Reviews For Turn Back Time
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Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2008 - 05:01 am Title: The Light

Hi, Candie. I'm getting ready to start the beta work on chapter two for you now.

I noticed at least one spot that you missed for my beta of this first chapter here:

Spike was the one that I needed right here right now but instead, he's gone just like the rest of my world, and just like all the men -, if you could call them that - , before him.

Take out those commas. You don't need both the - and the ,
: )

I applaud your willingness to learn and approve.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll get right on it ^.^ V

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 08:09 pm Title: The Light

Indeed turn back time. If Buffy succeeds she'll save some lives :) Especially Spike's.
Till next part.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! I would like to thank you for all your lovely reveiws! BIG HUGS! Candie

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 - 01:01 am Title: The Light

Lovely start. The promise of romance, and a great Time Travel epic thrown into the mix- what could be better?
Hope there's more to come!

Author's Response: Thanks SO much! and there will be more and next time it will be with Spike YAY! LOL thanks for your review! Hugs! Candie

Reviewer: Blackoberst Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 09:17 pm Title: The Light

I always like the time-travel fics. And from what I've seen so far this has potential. So go with it! And please, make them happy!

Author's Response: That was the whole point! lol! I always thought that it was sad when Buffy died and all that so I wanted to write how I think the show should of been like or how they shouldof ended it! Thanks for your review! I'm glad you think it has ponential! Lets see where it ends up! hugs! Candie

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