about Buffy's dad. Poor Buffy, things just keep getting piled on her.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Francine! Some info on the William/Giles situation is coming up. Thanks for mentioning the Jenny conversation--that was defintely quite a turning point for Elizabeth.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2008 - 12:21 am Title: Chapter 23

Poor Buffy. There's some hope, though, right? I will be easier for William to help her escape from a house than from a jail. But that could also put Winnifred in a very dangerous position. Keep Fred safe, please!

It sounds like William has to listen to the beggar woman instead of Giles. I hope he gets there soon! He will probably need Giles' help, though; escaping with a heavily pregnant Buffy will not be easy or quick!

Thanks for the update. Hope you can get in one more update before apartment hunting. If not, good luck with finding something nice!

Author's Response: Buffy's defintely in a crappy situation--but there's always hope! Don't worry, I'll protect Fred : ) Thanks so much for the review and for the good luck! It's much appreciated!

Reviewer: Thundercat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 23

Good luck with apartment hunting! May I ask what city you're moving to?

Yay, Fred makes an appearance! So glad that Elizabeth will get a respite from the jail cell. Will they post a guard on the Burkle house or how will they ensure she doesn't escape?

And William, what are you doing out strolling the banks of the Thames with your mates? Get your butt back on a ship and across the pond ASAP! Glad that Elizabeth is pissed at Giles ~ what has *he* been up to in London and has he forgotten all about the plan to return for Elizabeth?

Author's Response: Thanks for the good luck, Thundercat! I'm moving to Los Angeles, which will be a big change for an east coast girl. : ) Basically, Fred is going to be completely responsible for Elizabeth--so if she were to escape, the Burkle family would face the consequences...After reading your comment about William's stroll (lol) I realized that the situation sounded more callous than it actually is. William is working on the Thames--so I went back and threw that in there. : ) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 22

LOL LOVE THAT U USED THE CRUCIBLE STORY LINE. i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. im so sad that nathans starting this again and i hope that giles comes back to kick his ass. also i hope that tara or buffy dont get hurt and that william comes back for her soon. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more. THANX

Author's Response: haha yes...call it an homage. It will only be referenced that one time. Thank you for the review, Sarah! I'm glad you're still enjoying th story!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh no.... enjoyed reading about Elizabeth's life. But what a turn of events...
Not only managed she to kill the vamp, Tara accused her. It looks very bad for Buffy now. :((
What a cliffhanger.

Author's Response: Things defintely look a little dark for the moment, but the next chapter will end on a more uplifting note. Thank you so much for the review, cordykitten!

Reviewer: Thundercat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh Tara! Why oh why did you name Elizabeth?

Dawn's no dummy. Glad that she confronted Elizabeth and ot her to somewhat vlear the air.

Went back and re-read the prologue based on your comment from last chapter, and now I an excited by how much more there is to this tale and anticipating how it will develop.

Hurry back William!

Author's Response: Yep, Dawn is smarter than everyone gives her credit for...I'm glad to hear that you revisited the prologue to put some pieces together. William will be back soon : ) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 22

I really enjoyed catching up with Elizabeth's life at the beginning of the chapter. Taking the sentimental journey with her as she revisited her time with William was so beautifully bittersweet, especially when she visited Susan's grave. *sighs* Those two could've been so happy together if outside forces hadn't torn them apart. :( And wow... what an explosive closing scene. Can't wait to find out if someone comes to Elizabeth's rescue. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, MidnightGirl! I'm glad you enjoyed Elizabeth's journey and moments of intospection...conclusion to the cliffie's coming up soon : )

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 22

Tara nooooooooooooo. Now they are also going to think Buffy's baby is the devil's spawn when they find out she is pregnant. :( sad. I'm still loving this story! Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Thank you, Neomebuffy! I'm really happy you're still enjoying! Yep, some tough times are still ahead...

Reviewer: Edgehead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 09:48 am Title: Chapter 22

I can't believe it...why did she Tara tell them Buffys name?
Good God I hope that everything will be alright.


Author's Response: Well that was just a moment of sheer panic for Tara--not necessarily anything vindictive toward Elizabeth...Thanks for reviewing, Edgehead! : )

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 08:03 am Title: Chapter 22

Argh! What an evil, evil cliffie!!!!!!!!

Now, of course, Buffy has to admit that she's pregnant so that she doesn't get hanged before William and Giles get back. Like Giles said, the baby's an innocent, so nothing can be done until it's born.

Oh, what a tangled web you weave! More soon, please?!!

Author's Response: Thanks, IT! Yup, that's the situation in a nutshell. Actually, another update is coming up later today. I'm so glad that you're still enjoying!

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 07:58 am Title: Chapter 22

OH NO! Tara, why'd you do it?! There's a good explanation, right? Poor Buffy!

Author's Response: Tara just panicked, basically. Someone was threatening her life if she didn't name someone, she happened to see Elizabeth, and just blurted out a name. In the Salem trials, the same things happened--friends accused friends to save themselves. It's base survival instinct essentially...Thanks for the review, Serenity! : )

Reviewer: Louise Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 07:31 am Title: Chapter 22

cliffhanger, cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing, Louise! I'm so happy to hear that you're looking forward to more! : )

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 21

No prob, that was nothing. It was Edgehead that did the work. :) And a good one.
OH! Didn't expect that (Nathan and Giles = brothers).
*sigh* It sounds like a good plan and I'm glad William and Giles got away. But I fear thinks won't be that easy for Elizabeth. Especially when the others get to know that she is pregnant.
More soon I hope.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Cordy! Glad you were surprised by the brothers bit. Elizabeth is in for some more trying times unfortunately. I'll update sooner next time : )

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2008 - 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 21

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD GILES TELL HER TO KEEP THE PREGNANCY FROM WILLIAM!! HE BETTER NOT BE TURNED AND NOT COME BACK FOR HER! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i CANT believe that giles made her stay and they BETTER come back for her. i really hope that william and buffy end up together and that he comes back for her and they can be a happy family. also i hope that nothing happens to william and that hes not turned and that nothing happens to buffy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING like aways to read wat happens next. THANX

Author's Response: Lol I like your emphatic response! Giles defintely has some of his own issues going on, which will come out a bit later. As far as your hopes...I can neither confirm nor deny : ) I'm so happy you're still enjoying, and thank you muchly for the review!

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